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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
vedika 
i m crying now really crying 
i dont know wht to say 
its really hear touching 
i feel pain in my heart when i was read every word n feel the pain and scarenes of arjun n arohi
but happy with ending cuz they live after death . 

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
i am speechless.truly love is immortal.i hd only heard the line tht my heartbeat hs hr name writtn on it.bt tody gt one gd example of it.
beautifully writtn.rare masterpiece!!!

Edited by florine_20 - 04 January 2012 at 4:34am
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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -vrshn-

did you have to make me cry early in the morning?? 


Awww Varsh... i didnt mean to make you cry early in the morning...

Originally posted by -vrshn-

i thought i would come again to comment...

but now after coming back i feel like crying at the sight of the word 'heart beat'

its just too amazing...and haunting my senses so completely like i feel i have lost someone very spl...

i just cannot think abt anything else...


Thanks for the wonderful comment Varsh... I'm glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky.padda

oh my god i cant stop crying absolutely beautiful


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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmnaIsh

My darling Veds - i remember the day i proof read your original FF and look how time flies..This was SUCH a splendid piece of writing, though sad...Clap.!! marvelous play of emotions, and as i told you before your sense of description and depicting emotion was fantastic..i'm so proud of you..!!! keep writing.. Hug


Thanks Di.. Thank you sooo much... I'm sooo glad that you liked it and that i made you proud it really means a lot to me... i would have not been here writing if you would have not helped me... Thanks Di... Thanks a ton...Hug
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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsSweetheart96


Sorry for commenting so late.. Let me get to the story now..

Beautiful name.. Heartbeat.. (reminds me of Kal Ho Na Ho) :)

I love the setting of the airport.. I love stories at airports.. i am weird but cnt help it.. Lol Sanju dis is not weird...

Umm.. Relationship started with hate.. I am loving this already.. I really liked the story telling nd the way Arjun analysed their feelings nd the way they would both argue with each other but then eventually they started getting along.. :)

It was so cute that they both knew their feelings for each other nd it was adorable the way arjun came all the way to her apartment to say those 3 beautiful words to her.. nd she said them back.. aww.. :)

"You see this? This beats only for her. Every beat, every breath of mine has her name written on it; she's everything to me; my love, my life, my Heartbeat." - i love this dialogue Thanks Embarrassed

Aaw.. thats so sad.. she leaves him.. and she's got a heart disease nd theres no chance of survival :( i kinda knew that wud link because Pawan is a heart specialist. Ya it was easy to guess :)

Im so happy that Pawan told Arjun.. he had to find out one way or the other.. :)

I really love all the dialogues that Arjun spoke in hospital..
"This beats for you Arohi, only you and it will beat till the day this beats"
"My each and every breath has written your name on it
"The day you'll die will also be the day I'll die. The moment you'll take the last breathe will be the same moment I'll take my last breathe...
Truly amazing dialogues.. i really love them Veds.. Thanks Again I'm glad you liked the dialogues...

I love Arjun.. he is so sweet.. still prepared to marry Arohi.. and the wedding ceremony was really cute.. loved it nd the way Arjun cared for her was super-sweet :)

The way he took care of her, woke her up in the morning, cooked for her, fed her, put her to sleep, everything was so sweet.. loved it so much.. it was too cute.. :)

I love the way you used the KMH title song.. loved it.. :)

Its sad that they both died but then they died together which was something that means a lot.. true love stories never end.. Yeah True...

U knw this reminded me of a dialogue from the film Mohabbatein, ' Mohabbat bhi zindagi ki tarah hoti hai, har mod aasan nahi hota, har mod par khushi nahi milti... Par jab hum zindagi ka saath nahi chodte to hum mohabbat ka saath kyon chhode." 

Nd also something else from that same film, 'Mar Bhi Jaaye Pyar Wale Mit Bhi Jaaye Yaar Wale Zinda Rehti Hai Unki Mohabbatein'

Dnt knw why im thinking of SRK films today but this story really made me think of these quotes. :)

This story was truly beautiful and was written exceptionally well.. the feelings nd the description nd emotions nd everything was depicted in a beautiful well.. Veds this is an amazing love story.. thank you for sharing this journey with us.. this story made me cry but was beautiful all in itself.. Clap beautiful.. absolutely beautiful Clap



Thanks Sanju for such a wonderful comment you left me speechless... I'm glad you like it... Hug

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kitanithuy

it really a beautiful and sad love story . while reading this os ,i cried and my heartbeat fast .

amazing update.


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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by justprati

i m lyk out of words...
a tear drop slid down my eyes n its d 1st time i felt sth lyk this
very sweet n cute luvstory
great job buddy
keep writing more


Aww Thanks..

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