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~|| HEARTBEAT ||~ [OS/SS] [THANKS NOTE: PG 7] (Page 5)

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
i thought i would come again to comment...

but now after coming back i feel like crying at the sight of the word 'heart beat'

its just too amazing...and haunting my senses so completely like i feel i have lost someone very spl...

i just cannot think abt anything else...

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
oh my god i cant stop crying absolutely beautiful

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
waoo bes thng to c in d mng..leme read t

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
My darling Veds - i remember the day i proof read your original FF and look how time flies..This was SUCH a splendid piece of writing, though sad...Clap.!! marvelous play of emotions, and as i told you before your sense of description and depicting emotion was fantastic..i'm so proud of you..!!! keep writing.. Hug

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 6:52pm | IP Logged

Sorry for commenting so late.. Let me get to the story now..

Beautiful name.. Heartbeat.. (reminds me of Kal Ho Na Ho)

I love the setting of the airport.. I love stories at airports.. i am weird but cnt help it..

Umm.. Relationship started with hate.. I am loving this already.. I really liked the story telling nd the way Arjun analysed their feelings nd the way they would both argue with each other but then eventually they started getting along..

It was so cute that they both knew their feelings for each other nd it was adorable the way arjun came all the way to her apartment to say those 3 beautiful words to her.. nd she said them back.. aww..

"You see this? This beats only for her. Every beat, every breath of mine has her name written on it; she's everything to me; my love, my life, my Heartbeat." - i love this dialogue

Aaw.. thats so sad.. she leaves him.. and she's got a heart disease nd theres no chance of survival :( i kinda knew that wud link because Pawan is a heart specialist.

Im so happy that Pawan told Arjun.. he had to find out one way or the other..

I really love all the dialogues that Arjun spoke in hospital..
"This beats for you Arohi, only you and it will beat till the day this beats"
"My each and every breath has written your name on it
"The day you'll die will also be the day I'll die. The moment you'll take the last breathe will be the same moment I'll take my last breatheā€¦
Truly amazing dialogues.. i really love them Veds..

I love Arjun.. he is so sweet.. still prepared to marry Arohi.. and the wedding ceremony was really cute.. loved it nd the way Arjun cared for her was super-sweet

The way he took care of her, woke her up in the morning, cooked for her, fed her, put her to sleep, everything was so sweet.. loved it so much.. it was too cute..

I love the way you used the KMH title song.. loved it..

Its sad that they both died but then they died together which was something that means a lot.. true love stories never end..

U knw this reminded me of a dialogue from the film Mohabbatein, ' Mohabbat bhi zindagi ki tarah hoti hai, har mod aasan nahi hota, har mod par khushi nahi milti... Par jab hum zindagi ka saath nahi chodte to hum mohabbat ka saath kyon chhode." 

Nd also something else from that same film, 'Mar Bhi Jaaye Pyar Wale Mit Bhi Jaaye Yaar Wale Zinda Rehti Hai Unki Mohabbatein'

Dnt knw why im thinking of SRK films today but this story really made me think of these quotes.

This story was truly beautiful and was written exceptionally well.. the feelings nd the description nd emotions nd everything was depicted in a beautiful well.. Veds this is an amazing love story.. thank you for sharing this journey with us.. this story made me cry but was beautiful all in itself.. Clap beautiful.. absolutely beautiful Clap

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 6:54pm | IP Logged

it really a beautiful and sad love story . while reading this os ,i cried and my heartbeat fast .

amazing update.

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
i m lyk out of words...
a tear drop slid down my eyes n its d 1st time i felt sth lyk this
very sweet n cute luvstory
great job buddy
keep writing more

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Ian in tears after reading this no words to explain

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