Afsar Bitiya

   

Prishna FF (continued..)

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 8

Page 1
Page   of 8
Page 2 Page 8

TazLuvArShiAsYa

Goldie

TazLuvArShiAsYa

Joined: 03 September 2011

Posts: 1156

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged

1st of all srry guyz i dnt noe hindi much cz i am frm U.S.A but i am indian so some of the things might nt seem 2 make sense srry bout tht! i couldnt wait so i posted this now N the words i dnt noe in hindi i'll say it in english ok? Enjoy write ur cmments n ur story underneath my ok? Then we'll hve a contest whose story ws the best k? N every1 hs 1 week (7 days only) 2 write a story underneath my after tht no mre entries n we'll start a new competition k?

*Krishna's House*

It was really brezzy n also started 2 rain slowly. Swati di Chanchal and me were taking all the clothes that was outside in our house. Ravi bhaiya and dad was busy talking the heavy things inside the clock striked 8:00 a.m.

Krishna: "Hey bhagwan hum toh ajj coaching class ki liye late he ho jayenge! Humai abhi nikaal na hoga."

Mom: "Krishna kaha ja rahe ho?"

Krishna: "Coaching ma"

Dad: "Bitiya chalo ajj hum tum hai chor attai hai"

Krishna: "nahi papa hum chale gayenge"

Krishna went without an umbrella n the wind ws stronger so strong tht she couldnt even move

*Pintu's House*

Babloo: Pintu! Pintu wuto(Get up) ! Yaad toh hai na ki ajj bhi humai coaching ja na hai!

Pintu: Bhaiya dekho na ajj toh bohat windy hai and it's raining 2 q na hum ajj coaching na jayi.

Babloo: Nahi i will count till 3 n u have 2 get up "1...2..."

Pintu: Thik hai hum ready ho tai hai.

Babloo went in a car n as usual Pintu went in his motorcycle n this time he didnt forget to get 2 helmets as he remembered wt Krishna said so then while Pintu ws going he saw Krishna n he went up 2 krishna in his motorcycle as he saw how Krishna was all wet and couldnt walk faster

"Be-beep! Be-beep!" Pintu pressed the horn krishna looked back n saw Pintu so she started walking again. Pintu came in front of her

Pintu: "Ao hum tum hai coaching lai chaltai hai hum bhi toh waha he ja rahe hai"

Krishna: "nahi hum chud chale jayengi"

Pintu: "Tumhari wish hum toh is liye kah rehti taki apko late na ho gai. Or hum aj doh helmet bhi layi agar tum chaho toh pahen sakti ho"

Krishna had no choice as she ws worried she might get late so she put the helmet on n sat behind Pintu n on the way Pintu was talking while Krishna was ignoring him.

Wen they reached the coaching Babloo saw Krishna behind Pintu n came out n said

Babloo: "Pintu phele baar humai asa lag rahe hai ki tum koi acha kaam kiya hai"

Then Krishna said "Thank u"

End of 1 episode TO BE CONTINUED...

GuYz all the episodes tht i write is gnna b posted in this thread k?


Edited by sukirti415 - 05 March 2012 at 3:13pm

The following 17 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouchNivRen_1radevfanitalyshaazishootingstar27ParulRatiShivi~Simz~Laila2009AngeloScuro-SilverDragon-moniluvskinshukmanzilmukultaahir004Prishna_DBPS-Araina--ExceptioalMe--abhi-pundir-

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Prishna FF (continued..)" in Afsar Bitiya forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Prishna_DBPS

IF-Sizzlerz

Prishna_DBPS

Joined: 21 March 2007

Posts: 17293

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
Wow beautiful I liked it you are gonna continue it na.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

TazLuvArShiAsYa

Goldie

TazLuvArShiAsYa

Joined: 03 September 2011

Posts: 1156

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cutie-NivRen

Wow beautiful I liked it you are gonna continue it na.
if there is a lot of likes perhaps 5 likes then i'll continue it n thank u

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

-Araina-

IF-Stunnerz

-Araina-

Joined: 15 December 2010

Posts: 37987

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Nice indeed. I'll try to read the parts as you post but can't promise to be regular reader and commenter Embarrassed But do continue for other's sake :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

Prishna_DBPS

IF-Sizzlerz

Prishna_DBPS

Joined: 21 March 2007

Posts: 17293

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukirti415

Originally posted by Cutie-NivRen

Wow beautiful I liked it you are gonna continue it na.
if there is a lot of likes perhaps 5 likes then i'll continue it n thank u
Please Do continue as I am sure there will be many likes don't worry about that

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

KinSanj

IF-Stunnerz

KinSanj

BollyCurry Buzzer

Joined: 10 March 2006

Posts: 33883

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Very nicely written :)

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouchKinny_LoverSanihaKaKinshuk

shaazi

IF-Dazzler

shaazi

Joined: 04 January 2010

Posts: 4997

Posted: 01 January 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
nice episode...hope to see krishna pintu bike scene in the show  as well

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

moniluvskinshuk

IF-Sizzlerz

moniluvskinshuk

Joined: 12 November 2009

Posts: 22291

Posted: 01 January 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Very nice dear . Plzzz continue . Would love 2 read it Big smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

aruntouch

Post Reply New Post

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.