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FF - A Little Fantasy *Chap 4 ; Pg 11*

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Hey guys! I am Maisooma or Mais for short. So I've decided to start a ManVeer FF. It's actually my 3rd FF that I am starting on I-F. I never actually completed the other two even though I loved their story. Well that's because I am super lazy. BUT this time I have DECIDED that I WILL complete this FF (it's my new year resolution Tongue) The whole idea just struck me while watching "Tangled", my most favorite Disney movie EVER, so you will see how this FF is heavily inspired from it with many scenes taken directly from the movie (though I would try to avoid that as much as I can, promise!) Well, here I go!!  Please ignore all spelling and grammar error, I am not a very good writer LOL Oh and also! Hit like if you want to be PMed for the updates!

ManVeer

A Little Fantasy

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Introduction

Long ago, in a land not-so-far away lived five wise men. Those men were the best of friends. To the world they were just the usual five old men who had the solution to every problem but in reality they were five very powerful sorcerers with great power.

One day, the eldest to the five bid adieu to his loyal friends and welcomed Death to take him away to the Mysterious Land. The farewell of their friend greatly saddened the remaining four but they respected his decision. So, before burying the mortal body of their friends, they took out a small portion of his wise soul and kept it safe.

One after the other, the remaining friends gave up their mortal lives to become eternal until only one was left. The youngest and the kindest of the five collected all their souls after burying his friends. He traveled to a kingdom where a kind king ruled wisely over his people. He presented the now merged souls to the king as a present. He blessed the king and all his generations to come to be the owners of that great knowledge of his friends. But in exchange, the king had to promise to keep that a secret for the souls held within them a terrible power. The king agreed and the last friend, free from his duties gladly said goodbye to the world and joined his friends in Eternity.


Well yeah, that's the myth. But that's now what this story is about. I mean, who would want to know this kind of thing in the 21st century? This story is actually about a girl and a guy. They met, they fell in love and they lived happily ever after. Well actually a lot of things happened between this as well. But that's the basic soul of this story. Kinda like a fairytale. Beautiful distressed princess, a charming savior; you get the flow? So yeah, it is actually a fairytale...of modern sorts.

And what's a fairytale without a little magic? Wink



Edited by -Mais- - 27 January 2012 at 3:15pm

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INDEX!


Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - Page 5
Chapter 3 - Page 8
Chapter 4 - Page 11


Edited by -Mais- - 27 January 2012 at 3:15pm

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
sounds gr8...pls update ur 1st chap soon

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
Lovely! Can't wait for the first chap! 

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
update soon love it!
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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
already HOOKED!
seriously, what is a story without a little magic Wink
& as for tangled, i recently saw it while entertaining little kids at a family friends house (been dying to watch it because of the trailers and I'm a disney fan) & it was just really really fun to watch..her long (longgg) hair, the smolder, Max, and the "I have a dream" LOL
the lanterns were so beautiful!!

well, i digress - i can't wait for your first chapter! :)

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Really interesting concept...

do add me to ur pm list




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nice one plz pm me! =) 

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