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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
superb update dearSmile...

imagining RTMC in DDLJ sceneEmbarrassed...wow...it was awesome...u described it beautifullyClap...

introduction part was too good & funny alsoWink...& they r prefect match for each other by profession alsoLOL...rab ne bana di jodiEmbarrassed...

plz update soon...waiting...

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Tongueossummm update yaarTongue

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Very nice part Big smile  Loved d ddlj type scene!!!  Heart Really nice descritption dear... vry gud  Big smile But i didnt knw ki dey both belong to d army  Ermm Wahh waat a twist dat is!!  LOL

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
cute part Embarrassed..loved it:)

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
loved the update!!!!!!!!!! Clap Big smile
the ddlj scene was beautifully described... i think even more romantic than in the movie itselfEmbarrassed

and yes mr.  ladki takkar ki haiTongue Wink ab apni sochoTongue LOL

why do i feel she'll surely forget her ankletsWink
well lets find out in the next part... 
waiting...

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RIYANSH

Very nice part Big smile  Loved d ddlj type scene!!!  Heart Really nice descritption dear... vry gud  Big smile But i didnt knw ki dey both belong to d army  Ermm Wahh waat a twist dat is!!  LOL


daqsh belong to air force,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fighter planes related

dhwani is a doc in army...
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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by samikshachauhan

loved the update!!!!!!!!!! Clap Big smile
the ddlj scene was beautifully described... i think even more romantic than in the movie itselfEmbarrassed

and yes mr.  ladki takkar ki haiTongue Wink ab apni sochoTongue LOL

why do i feel she'll surely forget her ankletsWink
well lets find out in the next part... 
waiting...


YES SHE WILL DO...
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 2:44am | IP Logged

update -5




THEY  both are again busy vid their stuff's''''not actually talking to each other,,,,,but totally into each other''' by thoughts means'''..

Daqsh kept glancing at her face,,,,,,,,,,her injury,,,,,,,,in intervals of time''''and she also kept smiling in her own 'periodically''..as she didn't wanted daqsh to b embrassed of his behavior''''.altogether she wanted daqsh's attention''''.

''tumhari shaadi  ho gayi hai kya????????''

To dis dhwani felt a big awkwardness ''.turned around to explore'' it was daqsh'''in very interrogative mood'..

She went to her thoughts,''yeh janke tum kya karoge''''yahin se bhagana ka irada tho nahi'''.''

He brought her to conscious n said''bolo!!!!!!!!!''

''kyun ??????????? tumhe mujh par try karana hai''..!!!!!''she said it vid a pure pretending attitude''''but vid a expection in her heart,,,,,

''tumhe try kaun kar raha hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,????''he responded''

''maine tho tumhe kabka final kar diya hai''''..''in a perfect seriousness'.daqsh said

''kya tum mujhse????????mujhse shaadi karoge???????''vid a big frowning face''..

''ji haan!!!!!!!''

She said''aur voh kaise!!!!!!!?????????''''main iske liye rajji nahi hoon!!!!''

''Isese kya pharak padata hai!!!!!!'' he paused and said'''''''tumhe rajji karvane ki jimaindari meri''

''tumhare iss attitude ke sath,,,,,,''''..tho main kabhi shadi nahi karoongi''

''tum issi attitude ke sath hi shaadi karogi''''''dekhlena'..''

''tum mujhe propose kar rahe ho,,,,,,,,,,,yaah''..dhamka rahe ho'''''

''propose tho main tab karoonga ''''..jab tum mana nahi kar paogi!''

''aur aisa kabhi nahi hoga''

''voh sab tum mujhpe chod do!!!!!!!!''

''ha''''.ha''''''she said it'''not actually laughing'..simply making fun of it''''n him''''main abhi Faridabad uthaar jaongi'''''..''phir hamara milna impossible hai'''.bhool jao !!!!!!!!!!''

''oh! Wow tab tho koi problem hi nahi'''''''he said this making her assure dat their marriage is a entivable event'''..sure to occur '''..

''voh kaise??????????''

''mujhe bhi vahi utaarna hai!!!!!!!!!''aur paused ,,,,,,,,,gave it a thought '''''kya pata hamme uske baad bhi ek hi jagah jana ho'''''

''jao ''''..jao''''..aur chad jao''''.chane ki jhaad par'''.aisa kabhi nahi hoga!!!!!!!!''

''Nahi bhi hoga tho kya pharaak padata hai?????''

''matlab!!!!!!!!!!!''

Itna tho paaka hai kit um hi meri''''.jatni wife banogi''

''warn kar rahe ho!!!!!!!!!''

He nodded no n said''bata raha hoon!!!!!!!!!!''

''dekh lenge!!!''

''Dekh lena '''..chori''''dekh lijo'''''.in his complete haryanvi accent'''.

They both looked away '''''n after some time started vid their laggage''''as she was injured''''daqsh took her laggage to the gate,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He returned back to assure,,,,,,,,,,''''if any thing is left?????

In between dis,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she forgot her anklet still hanging'''..daqsh noticed it '''..was going to give her back'''..suddenly stopped''''''''''n said to himself''tum nahi''''.tho abhi ke liye tumhari payal hi le jaa rahi hoon''''''''..he kept d anklet , beneath d jacket,,,,,,,,,,,,,in a pocket close to heart'''.safely'''

It was 9pm ''''the platform arrived,,,,,,,,,,,,,daqsh helped her vid her laggage''''he forwarded his hand towards her for support but she ignored arrogantly'''''''..as she was getting down to platform''''she was abt to fall''''but how could she'''.afterall daqsh is still there''''..she was safe''..her body was''''embedded in his'''.his hands curled around her waist'''

''ab tho jeevan bhar ka sath hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!''''''..he winked

''bolana '''''..dekh lenge'''''..she pushed him back''..she was abt to move ven she heard  a voice''dhwani!!!!!!!!!''''''.''beta tu yahan???????????''

Dhwani was shocked to she her mother'''''.''maa!!!!!!!!!! main tho aapko SURPRISE dene aayi thi''''aapne tho mujhe de diya''.'''''she also saw towards d other lady beside ''..standing along vid her'''''n said''namaste chachi!!!!!''

''namaste ''''..chori tu yahan ke karan lagri hai!!!!!!"''''said d lady beside'''.

''namaste buaji'''''''DAQSH ADDRESSED IT TO  both d ladies'''..

DHWANI FROWNED''''.EXPLORED AND SAW DAQSH''..spoke out'''.''bauji!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????''

''haan''''.chori hum isse hi tho lene aaye the'''..''said dhwani's mom,,,,,,,MRS SHEELA TEVATIO'''..pointing towards daqsh'''.

''kya!!!!!!!!!!! Aap isse janti ho??????????????''asked dhwani'..

Instead sheela it was ,,,,,,,,,,,,d lady beside said'''.''haan bahut acchi taraah se!!!!...lekin tu yahaan kaise???????????''

''main tho yahaan apni luati friend ki shaadi mein aayi hoon!!!!!!!!!''

Mrs sheela said '''..''tho bas'''.. yeh chora'..(daqsh)'''.thari us lauti friend ka lauta'''..bhai hai!!!!!''

 

YAANI YEH BHI HAMARE SAATH CHALEGA!!!!!!!!!!-she thought '''

''chalo shukar hai tum dono aagaye,,,,,,,,,,,,,ab aayegi nah raunak shaadi main!!!!!!'' said MRS MEENA MALIK'''''..daqsh'S bua''

 

 

(NOW GUYS SEE D PLOT''.

MRS SHEELA(ST)-DHWANI'S MOM AND DAQSH BUAJI'''..NOT ACTUALLY BLOOD RELATION WALI BAUJI'''.BUT U KNOW  SIMPLY DAT VILLAGE INFLUENCE''''

 

MRS MEENA MALIK(MM)-DAQSH BLOOD RELATION WALI BUAJI..AND ST's FRIEND,,,,,,,,,,SO DHWANI HAS TO CALL HER CHACHI(AUNTY)

THERE IS SIMPLY NO RELATION  BETWEEN,,,,,,,,,,,,TEVATIO FAMILY(DHWANI's)''..AND ,,,,,,,SHAHLOOR FAMILY(DAQSH's)''.

ITS SIMPLY MALIK FAMILY IN BETWEEN THEM''''

DAQSH N DHWANI HAVE NO RELATION TILL FAR FAR AWAY'''..

THEY HAVE FAR APART FAMILIES )





Edited by sweetsanyo - 31 January 2012 at 2:43am

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