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EVERGREEN LOVE (RTMC ff)**note-pg 91** (Page 7)

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Smile superb update dear...

so their journey started...they r admiring each other but still fightingLOL...hmm...

& now dhwani is running to catch the train...this is the time for DDLJ sceneEmbarrassed...

waiting for next part...plz update soon...

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prahelika

amazing update dear...Smile
so daqsh is a jaat !!!now its more easy to imagine RT as daqsh as he is a jaat too...Embarrassed
i love this jaat-jaatni jodiBig smile
daqsh-dhwani banter is really enjoyableSmile
and these too are quite fond of each other though they don't admit it...Embarrassed
waiting for the next update...Day Dreamingand no problem if the updates are short...u have to manage ur study too...all the best for ur examBig smileParty
Happy New Year

thanx
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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanyogitaprc

awesome update dearSmile...

so both r impressed with each otherWink but fighting with each other just for showLOL...& daqsh has realised his feelings & already made the decision that he will not let her goEmbarrassed...loved it...

dhwani put her head on his shoulder while sleeping...so cute...& now this is the time for DDLJ train scene...hmmm...i would also love to see them missing train together or getting lost somewhere...in short spending time together but away from the others...i guess i am dreaming too muchLOL...

plz plz update soon...dieing to know what happens next...

i 'll try to include dis dreaming part of urs,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wen they will return...

thanx for the idea,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pranita1202

omg wow
old couple ki jai coz them dd were sitting next 2 each other
dhwani missed the train ab toh jab we met hone wala haiSmileLOL

LETS DO A ''PAI LAGU'' FOR OLD COUPLE

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
omg this was amazinggg!!!!Clap Clap Clap
sorry i couldn't read ur ff earlier... but today wen i finally read it... i luved it like anythingEmbarrassed
their luv in first sight... their happening fights... admiring other in his/her sleep Wink all in all it was superbClap
now plzz plzzz plzzz keep updating regularly ...luv uSmile

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samikshachauhan

omg this was amazinggg!!!!Clap Clap Clap
sorry i couldn't read ur ff earlier... but today wen i finally read it... i luved it like anythingEmbarrassed
their luv in first sight... their happening fights... admiring other in his/her sleep Wink all in all it was superbClap
now plzz plzzz plzzz keep updating regularly ...luv uSmile

uds will b small but regular...
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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Woah ossum update!!! lets see ki train chuthti hai ya daqsh will do a dil wale dulhaniya le jayenge types act by pulling dhwani back onto d train  LOL  ROFL Lets see kya hota hai aagey ...


Soon daqsh noticed her face wid full conscious and no disturbance,,,,,,,her crimson cheeks,,,,,,,elegant  eyesbrows ,,,,,,,her damn sexy n rosy lips,,,,,,,,,,n '''.he said to himself''tum ladki tho bahut sahi ho,,,,,,,,,,,,,mano yah na mano'''..ek dam mere type ki''''.i really admit it ,,,,,,,,,,,,,tum bas uth jao,,,,,,,,,,tumhari puri kundali nikalunga'''.ab tho bagvaan bhi yahi chahte hai''isliye tho hume phir milvaya,,,,,,,aur main bagvaan ka aadesh kaise taal sakata hoon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ab tho tumhe chodane ka koi irada nahi hai'''..''(its a jaat's commitment)(its pakka dat he was in love vid her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,form time of platform fight...he tried to ignore it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but dis time he couldn't...he was damn sure of their unknown relation)


Really liked dis part... looks lyk daqsh ko dhwani pasand aa gyi hai  Wink D jaat will definately get his girl m sure  Heart


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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 1:47am | IP Logged
loved part one Tongue continue it

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