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EVERGREEN LOVE (RTMC ff)**note-pg 91** (Page 4)

sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

 update 2

''wat do u mean ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I did it ,,,,,,,,,dats ma fault???????????''he interrogated.

She replied in one go '''off course , der is no doubt abt it''

''and may noe''.howz its so???''daqsh remarked

''its ur '.yours,,,,,,,,,,,ah!!!! course its ur '''.fault,,,,,bczz'..''she hesitated as she knew dat its d mistake of no one'''.it just simply happened,,,,,,,,,,,,,but lookin at d arrogant look boy in front of her ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she just can't step aback,,,,,,,,,,she need to answer,,,,,,,,,,

While then daqsh raised his eyesbrows''''as if waiting for an answer eagerly

Suddenly something struck her mind,,,,,,,,she brust ''yeah! Its ur fault'''..u were the one who was not listening to me,,,when I told 'excuse me',,,,,not just told I repeated 2-3 times to make u aware 'but u still engrossed in ur headphone like,,,,,,,,,,,like '''' aapni hi dhun par sawaar ho!!!!!!!!!''

''Agar tumhe pata hai ki maine headphone laga rakha hai tho ''''tho mujhe batao,,,,,,,,,ki'''.tumne touch kar kar kyun nahi kaha yeh sab!!!!!!!!!!bolo.''he was damn confident,,,,,,,,,,, dats its not his mistake.

''chukar bolti tho tab na,,,,,,,,,jab tum ek jagah par tik kar baithate'';;;;;;she pointed towards d bench,,,,,,,,,,

He realized,,,,,,,,,,in any case dhawni is going to prove him wrong,,,,,,,,,but he has to defend himself''.so he tried to end up vid"let it go mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni hai''''."


''arre,,,,,,jao jao''.mujhe kunsa shuak hai'''jao tumhe bakshti hoon aaj'..(as if she knew she will meet him again)''

''tum mujhe baksh rahi hoon?????????''.oh hello main tumhe baksh raha hoon ,,''

Soon they realized by train horn dat their train is arriving

Daqsh continued''aur vaise bhi meri train aa chuki hai ab ,,,,,,,,mere pass faltu ka samay nahi hai'""

She was in a shock,,,,and said,,,''kya???????tum iss train main ja rahe ho''''.phir tho aaj iska accident ho jana hai!!!!!!!!''

He immediately replied'' listen!!!!! You ''''''.""

But before he could complete dhwani reversed,,,,,n ,,,,,,,stared walkin towards her luggage''.he was all left alone vid his fingers raised on no one,,,,,,,,,a weird face,,,,,,,and huge anger,,,,,,

Soon he ignored'''got chips from d shop ,,,,returned to his baggage,,,,,,,,,,dhwani was already gone towards her seater coach''..seeing dis daqsh said ti himself''god! Agar aapne mujhe ek baar aur milwaya na is ladki se tho paaka main chodoon ga nahi isse'''.


Soon they boarded their respective coach,,,,,,,,,,,,daqsh in his sleeper coach ,,,,,,,,,,,n ,,,,,,,,,,,dhwani in her seater coach''..

guys wat do u feel abt d back ground music''''''plz do let me know

Edited by sweetsanyo - 17 February 2012 at 1:37am

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Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5724

Posted: 30 December 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Awesome story dear
luvd it
wow Dhwani is fabulous
she drove the auto herself?
luv the convo between Dhwani n Daksh
1st romantic n then fighter spirit
plzzz update soon
Simran_14 Goldie

Joined: 20 May 2011
Posts: 1607

Posted: 30 December 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
superb part dear
loved it
Dhwani n Daksh are cute
sweet fights
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
shruja IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 February 2008
Posts: 3418

Posted: 30 December 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
hey y din't u pm me i am toh already in ur pm listAngry
but still i will comment as i love rtmc n urs ff tooBig smile
awesome update short hai but quick updateClap
our dwani is supergirl ride autoLOLLOLLOL
loved daksh n dhwani's fightBig smile
n the first word he said 'love' under her tranceEmbarrassed
Ab first meeting ho gayi hai aur bhi hoti rahegi toh dhwani ko chhodna mat dakshWinkBig smile
liked the start of their journeyClap
and waiting for their journeyDay Dreaming
pm me when update nextD'oh

Edited by shruja - 31 December 2011 at 12:19am

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pranita1202 Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Thumbs Up Hug 
both in same train ab mazza ayega

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prahelika Senior Member

Joined: 13 December 2011
Posts: 914

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
this ff reminds me of jab we metLOLLOLLOL...awesome update dearClap
i love dhwani's auto drivingROFL
and i love daqsh tooDay Dreaming
but dhwani dear when did u say to daqsh EXCUSE ME???LOL
apne would be pati se aise baat nahi karte...naughty girlLOL
update soon...Big smileand a badawala update this timeBig smileplz

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ridzzi Goldie

Joined: 25 September 2011
Posts: 1767

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
awesome update...Clap
too good...
loved their first fight...Tongue
so both are in the same train...
ab ayega maza...LOL
waiting to see the ddlg scene...Wink
and yes background music is very nice...suits them a lot...Tongue
continue soon...
n yes plz add me to ur pm list...
n pm me next time...Smile
luv u...
ananyashera Senior Member

Joined: 06 February 2011
Posts: 452

Posted: 31 December 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
music is beautiful Smile...& loved ur update Smile...

first part was total romantic Embarrassed & second full of fight story with cute fights PRC & DV...loved it...

both were accusing each other though vaguely knowing it was fault of no one LOL...eagerly waiting for ddlj scenes Day Dreaming...their journey is going to be interesting Wink...

i have sent u friends request...plz accept it & do send the pm when u update...


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