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sonalimurat

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged
sorry sorry dear for late commenting
Very nice update dear
 
loved thoroughly ,
u described the party song n their dance so well.
aweee Dashq injured his hand n Dhwani understood ...Dwani se bachkar nahi reh sakta ...
silence...silence...silence !!!
obviously it would like hell for Dashq ...Dhwani n silence ..impossible
 
But aise hua...Dashqw ab tumhe manana padega .
 
N Like his  style so much
 
then their romantic scene was superbbb ...Embarrassed
 
 
Hostel..Ouch pata nahi I don't like this word .sara maja kharab kar deta hai .
 
but kya kare..majburi hai Confused
then their Good night kiss also .ehem    ehem Embarrassed
 
update soon
 
love u
 
 

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tejjo

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
sry rashu 

thoda late ho gyi

but i love this ud ...wow party scene kitna mast tha

i loved it thoroughly

aww daqsh ke shoulder me chot lagi thi

so sweet apni dhwani ne to daqsh ki chori pakad li n usse acchi wali fatkar bhi suna di

that was my fav scene rashu

rashu aise scene har baar diya karo mein bhot happy happy ho jaati hun after that

hehehehe

me abhi bhi un dono ke baare me hi soch rhi hun

ahem ahem 

kiss scene bada mast

loved it a lot

lalalalalal

maza aa gya

kitne dino baad mene in dono ko dekha

oops!padha

next ud jaldi dena pls

mujhse wait nhi hota na

love u

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo


aww daqsh ke shoulder me chot lagi thi



ME N DAQSH SAME SAME...

mere bhi shoulder mei..
 vo bhi left wale mei muscle tear hoa h... just latest./...
 in i hav clang around neck.


tejjo

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

Originally posted by tejjo


aww daqsh ke shoulder me chot lagi thi



ME N DAQSH SAME SAME...

mere bhi shoulder mei..
vo bhi left wale mei muscle tear hoa h... just latest./...
in i hav clang around neck.


awww rashu tkcr of ur self baby
mujhe meri rashu ekdum thik chahiye
tkcr...
Luv u
miss u too
bhot sara

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Arpimugfan

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

Originally posted by tejjo


aww daqsh ke shoulder me chot lagi thi



ME N DAQSH SAME SAME...

mere bhi shoulder mei..
vo bhi left wale mei muscle tear hoa h... just latest./...
in i hav clang around neck.



OMG! Choti, kya kya karti rehti ha? Laga liya na? But u dont worry I know hum sab ki would.be Dr.Behen ka choot,jaldhi thik hojayega bas You take care of your self;

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bellaaa

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
lovely update...
awww love the scene when dhwani angry to daqsh
dhwani is so stubborn and wow lots of kisses Blushing
awsome scene when she tease to daqsh where u want kiss hahahha
poor yashi cant sleep more
cont soon

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shruja

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
superb update!!
loved both danced
but he was hiding his injuries from her!!
n dhwani noticed tht!!
she had right to became angry on him!!
liked his confession for his accident with half lies!!
thank god he lied or else dhwani own had killed him for tht!!
liked their romance after long time
loved these lines

so dhwani was teasing him for good night kiss!!
n he was giving her tutorial abt tht!!
poor squady!! dhwani escaped from him!
liked yashi dhwani scene.

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swati_prithvi

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Wow! swthrt b'ful ud..
maza aa gya..
Dhwani got angry wid Daqsh..
& poor Daqsh..
so many tyms he said sorry to her..
bt Dhwani to...Smile
thn their kiss..
Embarrassed
ooo..
d dialogues were amazing..
I jst luvd it..
waiting for d nxt ud...
plz giv soon..

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