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EVERGREEN LOVE (RTMC ff)**note-pg 91** (Page 114)

Arpimugfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged

I can understand Dhwani's halat...u know na why!...

Choti ye konsi material ki saree thi?...mujhe ush saree k company ka naam n adress de abhi k abhi may jake eksaath 10-20 saree's kharid leti hnu... Kiuki jo saree dhwani n yashi k pass save reh sakti ha o saree mujhe bhi bardaast kar jaldi details bhej mujhe..,.

Arey wah! Kya jodi ha would be jiju n shaali ka...bilkul "mere sister ki dulha" type (plz ish movie ko dhundne ki try mat karna helth k liye acha nehi hoga) loved their convo...'hna ye ohi larki ha' daksh jo ek bohat achi dost ha n tumhari dhwani bohat lucky ha jishke pass yashi ha...

Facebook status...ish mein nahi dhwani ki marji ha or nahi yashi ki chalbaji to would be dr Rashmi gautam ki kharafati dimag ki karsaji ha... Tabhi to meri CHOTI sabse alag ha mujhe o bohat pasand ha n jo apne saare di's ki o feb ha

i loved the update

hmmm ab thoda ff se bahar niklu...

Mugdha di in red saree n Rajat in uniform...

Me Faint...



Edited by Arpimugfan - 17 October 2012 at 1:37pm

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Beautiful_King IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 April 2012
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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

Originally posted by sachiarsha

yeee Rashmi maine ye bhi read kar liya hahaaa!!!

haye Daqsh and Dhwani nhiii yaar ye itne cute kyon hain????

every song was just way to perfect for the situation

loved each n every part from station to daqsh's confession to his pranks to the way he got swastika to realize it all to their cries to swatika's realisation to her going to his room on saaree to their first kiss to their naughtiness to evry single thing...

and two thing i lately can't forget is their being apart pinched like hell rlly not just as f but my eyes rlly got moist (even i hardly cry hahahah love dhwani) and thn when they met at gol gappe stall i guess i was the happiest person i read that particular para twice and still not over with it...

their hugs 1st at station and thn at gol gappe stall i loved them both they were soo from the heart...

ale haan one more thing i just love the fact like crazies of daqsh calling dhwani JAAN haye i go ded everytime i read it...mumma why has he to call her jaan and that too with soo much of i love this...

they're just beautiful and that's all cuz of you that they're beautiful...

thnx 4 giving daqsh - dhwani and shaleen - swastika...

love you Rashmi...

n no hurries i'm totally waiting for the update whenever u have time, whenever...

welcome shelcome jii..
 maine socha, tum yahn nayio nayi aayi ho tho tumahre liye ek gift hi lado..
 lo evergreen ka update.,.

mai bust tho thi..
 but rukk hi nhi paayi apne aap ko finally ipdating for you and all lovely readers.

lovly to hav u here too...

awwwieee thnk u soo much rashmi
i can understand main bhi isi haalat main rehti hoon
main bhi nhi as soon as i saw ur pm saara work side and i just jumped in here...
love u 2oo

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pranita1202 Goldie

Joined: 15 March 2011
Posts: 2096

Posted: 17 October 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
hello hello .n jhappiHug

i m updated on this ff

but haven't commented and liked coz i have pdfed this one , ur other lss, than dhanvi di kaa shikhar

toh i read it on cell sote waqt , jab bhi mood aaye tab

aaram se. no jhanjat to sit infront of comp or mobile net ki slow speed , error in loading etc problems

lss mera bohot baki hai, shikhar on the way hu ,but abhi dhanvi di se second thread start kar di. main kab catch up karungi

but mere DD ki lovestory finaaly sync mein aa gayi.


so abhi latest wale ke baare bolti hoon

dhinchak start

i was really waiting for this

panipuri khate khate D ki entry huyi n u stooped it

glad u updated soon

so free ticket ka show

yashi . HEHEHE i really love her

baby part was hilaroious. i loved he convo n how yashi intruded

yashi 's introduction part was soooper dooper hilarious

the way daqsh was talking abt her. ROFL

daksh taking dhwani with him . yeeehhh

wow sareee

he he. love the battle between saree and dhwani n yashi

finaaly saree had to give up

awww my pricess dhwani looking sooo beautiful in her attire

chuma chuma de de

i loved the whole uppdate a lot
but party scene baat ki aur thi . feel aa gaya

oh ho humara jawan proudly introducing to b wifey

i love the interaction at the end.

precap awesome. dialogue by dhwani.

par dekho ,mujhse aur doori sahi jayegi nahi

so no saddy saddy plzzz


so at last love u

this is 4 u

Edited by pranita1202 - 20 October 2012 at 10:33am

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swati_prithvi Groupbie

Joined: 26 April 2012
Posts: 173

Posted: 17 October 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
wow! was waiting for d ud..
thnx so much yaar..
I was really missing Daqsh & Dhwani..
finally they met agn..
happy to see this..was waiting for thr meeting..
d whole market ws watching thm.Shocked
& d way Yashi talked wid crowd was suprb..
I jst luv Yashi..
she is so frndly & funny..Tongue
luvd hr intro wid Daqsh..
thn d hard wrk for saari..
I can undrstnd it vry well.
bcoz the school where I teach..
in this schul dress code is saari..
& bcoz of that I didn't want to join it..
bt thn my mom convinced me..
& first I learnd to wear saari..
mujhe bas wahi yaad aa gya..
ha ha ha..LOLLOL
I can imagin Dhwani in saari & Daqsh in his uniform..
they'll b luking amazing definitely...Embarrassed
waiting for d nxt ud..
plz giv soon..Tongue
luv u

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Arpimugfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Comment edited choti

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 3:48pm | IP Logged

that was sooo amazing..

simply superb n adorable update..

really sweet n cute..

loved it..

thnx for the pm...

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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 41176

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
LSS se pehle is pe tapki hu dnt mind Tongue

it was sho shweet upd for me
luv the moments Heart

adorable part

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tejjo Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2361

Posted: 19 October 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Sry rashu for being late
bt kya karu
ajkal bhot lazy ho gyi hun mein

nice update as always

yipeee dhwani n daqsh mil hi gye atlast

kya milan tha sbne dekha crowd ne v

pata nhi kaha kaha se aa jate h tamasha dekhne

bt meri yashi ne jo answer diya uske liye muahhh

aisi frnd to sbko milni chahiye

or ye kya hmari dhwani pregnant v ho gyi




oho rashu meri nhi dhwani ki mummy se uski complain kar rhi hun

or uski frnd ne to decide v kar liya ki baby ko wo rakhegi
she is so funny

ufff ye sari...yeh saari bnayi kisne h btao zara mujhe

Same prblm with me dhwani
saari...kabhi nhi

bt fact yeh h ki girls saari me bhot beautiful lagti h
aagr wo mugs ho to to to to kya kahu

kitni sweet lag rhi hogi hmari dhwani
or daqsh usse to abhi tk mein imagine kar rhi hun

kya mast jodi h in 2no ki

would be wife
ahem ahem

ahem ahem

ud soon
luv u

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