EVERGREEN LOVE (RTMC ff) ud 35 on 119 - Page 9

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...πŸ‘
Itna tho paaka hai kit um hi meri''''.jatni wife banogi''...πŸ˜‰
good going boy...πŸ˜†
for this update n for their this convo...
here i go...my fav thing to do...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
(O ladke deewaane, kahan se aaya tu
Dulhan ko le jaane kahan se aaya tu) - 2
Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji
Ho chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
O mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Ho, chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Arre doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji

O gore gore mukhde waali, o kaale kaale nainon waali
Maan mera ehsaan ke maine haan kar di
(Tu varna kunwaari reh jaati
Yeh shaadi hamaari reh jaati) - 2
Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Jaa main nahin karti shaadi vaadi
Mujhko pyaari hai yeh aazaadi
Main to apne baabul ke baagon ki bulbul hoon
Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai
Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai
Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
O mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Aankhon se kaajal le jaayenge
Zulfon ke baadal le jaayenge
Arre hum aaye hain door se yun vaapas na jaayenge
(Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge) - 2
Hey, chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge, haan
Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge

update soon...luv u...😊
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear...😊
so daqsh and dhwani's destination is same...😳
maybe they will eventually fall in love in the shaadi ceremony πŸ˜...well they are already attracted to each other...πŸ˜ƒ
waiting for more...😳
and loved the title of this ff...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by samikshachauhan


oye hoye jatni wife!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the audacious hero of yours...
pehli hi meeting mein puri love story plan kar liπŸ˜† 

but keep it up dhanwiπŸ‘πŸΌ bring the hero to his knees πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
but i wonder if it happens just otherwise  πŸ˜†

thanks a lot for the update! waiting for the next one...

HOW DO GET CORRECT PREMONITION ALWAYS...

SIMPLY NO SUSPENSE FOR U ...
U ALWAYS GET IT RIGHT

BUT HOW ???????DATS A SECRET...


Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ridzzi


awesome update...πŸ‘
Itna tho paaka hai kit um hi meri''''.jatni wife banogi''...πŸ˜‰
good going boy...πŸ˜†
for this update n for their this convo...
here i go...my fav thing to do...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
(O ladke deewaane, kahan se aaya tu
Dulhan ko le jaane kahan se aaya tu) - 2
Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji
Ho chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
O mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Ho, chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Arre doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji

O gore gore mukhde waali, o kaale kaale nainon waali
Maan mera ehsaan ke maine haan kar di
(Tu varna kunwaari reh jaati
Yeh shaadi hamaari reh jaati) - 2
Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Jaa main nahin karti shaadi vaadi
Mujhko pyaari hai yeh aazaadi
Main to apne baabul ke baagon ki bulbul hoon
Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai
Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai
Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Chal pyaar karegi
Haan ji haan ji
O mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Aankhon se kaajal le jaayenge
Zulfon ke baadal le jaayenge
Arre hum aaye hain door se yun vaapas na jaayenge
(Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge) - 2
Hey, chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji
Mere saath chalegi
Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge, haan
Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge

update soon...luv u...😊

OYE HOYE 
KI VADIIYAAN CHOICE HAI...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by samikshachauhan


oye hoye jatni wife!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved the audacious hero of yours...
pehli hi meeting mein puri love story plan kar liπŸ˜† 

but keep it up dhanwiπŸ‘πŸΌ bring the hero to his knees πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
but i wonder if it happens just otherwise  πŸ˜†

thanks a lot for the update! waiting for the next one...
ITS NOT DHANWI...ITS DHWANI...
Posted: 12 years ago
sooo sorry fr la8 reply
all the parts r mindblowing
muaaah! luv Daksh n Dhwani!
update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Sweetie...read all updates...the story is different and i must say too good...keep it up...characterization is amazing...i am simply waiting for the next update...and the song was superb...😊...
Edited by Freethinker - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
update-6

'''

''chalo shukar hai tum dono aagaye,,,,,,,,,,,,,ab aayegi nah raunak shaadi main!!!!!!'' said MRS MEENA MALIK'''''..daqsh'S bua''

 

''kaise nahi aayegii'''''..ab tho bas hum hi hum chayenge'''..''said dhwani''''excitedly

''vaise baccha''''hum doosre platform par bhi jana hai''..BISAN JI KO lene(don't worry he is a anonymous relative)''''..tho tum dono car ke pass chalo'''''daqsh vahi grey INNOVA'''.thik hai'''''said MRS ST.

''yani'''.yeh pehle bhi yahan aa chukka hai''..?????????''asked dhwani.

''ji haan ''''tu tho sagaai (engagement) main nahi aayi thi''..lekin yeh aaya tha''.''remarked MM.

''ab tho pura goan isse janta hai''added ST

''YEH LO'''''aur sone pe suhaaga''.''grined dhwani'..

''chalo ab tum jao'''''hum aate hai'''''.n dey both left'.in hurry ''unconcerned of dhwani's injury''.

Dhwani was ready to pick up her trolley bag'''.but before she could'''a strong hand holded it 'daqsh said''tum rahene do''

She agreed as she knew dat she won't b able to hold it for long'.

Daqsh had both d hands busy vid the bags'''.one his own n other dhwani's''''they reached the stairs''..daqsh hardly would had climbed 5-6 steps wen he heard a painful murmur from dhwani''..walkin was okay but climbing staircase was a bit difficult''..u know na it included extra efforts from her ankle'''..

Daqsh moved down again''..stood beside her '''n said'.''tum mera sahara le sakti ho''.''

''no I'll manage''''vid a attitude again'''

In pain she managed to move 7-8 steps''vid daqsh still on ground as he was seeing, watching her efforts '''tough efforts to climb''..now she knew she won't b able to move on whole set of stairs'''she moved''..turned back'''she had a repentance on her face''.it showed dat she having problem vid her ankle''.this time she didn't speak '''..her face ''..innocent face '''showed dat she needs support'''.. n she is sorry''..but daqsh aware of her pain climbed stepa hurriedly went to her ''''saw her''''n soon moved his gaze forward''.

As he did dis ''''she curled her both d arms''..on his arm n started moving'''.while climbing she could feel his tonned upper arm''..the crest n trough of his muscle, the triceps''..she felt a bit comfortable moving forward like dat''''.der was pain'but low''''.

Son they reached the top''''.but she didn't realease him''.n she didn't notice it

But daqsh was aware of it,''''..dat he is still clutched tight by her''.he turned'''.moved his gaze to dhwani's face '''she was busy vid her walkin'.n pain she generated after climbing a long staircase'''..he didn't  want  her to get embrassed'''so he didn't even made aware of her amrs holding him tight''..he enjoyed it'''it was meant to be''.like this ways'''.

They reached the car '''adjusted the laggage''.waited for others''.soon they arrived''n they all left''

On way daqsh was busy vid his cell in d front seat'''..dhwani ,sitting on seat just behind him ''.tried to ignore d series of thought abt daqsh in her brain''..one after other''..but just couldn't'''.as if her brain worked only for d thoughts of daqsh''..daqsh was getting in her brain'''.only she knew wat kind of brainstorming she undergone in car'''

They reached''''.ST n MM were busy vid  guests''.ST told dhwani to have d keys''.n first rest '''.now ST knew abt her injury'''

Daqsh helped d guest vid their baggage''''dey all went''.den daqsh took dhwani's  bag n moved''''dhwani opened d lock,they both entered''..he kept d bag,'''.dhwani noticed a smile on his face ''''vid no reason

She asked''wats d matter to laugh''

''its not a laugh''..it called a smile''..''he answered.

''listen '''.u'''.mujhese  pange mat lo''.KHARI (pure) HARYANVI JATNI HOON MAIN.'' She warned vid her complete attitude'''..extra attitude''..actually she didn't have dis much'''' may she borrowed it from someone.

To dis he coolly replied ''NEVERMIND'''''..MAIN BHI KHARE HARYANA KA KHARA JAAT HOON''''..MAY B DAT'S WHY WE MAKE A PERFECT COUPLE INDEED'''.''

She frowned''..no no'..actually shocked''..or may b irritated''ah!!!...yah phir shayad amazed''''

But for sure she was speechless''..

He continued''good night'''sleep well'''.n yes do change d dressing of injury''''kal milenge'''.PRINCESS MAHRI''

HE WENT n dhwani still was statue'''she realized his determination''.that was rude'''..but his concern dat was really wat she needed''''.actaully she it both '''..didn't know dis.

 

She went to her bedroom did it as daqsh said( like a obedient future wife)'''as soon her mom came she had food'''and went to bed'''''she was told dat her friend''''best buddy simi was sleeping ..as she won't b able to sleep for subsequent 2 nights(sangeet n bidaai) ''''.she also decided to hav mehendi tomorrow as she was tried now.

All she guess abt was daqsh''..all she think abt was daqsh'all she could imagine abt was daqsh'''all she could praise abt was daqsh'''.''wat did he said''''.perfect couple''''me as MRS DHWANI DAQSH SHAHLOOR (doesn't it sounds good)''.DIS IS REALLY MAKING ME CRAZY''''.why can't he just go from ma head''..''

She was totally into him''''.he didn't even say dat much'''.dat wat she imagined''.(like MRS DHWANI DAQSH SHAHLOOR PART)''''SOMEHOW SHE MANAGED TO SLEEP '''.AFTER SUCH A HECTIC DAY''.


Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

yay!!! me first  πŸ˜† 

loved it dear
superb
they are cute
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Simran_14


yay!!! me first  πŸ˜† 

loved it dear
superb
they are cute
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm 😊
really...varna always its sanyogita prc

good achievement...πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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