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  hey  guys 

i'am  writing  a  new  fanfic  on  sujal { rajeev}  &  kashish...

i  hope  u  will  like  it...........

 



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hi readers ,
well this is my first fan-fiction & i hope    everbody will like it .


THE INTRODUCTION:-

GAREWAL FAMILY :-
the garewal family is situated in shimla . the family is headed by chetan garewal { played by cg of kth } , chetan's wife is veena garewal who is a very loving and caring mother { typical kth types }.
chetan and veena has 4 sons and a daughter .
the eldest son is our sweetheart   sujal { played by rajeev } he is abt 26 yrs of age , swayam is the second son { he is a very possitive character } he is 24 yrs of age , rishi is    the third son { he is very sportive and friendly } he is 21yrs of age , the youngest of the sons is shlok { he is a very big flirt ,but good at heart } he is 20yrs of age . now coming to the only beti of the garewal house   being the only beti she is the pyarri - dulari of the house . she is 18 years of age she is pampered by all her brothers . the garewals r very big business people in shimla . chetan's best friend was lalit . lalit and his wife die in a accident . they have 4 sons . akshat , piyush , aman and varun . akshat is sujal's age and is his best friend , aman and varun r two nice guys who hang around with rishi & shlok . the only odd man out is piyush , he did not like the garewals , he wanted to destroy them but he always had a fake nautanki smile on his face . nobody knows abt piyush's intentions.
sujal has a best friend pratham . sujal   looks after the business.

OBEROI FAMILY :-
the oberoi family r very big business tycoons in the U.S.A . it is headed by sumeet oberoi { played by sumeet ahuja of remix } , his wife is sonia oberoi { played by sonia ray of remix } , they have 5 daughters . kashish is the eldest she helps her father in managing the business , archie , gauri , charu , mehak r the other daughters of the oberoi's . the sisters have a wonderfull bond between them . the sisters have never been to INDIA before . the oberoi's know the garewal family vert well but the children have not met even once . only the elders know each other becoz sumeet & sonia stayed in shimla and were very good friends of    chetan and veena before they moved to U.S.A .
there r   some more characters whom i'll be introducing later on ..
i hope u people liked my introduction . sorry guys if have used the same names can't think of any other   names .
this story is about the phases in life one has to face
sometimes life is a bed of roses and sometimes is a high tide wave . so this story will deal with how people of different personality come together to lead a life & deal with their situations .
well i hope u all like the introduction keeping my fingers crossed .
bye........
take care

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hi readers ,
well this is my first fan-fiction & i hope    everbody will like it .


THE INTRODUCTION:-

GAREWAL FAMILY :-
the garewal family is situated in shimla . the family is headed by chetan garewal { played by cg of kth } , chetan's wife is veena garewal who is a very loving and caring mother { typical kth types }.
chetan and veena has 4 sons and a daughter .
the eldest son is our sweetheart   sujal { played by rajeev } he is abt 26 yrs of age , swayam is the second son { he is a very possitive character } he is 24 yrs of age , rishi is    the third son { he is very sportive and friendly } he is 21yrs of age , the youngest of the sons is shlok { he is a very big flirt ,but good at heart } he is 20yrs of age . now coming to the only beti of the garewal house   being the only beti she is the pyarri - dulari of the house . she is 18 years of age she is pampered by all her brothers her name is sneha.... the garewals r very big business people in shimla . chetan's best friend was lalit . lalit and his wife die in a accident . they have 4 sons . akshat , piyush , aman and varun . akshat is sujal's age and is his best friend , aman and varun r two nice guys who hang around with rishi & shlok . the only odd man out is piyush , he did not like the garewals , he wanted to destroy them but he always had a fake nautanki smile on his face . nobody knows abt piyush's intentions.
sujal has a best friend pratham . sujal   looks after the business.

OBEROI FAMILY :-
the oberoi family r very big business tycoons in the U.S.A . it is headed by sumeet oberoi { played by sumeet ahuja of remix } , his wife is sonia oberoi { played by sonia ray of remix } , they have 5 daughters . kashish is the eldest she helps her father in managing the business , archie , gauri , charu , mehak r the other daughters of the oberoi's . the sisters have a wonderfull bond between them . the sisters have never been to INDIA before . the oberoi's know the garewal family vert well but the children have not met even once . only the elders know each other becoz sumeet & sonia stayed in shimla and were very good friends of    chetan and veena before they moved to U.S.A .
there r   some more characters whom i'll be introducing later on ..
i hope u people liked my introduction . sorry guys if have used the same names can't think of any other   names .
this story is about the phases in life one has to face
sometimes life is a bed of roses and sometimes is a high tide wave . so this story will deal with how people of different personality come together to lead a life & deal with their situations .
well i hope u all like the introduction keeping my fingers crossed .
bye........
take care

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"ZINDIGI KE SILSILAY--PART 1"
IN SHIMLA:-

it is 7 in the morning in Shimla . mostly all the people in shimla are asleep , becoz the mornings in shimla is very cold . in the garewal mansion veena is awake .she enters a room and then
veena:-   utto beta
son :- maa bas 10 minute aur .plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
veena:- beta 7 baj gaye hain office ke liye tayar nahi hona hain kya ??
son:- kya   7 baj gaye , mujhe tho ajj office jaldi jana tha..........
{ saying all this the son uncovers   the bedsheet from his face & sits on the bed with a jerk }
veena :- sujal raath ko   der thak kam karoge tho aisa hi hoga. mujhe lagtha hain tumhe ab shaddi kar leni chahiye ??
sujal :- mom shaddi aur mein
veena:- kyun   tum insaan nahi ho kya ??
sujal :- aisi koi baat nahi mom , lekin shaddi   usse karni chahiye   jo hum se pyar kare aur ab thak   SUJAL GAREWAL    ko aisi ladki nahi mili hain.........
veena:-tujhe ladki nahi mili tu tho subah shaam office office kartha rehtha hain tho phir tujhe ladki kahan se milege...........
sujal:- maaa
veena:-achcha tujhse bahas karna bakar hain mein ab chalthi hoon tu tayar ho ja thik hain .
{ veena   leaves the room }
sujal goes and stands by the window & starts dreaming about his dream girl . in his imagination he sees a girl wearing a white beautifull saree , but he does not see the face . sujal suddenly looks at the clock and realizes that he has a meeting to attend at 9 so he rushes to get ready .
now coming to the other brothers
there is room which is full of posters & that is rishi , shlok   , aman and varun room . they r all getting ready to go to different places .shlok to college , varun , rishi & aman to the office . swayam    is sitting in the study and going through some details .
{ lalit's sons aman , varun , akshat & piyush stay with the garewals after losing their family }
everbody comes to the dining table to have there breakfast .piyush is a lazy bug so he is still asleep .
chetan :- morning everbody
all say good mornning & then sit for the break fast .
rishi starts teasing sneha regarding some competition
sneha :- BIG B   ye dekho ye   bhai mera mazak bana raha hain..........
sujal :- kido   kyun pareshan kar rahe ho gudiya ko ??
rishi :- kya BIG B   app   tho hamesha iski tarafdari karthe ho .aur waise BIG B ye app ko kis angle se gudiya dikthi hain ??
rishi runs & sneha runs behind him .
veena enters & says beta ye akshat kab wapas aa raha hain .
sujal :- maa bas ek mahine ke ander aajayega   { actually akshat   is aboard & has competed his law practice }
sujal :- thik hain main chaltha hoon . der ho rahi hain .
shlok & sneha together say BIG B   plz humme college chod dijiyena , hummari gadi garage mein hain ??
sujal agrees & leaves with them . then one by one   all leave . & veena is alone.
suddenly the phone rings veena picks it up . veena recognizes the voice as
sonia oberoi's voice .
veena :- kaisi ho sonia ??
sonia :- bilkul theek hoon. aur tum ?
veena:- mein bhi theek hoon .
sonia:- mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye wo actually meri   badi beti kashish INDIA aa rahi hain koi kaam ke silsilay   mein, wo shimla mein rahegi tho mein chahthi hoon ki tum uske liye ek hotel room book kar do .
at this veena interupts and says kya hotel main kyun wo hamari bhi tho beti hain na . ab koi baat nahi sunugi wo hamare saath rahege bus...............
sonia:- ok { she says bye and cuts the phone }
now IN U.S.A:-
sonia goes out and calls a girl who is playing basket ball in the garden.
sonia:- kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh , ab ander aajao . kashish comes running .
kashish:- kya mom , kya hua ??
sonia :- kashish tum ek ladki ki jaise kab pesh aaogi .
kashish:- mom it is cool .
sonia:- tum aur tumhara cool . achcha suno tumhe garewal mansion mein rehna hoga , ab yeh nahi kehna ki tum nahi rukogi ?? samjhi.....
kashish:- yes mom .
just then all the other sisters enter
sonia :- tum log utgaye.
{sumeet enters }
sumeet:- kya ho raha hain bhai ??
sonia:-ye meri paanch betiyan jo ek dusre se itni alag hain bhagwan bachchaye un becharo ko jo in logon se shaadi karega .
all the sisters together shout   mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... ..
sonia:- aur nahi tho kya   ye dekho ye archie jo hamesha apni computer ke samne rehthi hain , yeh mehak jo ek   padaku hain , ye gauri jo ek chasmis aur   hamesha chup rehthi hain{ 2nd kutumb's look }   , ye charu jo   ek sport lover hain aur in sab se badi ye kashish jo hamesha business par   dhyan dethi hain aur ladko ki jaisa bartav karthi hain . { basically   kashish is a TOM BOY . she always wears a jeans & a shirt with a high tied pony . kashish does not wear any other ornament like earing etc }.
sonia continues talking
tum log kisise mat kehna ki tum U.S.A   mein pale-bade ho .koi vishwaas nahi karega .
all giggle and then kashish talks to her father about some business deal and then goes to do her packing to leave for INDIA .
here in INDIA   all the garewal family members return home and r sitting in the hall
chit-chatting . veena tells everybody that oberoi's elder daughter "KASHISH OBEROI " is coming to stay with them   for some days .she also tells them that she is coming there for some business deal & sujal should help her in that business deal   . she tells sujal that he has to pick her up after 2 days from the airport .
sujal agrees & all retire to their rooms as all r tired .

well here ends the 1st part . i hope u all liked it .

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   "ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 2 "
IN U.S.A :-
kashish is bidding good bye to   all her family members . sonia starts instructing   kashish as to wat she should do   and what she should'nt   do . kashish starts repeating wat all her mother is telling , because sonia had been telling kashish wat to do    and wat not to do for the past   2 days . it's something like sonia telling apna khayal rakna , khana time par ka lena , office ka kaam bohat nahi karna & all other stuff like that { a daughter & mother talk }.   the flight is announced and kashish goes in . kashish in the flight starts reading a magzine and then goes off to sleep as it is a long flight .
IN INDIA :-
sujal   is in his office , he suddenly gets a phone call
sujal :- hello
veena:- sujal kaha tha mein tab se phone kar rahi thi
sujal :- wo mama mein kuch files dekh raha tha........
veena:- achcha vo   sab   chod tujhe yaad hain na ki tujhe ajj sham ko kashish ko laane   ke liye airport jana hain ???
sujal:- haan ma , mein chala jauga......
veena:-theek hain phir sham ko milthe hain.......
sujal:- bye mama..........................
now sujal gets busy with his work .....................
in the college shlok is sitting with   some of his friends . shlok & his   friends   were ragging the new students who have come to the college { it is the opening days of their college } . suddenly diya { a new character } comes to shlok . diya and shlok r best friends . diya is pratham { sujal's best friends }sister . diya and shlok   r very popular in their college .
now in sujal's cabin
rishi and   swayam enter and tell sujal that there is something urgent to be discussed .
sujal :- kya hua itine pareshan kyun lag rahe ho ??
rishi:- BIG B , wo accounts mein kuch gadbadi hain..........
sujal:- kya , yeh kya keh rahe ho...............
swayam:- BIG B   rishi theek   keh raha hain . appko agar vishwaas nahi hota tho app ye file dekh ligiye .
swayam puts the file on the table and sujal checks it . sujal finds that a amount of 2 crocres is missing from the garewal enterprises account . sujal calls mr . sharma the cheif accountant . mr. sharma is found guilty   and sujal sacks him from the job . sujal is in a very irritated state because a honest employee had   { mr . sharma }    cheated    them ,just for some money .
after some time
sujal looks at the clock and he sees that the time is 5 in the evening , so he decides to leave for the airport . he is still in the irritated mood . he reaches the airport and is looking for kashish . kashish comes and asks sujal
kashish:- ru from the garewal family ???
sujal:- yes, i'am the eldest son of the garewal family SUJAL GAREWAL...........
kashish:- ok hi i'am KASHISH OBEROI
sujal is suprised to hear that she is kashish becoz , sujal expected some modern babe to land in as kashish oberoi , but the girl in fornt of him was a typical tom boy ......
then they came to the car and got in............
kashish being a very friendly person started talking to sujal
kashish:- well   maine app ke bare mein bohat kuch suna hain , ap ne itni choti se umer mein hi bohut kuch paa liya
sujal is not listening wat all she is talking , he is thinking abt mr.sharma .
kashish:- mr . garewal
sujal:- haan , kya keh rahi thi app
kashish:- iska matlab tabse mein hi bake jaa rahi thi , aur appne kuch nahi suna {she makes a sad face }
sujal:- { sujal is very frustrated} actually mein ajnabeeyonnnnn     se baat nahi krata.
kashish is shocked to hear that & the rest of the drive both are quite
sujal reaches home . kashish gets down & walks in with sujal . veena & chetan are waiting for them in the hall .
veena:- aa gaye tum log
sujal:- haan mama
kashish:- namaste aunty , telling this kashish touches veena's feet . sujal , veena and chetan are suprised that staying in U.S.A    she has not forgotten   her sanskar .
veena:- kashish beta upar jaakar aaram karo
kashish:- ji aunty
veena:-sujal jao aur kashish ko uska kamra dikhkao.
sujal and kashish leave from there . sujal shows kashish her room & without telling anything he leaves from there .
kashish is in her room and is thinking about sujal's behaviour . she thinks that sujal   bohat hi rude hain . pata nahi log use kaise bardasht karte   hain. thank God mujhe yahan par sirf 1 mahine ke liye rukna hain .
sujal is in his room repenting for what he told kashish in the car . he thinks that he will apoligize   to kashish later . now he thinks that ye   kaisi ladki hain ,is se dekhkar koi nahi kehyaga ki ya U.S.A   se aayi hain . sujal starts thinking about kashish even though he wants to divert his attention .
the same case is with kashish in her room she is unable to   fogert sujal's rude   behaviour . then she goes to get fresh .
veena calls kashish down , all the brothers and sneha are sitting in the hall and doing masti .
kashish comes down .
she sees sujal playing with rishi & teasing sneha . she is deep in   thoughts that is he they same person who talked to her so rudely . she is deep in her thoughts when veena comes
veena:- aao kashish beta . hamare saath baito .
kashish:- ji aunty .
now everybody introduces themselves to kashish . kashish is happy to see a family which has a very good bond .
swayam:- kashish tum yahan kis deal ke silsilay mein ayi ho
kashish:- mein vo mr.gupta ke deal ke liye aayi hoon . pata nahi kya hoga .
rishi:- jab hum sab hain tumhare saath , tho tumhe kya fhikar .
all smile
veena:- ab office ka kaam chodo , chalo saab khana ko lo.
all go to the dining   table . all finish their dinner and it is time for desert .
veena serves   gajar ka halwa . kashish's face glows when she sees the desert .
veena sees this and tells kashish , kashish tumhe gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain.
kashish smiles & nods her head .
now rishi tells
rishi:-aap aur BIG B   kitna milthe ho ek doosre se . kyunki BIG B   ko bho gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain .
sujal & kashish look at each other   and then the thoda sa music is played in the background .
all leave for their rooms .
sujal goes to kashish's room
kashish:- app yahaan
sujal:-{ sujal hesitates and then says } hain mein wo actually , appse sorry kehne aaya tha meri behaviour ke liye .
kashish:- it's ok .
sujal:- nahi actually   maine kisi aur ka furstration app par nikal diya .
sujal:- it's ok mr. garewal , mein samaj sakthi hoon .itna bada business empire chalana koi aasan baat nahi .
sujal:- thanku
sujal is abt to leave when he suddenly turns back and says :- friends { in typical sujal style }
both shake hands . & then sujal   says ajj se app mujhe sujal bulana
mr.garewal nahi ,bohat ajeeb lagtha hain.
kashish:- theek hain lakin ek shart par app mujhe tum , aur kashish kehayge.
sujal:- ok done and then both smile .   
sujal tells kashish that if she wants she can   join him in the office 2mmorrow , he also tells that he would leave at 9 .
sujal:- gud night , sweet dreams
kashish:- gud night . same to u
sujal leaves   
sujal is on his bed is thinking abt kashish and here kashish is on her bed thinking abt   sujal .
the song in the babkgroung :-
" ye achchanak kya hua hain
dil ko ye kya hone laga ......
yaad kisiki aane lagi hain
jaan jaane lagi hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
thoda hain baki...................... "   
both sujal and kashish go to sleep thinking about each other .   
here ends the 2nd part. hey guyz please tell me if this   part was too long or too draggy . please let me know if u   have any suggestions or complaints . thanku very much................

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" ZINDAGI   KE SILSILAY ---PART 3 "

next day morning at   the breakfast table . kashish is helping veena in setting up the breakfast table . sujal is getting down the stairs & is very suprised to see kashish doing house hold work . he is still in his thoughts . when veena notices him .
veena:- sujal aao aur nashtha kar lo
sujal is still looking at kashish
veena:- sujallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll { veena   goes and shakes him } , kahan khoya hua hain .
sujal:- nahi mumma wohhh...............kuch nahi
veena:- achcha chal nashtha kar le . kashish kab se intezar kar rahi hain tera .
sujal:- good morning kashish
kashish:- good morning
sujal :- mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum itni punctual ho .
kashish:- it's ok .
both kashish and sujal start    discussing about business
veena interupts and says
veena:- chalo ab dono nhastha kar lo office ki baatein baad mein karna .
veena serves   the breakfast & sujal - kashish start eating .
suddenly the phone rings . veena goes and picks it up .
veena:- hello
the other person :- hello , kya mein kashish di se baat kar sakthi hoon .
veena:- haan .
veena   goes to kashish and hands over the phone to her . kashish is confused as to who is calling her . veena understands this and says that pata nahi kaun hain kashish    ke liye pooch rahi the .
kashish :- hello , kaun bol raha hain
the other person :- hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
kashish is very happy   realizing that it is a call from her sisters .
becoz kashish is eating veena asks her to put the phone on the speaker .
now the phone is put on the speaker..........   
kashish:- charuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuu , kaise ho tum log .
charu:-hum sab theek hain di , appko bohut miss kar rahe hain .
sujal sees the happiness on kashish's face .
kashish:- achcha mehak , gauri , archie    kahan hain
all the sisters shout together hi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
then gauri & archie discuss something about business & then kashish puts the phone down .
kashish stops eating and leaves the place . veena and sujal see that kashish has tears in her eyes .
sujal wonders that the girl who was so happy talking to her sistrers suddenly has started crying .
sujal asks :- ise kya hua , abhi tho itni khush thi .
veena:- use ghar ki yaad aayi hain .
sujal:-theek hain main chaltha hoon
veena:- theek hain , par suno kashish ke saath lunch pe kuch kha lena , kyunki usne abhi nhastha theek se nahi kiya .
sujal :- theek hain mumma
sujal leaves
kashish is in the garden sujal tells her that they will have to leave now .
both get into the car .
sujal starts driving . he is sees that kashish is very quite . he puts on the music to change her mood .
the song played :-

AJEEB DASTAAN HAIN YE
KAHAN SHURU KAHAN KHATAM
YE MANZILA HAIN KAUN NI SE
NA WO SAMAJ SAKE NA HUM.................

hearing to the song kashish smiles .

kashish:- mujhe purane gaane aur soft misic bohat pasand hain .
sujal says :- isi bahane tumhare chehera par hasi to aayi .
sujal in his mind rishi sahi keh raha tha   humari pasand khaffi milthi hain .
sujal reaches the offices . he takes kashish inside . and then introduces kashish to everbody .
sujal takes kashish to his cabin .
sujal realizes that he has a conference meeting to attend . he tells kashish to wait there . he says that he will be back in    half an hour .
sujal leaves.
kashish takes a magzine and starts reading . 20 min are gone by .
suddenly some one enters the cabin searching for sujal .
he sees that sujal is not around and   notices kashish . he thinks that kashish must be a employee and starts scloding her . the person is piyush .......
piyush:- tumhe sharam nahi aati , salary tho achcha -khasa le the ho par kaam nahi kathe .
kashish:- par mein
piyush interupts and says :-it's ok . agar tumhe koi kaam nahi tho mera saath coffee pena    chalogi .
kashish realizes that he is trying to flirt with her . she is very   irritated .
kashish:- mr   i   don't know who u are & please mind your own business .
piyush:- are vaah pehali   baat tum yahan ki employee ho kar kaam nahi kar rahi ho, aur dusari baat tumhari himmat kaise hui apne boss se is tarah baat   karne ki ?
kashish can't stand it any more . she is walking towards the door . when sujal comes in . sujal sees kashish .
sujal:- kahan ja rahi ho kashish
kashish:- sujal wo mein
piyush :- sujal kaise employees hain yahaan par , inhe tho apne maalik ka koi lihaz nahi hain .
sujal is confused . kashish   looks at sujal and sujal understands what might have happened there .
sujal:- piyush ye tu kya keh raha hain . ye kashish oberoi hain . sumeet oberoi ki beti . hamare saath humare ghar per reh rahi hainn . lekin tu inse nahi mila na .
piyush is shocked .
sujal:- kashish ye piyush hain lalit uncle ka beta . tum varun aur aman se mila ho na ye unka bada bhai hain .
kashish:- ok
piyush says sorry . but kashish is in no mood to talk to him . piyush   leaves the place .   
sujal:- tum theek ho na
kashish:- haan
suddenly the pune walks in with food .
sujal:- haan , yahan pe rak do .
kashish:- sujal ye sab kya hain ?
sujal:- wo kya hain na tum ne subah theek se nhastha nahi kiya na . is liye
kashish gives him a smiles &   then both start eating .
while eating    kashish wants to take the curry & even sujal   wants to do   the same both their hands collide while trying to take the curry . sujal & kashish look at each other and both are lost into each others eyes .
thoda sa music played in the back ground .
suddenly rishi enters and sees them .
rishi:- hi big b , hi kashish
both come out of their dream world and say hi , both are embarassed .
rishi:- kashish tum SHIMLA first time aayo ho na .
kashish:- haan
rishi:- to phir chalo kahiin picnic   pe chalthe hain
kashish:- are mein abhi toh aayi hoon U.S.A se , yahaan ka     kaam   khatam kar ke chalthe hain .
at this sujal interupts and says m
sujal:- kashish kaam tho hotha rahega , chalo na hum sab picnic pe chalthe hain .
kashish:- smiles and says ok
rishi:- theek hain then it is decided ki hum log kal picnic pe jaa rahein hain .
sujal:- done
rishi leaves .
kashish starts to discuss MR.GUPTA'S    project with sujal .
sujal:- kashish zara sambhal kar rehna mr.gupta ka reputation utna achcha nahi hain
kashish:- tum ho na mere saath , tho kuch nahi hoga
sujal gives her a look in typical RAJEEV style
kashish realizes what she just said & says
kashish:- i mean tum sab log hona mere saath
sujal & kashish smile . in the evening sujal ,kashish reach home . rishi is already there . all the family is sitting in the hall waiting for sujal and kashish . sujal enters with kashish . all greet them and all the   youngsters   are very happy about going to the picnic . veena and chetan say that they will not be able to make it to the picnic .
rishi:- big b ye piyush bhaiyaa kahaan hain....
sujal sees kashish irritated face when piyush's name is mentioned
sujal:- pata nahi rishi , aata hi hoga.......
all   chat for some time and go to their respective rooms to relax . veena tells them to come down for dinner at 9

here some where in shimla a guy is sitting and talking to himself :- ajj pehali baar
us ghar ke aaye hua   kisi ne mera saccha roop dekha . mujhse itni baadi bewakoofi kaise ho gayi . maine apne app se vaada kiya tha ki koi bhi mera saccha roop tab thak nahi janega jab thak mein apne maksat mein kamiyaab nahi ho jata . aur mera maksat hain "GAREWALS KI BARBADI " . the guys laughs aloud and turns around and it is none other than PIYUSH...................................................... ........................................................

so guys here ends the part three . well to know further what happens in the picnic and y does piyush hate the garewals read the next part . please guys tell me frankly if u don't like my story i'll not mind and i'll try to improve .

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   " ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY-- PART 4 "

next day early in the morning all are awake as they have to leave early for the picnic   spot .all the family members are busy with their own work . kashish is sitting in the hall along with sujal who is busy in reading a project file .
kahish:- sujal , kya kar rahe ho??
sujal:- kuch nahi , bas ye file pad raha tha
kasish:- uffo sujal tumne hi tho kal kaha tha ki kaam baad mein bhi ho saktha hain aur ab tum khud file lekar baite ho
sujal:- achcha baba lo maine ye file baand kar di .
both sujal and kashish start talking   & laughing .
veena observes this whole conversation and has a big   smile on her    face ...................
some body enters the garewal mansion .
somebody:- doston ko bhoolgaye.........
                   yaaro ko bhoolgaye..........
                   lekin & nbsp; mere yaar..............
                   dosti ko kabhi nahi bhool na....................

sujal & kashish turn behind .
sujal :- are pratham tuuuuuuuu
pratham:- haan yaar   mein
sujal:- tu kab wapas aaya
pratham:- abhi aaya hoon

[ basically   pratham & sujal are best friends they are even business associates , pratham's parents live in LONDON , so pratham & his sister diya stay in the garewal mansion - don't ask me why ok ..........]

pratham:- aur ye kya kahan jane ki tayari ho rahi hain .
sujal:- woh actually hum sab kashish ke saath picnic   pe ja rahein hain .
pratham:-kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ab ye kashish kaun hain ...............................
sujal:- tho pratham ye hain kashish { pointing towards her } ye sumeet oberoi ki beti hain.
pratham:- oh , hi kashish mein pratham hu sujal ka dost
kashish:- hi pratham .
all the other youngsters come down to the hall . piyush came home late last night at that time the ghar ka naukar ramu kaka informed him that they all were going to picnic the next day . so even piyush was with them .
all   come out   of the house to leave for the picnic . they have arranged for a picnic bus .
all get into the bus and wave to veena & chetan

in the bus :-
by the way sneha , shlok & diya call kashish     kashish  &nbs p;di
sneha:- di waise app apne free time mein karthi kya hain
kashish:- zyadda kuch nahi bas basketball khelthi hoon , beheno ke saath masti karti hoon . aur mom ko irritate karthi hoon .
diya:-appki kitni behene hain
kashish:- meri char   behena hain .
rishi:- kashish waise   ek personal sawal pooch saktha hoon .
kashish:- hain poocho
rishi:- appka koi boy friend.....................................
all look at kashish waiting for a answer
kashish:- mera ab tak koi boyfriend nahi hain . lekin hain mere khaffi sare dost hain jo ladke hain.
shlok:- iska matlab U.S.A   mein pal -badkar appka koi boyfriend nahi
kashish:- boy friend....... shayad tum theek kahe rahe ho , par kya kare agar mera koi boyfriend ban bhi gaya tho usko time kaun dega , meri aatma
swayam:- kya matlab hain appka
kashish:- mera matlab ye hain ki mein hamesha business par concentrate kathi hoon.aur shaam ko apni family aur friends ke saath rehthi hoon . tho waqt kiske pass hain boyfriend pal ne ka .
pratham looks at sujal and gives a sarcastic smile because sujal also has the same ideaology . sujal feels awkward as pratham is teasing him .
all reach the picnic spot . it is a beautifull landscape with waterfalls , a big open land space . the point is something like the cliff {old sujal's fav spot } . if people want they can go down to the waterfall but the road is very slippery..................
all start enjoying the place . kashish is very happy to be with the garewals & others .
rishi:- chaliye na big b hum sab neeche chalthe hain .
sneha:-hain big b chaliye na
sujal:- nahi , tum log ja ke aao
diya:- plz bhaiyya chaliye na .
sujal gets a phone call . he starts talking . in between he tells everybody to go down, he tells that he'll join them after talking over the phone .
all go down except kashish & piyush . kashish becoz she said she would come along with sujal & piyush becoz he was least intrested .
sujal sees that kashish is waiting for him so he cuts the phone quickly .
sujal:- kashish , tum kyun nahi gayi
kashish:- bas aise hi .
piyush comes and says chale kashish
kashish:- sujal hum neeche chale
sujal:- hain chalo
sujal , kashish & piyush   start going down .
sujal & kashish are talking and enjoying while piyush is getting irritated   and jealous
sujal:- kashish sach hi batao tumhara koi boyfriend nahi hain .
kashish:- hain sujal mein sach keh rahee hoon, mera koi boyfriend nahi hain .
piyush tells slowly but kashish is able to hear . he says that waise bhi is chehra ka koi boyfriend kaise ho saktha hain.
kashish is shocked & hurt . sujal has heard what piyush has said . sujal sees that kashish is hurt . he gives a   irritated stare to piyush & starts walking in the front with kashish .
kashish is deep in her thoughts when she suddenly   trips   and is about to fall . but sujal catches her at the right time . both sujal & kashish remain in the same position and are looking into each others eyes . both get up and give a   chota sa smile to each other .
then both go down to where all are enjoying . kashish starts playing in   the water like a small kid .
sujal sees this & thinks :- patha nahi kashish mein kya hain jo mujhe uski taraf keech raha hain . mujhe aisa lagtha hain ki ek ajeeb si kashish hain isme .
song played in the background:-

teri ye muskurahat
teri ye masumiyat
tujme hamesha shamil ye rahe
tujhko ye patha hi nahi
kitni pyarri tu hain mujhe
rahe sada yunhi hum
thoda sa pyar hua hain
bohat hain baki...........
{ he guys plz tell me what do u think of the song i have written }

sujal is deep in his   thoughts looking at kashish   when ptratham comes and sees this . pratham sees that sujal is looking at kashish .
pratham:- sujal agar pasand kartha hain use tho batha dena use...
sujal:- nahi yaar aisi koi baat nahi hain
pratham:- theek hain . pratham thinks main bhi dekhtha hoon tu kitne din thak chup
rehtha hain .
sujal thinks :- kya   pratham sahi keh raha tha , kya mujhe sach mein kashish se pyar ho gaya hain . nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi kashish sirf meri dost hain .. shayad........
all the younsters enjoy the whole time & then it is their time to get back home .all are tired and so all be quiet during the bus journey .sujal is meamwhile thinking about pratham's words & kashish is talking to her sisters over the phone . after reaching home all   go to their respective rooms to rest .piyush goes out .
piyush is   on   his way to meet somebody . he goes to a deserted place where already somebody is waiting for piyush . piyush gets down the car and then
piyush:- sorry uncle bohat   aane mein der ho gayi .
person:- it is ok son

{ the main point is that the person is none other than piyush's mamma he is aditya gujral . piyush's mother vasu was a very greedy lady . piyush mother is still alive . vasu & aditya are the two people who have made piyush aganist the garewals .
guys plz dont think it is some ekta kapoor serial where dead people come back alive u will come to know how she is alive in just some time plz wait }
aditya:- tho kya chal raha hain . humara plan kahan thak poancha..
piyush:- uncle haan wo bus final stage pe hain maine ek shooter se baat kar li hain aur wo ek ya do din mein apna khaam khatam kar lega
aditya:- use kisi bhi haal mein marna hoga .
piyush:- app fikar mat kijiye sujal zinda nahi bachega.
piyush:- uncle waise mom kaisi hain , aur kab aarahi hain wapas .
aditya:-wo theek hain . bohat jald aajayegi .
piyush:- theek hain uncle
aditya:-vaise bhi wo garewals ye nahi jaanthe ki us din { 8 years back } vasu ne vo flight board nahi ki varna wo bhi us flight accident mein mar jathi . lekin ye baat koi nahi jaantha ki sirf lalit ne flight board ki aur vasu ne nahi...............
piyush:-waise un garewals ko patha hi nahi ke mom zinda hain . aur ye bhi unhe nahi patha ki wo log ek aasthiin ke saap ko paal rahe hain .
piyush & aditya laugh
aditya:- theek hain , main abhi chaltha hoon .
piyush:- ok uncle . mein kaam hote hi phone karuga .
both piyush & aditya leave for their respective destinations .

in the garewal mansion :-
sujal is just resting on the bed when he gets a   call from mr.gupta
mr.gupta:- hello mr. garewal .
sujal:-hello
mr.gupta:- wo actually meri kal kashish oberoi ke saath meeting hain . wohi confirm karne ke liye phone kiya tha .
sujal:- theek hain mr.gupta kal subah 11 baje hum log    meeting   mein milthe hain SG ENTERPRISES mein .
mr.gupta:- theek hain
sujal   puts down the phone and goes to kashish's room to inform it to her .
sujal knocks , kashish opens the door
kashish:- sujal tum
sujal:- hain kashish wo actually kal 11 baje humari mr.gupta ke saath meeting hain . ye hi yaad dilane aaya tha .
kashish:- theek hain .
sujal:- maine disturb tho nahi kiya na
kashish:- nahi . now kashish is getting restless as she wants to go inside .
sujal:- theek hain . good night
kashish :- good night & she closes the door
sujal thinks :- ab ise kya   ho gaya . he smiles and goes to his room .
kashish goes to her room & continues her work . actually   kashish   was writing her diary . in which she was writing about   sujal and the moments spent with him and that's y she was behaving like that with sujal .
she is totally in her thoughts. thinking about   sujal   she gets a smile on her face .

song in the background
jane ye kya hua hain
dil nahi mera bas mein
kaunsa mod aaya zindagi ke safar mein
bas gaya tu hi tu ab tho meri nazar mein

thinking all this kashish goes to sleep.
the same is the case with sujal he is also thinking about kashish and goes to sleep.

well guys here ends the part 4 . to know more as what will piyush do . what will happen to sujal , kashish . how will gupta effect sujal kashish's relationship . read the next part to know all get answers for all these questions . guys u people may feel that i'am writing more about sujal & kashish and ignoring all other characters . but guyz   just wait for some time and u will have a story which is totally balanced.........

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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 8:33am | IP Logged
" ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 5 "     

next day morning kashish is in the dining table along with veena . shlok and diya come down stairs. kashish and veena are deep in conversation . actually kashish is telling   veena as to   what all they did in their   picnic .
shlok :-good morning ma , kashish di
diya:- good morning
veena and kashish together give a smile and say :- good   morning
veena:- tum dono aaj inti jaldi kaise aagaye ? college jaldi jana hain kya ??
shlok :- hain maa , vo actually humme { he pauses for second and asks } are   diya humme kaunsa lecture hain abb ??
diya:- kya yaar shlok tumhe kitni baar kahu ki humme ektra business ki   class hain ajj .
sujal comes down in a total black suit { looking dashing as ever } pratham also comes down . they   have heard the whole conversation
sujal:- shlok tum bhi kamal ho , tumhe kis class ke liye jana   hain   tumhe wo bhi pata nahi
shlok:- are bhaiya diya meri best friend hain aur dost ke liye ye itna tho kar sakthi hain ??
pratham:- bilkul sahi shlok .tum jaanthe ho shlok sujal hamesha mera liye notes banatha tha , meri attendance deta tha . aur waisa bhi , dost hotha hi is liye hain.
sujal & diya give a what kind of look to   shlok & pratham .
kashish is enjoying a small nok-jhok between the family and is reminded of her sisters .
now shlok says:- kashish di aap bataiye kaun sahi hain
all look at kashish waiting for a reply .
veena interupts all of them and says :- kyun bechari kashish ko tang kar rahe ho. chup chap khana kaa loo.
all   smile and get back to   eating . as they know veena would scold them if they continued to argue .
veena goes inside for a moment . shlok's cell rings . as u know he is a very big flirt    the call is of one of his girl friends anita . he finishes talking on the cell .
shlok:- diya chalo jaldi , anita ka phone aaya tha . wo mera wait kar rahi hain .
diya's face drops down as she hears anita's   name . kashish observes this . she feels that diya has certain feelings for shlok .
sujal:- ye anita kaun hain ?????????
diya:- bhaiya ye anita shlok ki nayi girl friend hain .
now shlok & diya leave for their college .
pratham , sujal & kashish are still sitting
veena comes and sees kashish has not finished her breakfast
veena:- kashish beta kya hua . kya soch rahi ho .
kashish:- kuch nahi aunty . bas aise hi   project ke bare mein soch rahi thi .
veena:- kashish tum vo sab baad mein sochna phela aapna khana khatm karo .varna jab sonia   aur sumeet yahan aayege to mujh se puchchege ki kya mein tumhe khana nahi khila rahi roon .
kashish gives a week smile .
sujal:- kashish chale , hum me meeting par bhi jana hain .
kashish:- theek hain chalo . pratham tum nahi aa rahe ho .
pratham:- nahi kashish mujhe kahiin aur jana hain meeting attend karne ke liye
kashish:-theek hain c u later , bye .
kashish and sujal leave for the office . in the office they are waiting for mr.gupta to come .
mr.gupta comes .
mr.gupta:- hello mr.garewal .
sujal:- hello , mr.gupta inse miliye yeh hain kashish oberoi .
mr.gupta:- hello ms.oberoi . kaisi hain app .
kashish:- hello , ab yeh formalities poori ho gayi ho tho kaam ki baat kare .
sujal for the first time observed the kind of coldness with which she was talking to mr.gupta .
mr.gupta , kashish & sujal discussed the project for some time . mr.gupta   told them to visit his office while going to their home because there were some papers to be singed which he had not   brought along .
mr. gupta left & again kashish and sujal were busy in their own work . but sometimes kashish would give a stare to sujal while sujal was not looking and the same was the case with sujal .
sujal:- kashish ek baat   poochu . tum bura tho nahi manogi na
kashish:- haan , go ahead
sujal:- tumne mr.gupta   se aise kyun baat ki ........
kashish:- sujal aapno mein aur business associates mein bohat farq hotha hain , is liye shayad tumhe mera behaviour ajeeb laga ho . apni apni soch par nirbhar kartha hain ki hum logo se kaise deal kar the hain .
sujal:- shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho .
both continue their work . suddenly sujal ke maan mein kashish ke baato ka khayal aatha hain ki kashish ne kaha aapno mein aur business associates mein bohat farq hotha hain. he sees kashish and sees that she is carrying a   whole lot of files in her hand . suddenly all the files falls . sujal rushes to help her to pick up the files . both sujal & kashish r picking up   the files both their hands meet & they look at each other

song in the background:-

sujal's version:-
ek kashish si najaane
kyun rahe mere maan main
mein ne tau samjha nahi
magar ehsaas hone lage hain
thoda sa pyar   hua hain
bohat hain baki...........................


kashish's version:-

aaj kal subah , shaam
tumhari yaad saathane lagi hain
mujhe ye kya hone laga   hain    
dil ye kahan khone laga hain
thoda sa pyar   hua hain
thoda hain baki.....................................

both are so deeply involved with each other . that they forget the world around .
{though kashish is a tom boy sujal has started   developing feelings   for her . but note that it is not for her beauty but for her attitude & behaviour }. now the time is 6 kashish and sujal are leaving for home while going home they decide to meet mr.gupta . when they are leaving     the manager comes and informs sujal that   he has to go through   some   papers and sign them . sujal tells kashish that she should go to gupta and sign the papers , he even tells her that she should go through the papers before singing them . kashish agrees .and leaves .
sujal carries on with his work . kashish is stuck in a traffic jam and by the time she reaches   gupta's office   it is 7.30 . meanwhile sujal also decides to go home.being tired sujal decides to take   the short cut route to his house .

in   mr. gupta's office kashish is feeling very   uncomfortable . as gupta is going on staring at   her .
meanwhile sujal reaches home and   goes to his room to get freshen up .
kashish has gone through the papers and singed them   and she wants to leave . but gupta does not    let   her &nb sp;  go . he says
gupta:- kashishhhhh jaana zaroori   hain kya
kashish:- kya matlab   hain aapka
gupta:- dekho kashish mera khayal se tum samajdaar ho   , ho na ?? . phir samaj kyun nahi rahi ho
kashish:- app hosh mein tho hain , mr. gupta
in the garewal house sujal   comes to the hall
veena:- tu kab aaya sujal
sujal:- bas ma abhi thodi der pehle , mumma kashish kahan hain
veena:- kashish tumhare saath aane wali thi na
sujal:- kyaaaaaa mumma   app kehna chahthi hain ki kashish ab thak nahi aayi .
sujal runs to kashish's room to check whether she is there . he does not find her there and comes down and rushes outside without telling anybody . he starts his car and he is very worried as he knows gupta   is not a nice man . he starts driving very fast .
in gupta's office gupta is trying to get close to kashish and    kashish is crying for help . gupta   tries to force kashish . but suddenly   sujal   enters . kashish heaves a sigh of relief . seeing sujal   kashish goes and hugs him tightly . sujal warns mr.guta and cancels the contract and leaves the place with kashish . who still is   scared , crying and holding sujal very tightly . sujal and kashish come out . inside gupta calls some body and says :- maine appna kaam kar diya hain , ab tum   appna kaam karo .
the other person says:- ok . ab mein dekhlunga .
gupta cuts the phone and has a wicked smile on her   face .
sujal and kashish r sitting in the car . sujal sees kashish is crying , he goes to her and wipes her tears . kashish clungs into his arms crying   very bitterly . sujal and kashish slowly drive home . kashish decides to behave normal and not to tell anybody .
kashish & sujal enter
veena:- aagaye tum dono , itna der kyun ho gaya
kashish and sujal together say :- nahi bas kuch kaam tha .
sujal:- mumma baki sab kahan hain
veena:- wo sab movie ke liye gaye hain . wo log tumhara kab se intezar kar rahe the .phir maine unhe jane ko kaha.
sujal:- theek hain , mumma
both refuse their dinner and   go to their rooms .
kashish is sitting in her room   and crying . some one knocks on the door .
kashish:- come in
sujal enters with a box   in his hand
kashish:- sujal tum yahan
sujal:- haan kashish wo first aid box laaya tha . tumhe chot lagi hain   na . { actually kashish got hurt when she was trying to save herself from gupta } .
sujal comes and sits beside her . he takes her hand and applies dettol on it . kashish feels the pain . but manages to control herself .
kashish:- sujal thanks
sujal:- thanks kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
kashish:- wo is liye   ki tum ne aunty se kuch nahi kaha mr.gupta   ke baare mein.
sujal:- kashish pehli baat dosto ki kuch bato ko sab ko bata the nahi , wo dost hi kya jo apni dost ke mann ki baat nahi samaj sake aur dusari baat dosti mein   
no thanks no sorry . samjhiiiii
kashish smiles .
outside the room veena is standing she has heard the whole conversation and understood what might   have happened that day & decides not to ask them about it. she enters the room and she sees that sujal   and kashish are hitting each other playfully . sujal sees veena and tells her to sit with them . all the three chat for a long time then sujal & veena leave wishing kashish good night . kashish goes off to sleep   with a cute smile on her face .
veena is with sujal
veena:- sujal , aaj sonia se meri baat hui thi usne bato-bato mein   bataya ki 2hafte baad kashish ka janam din hain .
sujal:- mumma mujhe lagtha hain , humme use ek suprise dena chahiye
veena:- mujhe bhi ye hi lagtha hain , itne kam dino mein wo itna gul -mil gayi hain humare   saath .
sujal:- app fikar mat karo   mein kuch kartha hoon . abhi app jaiye aur so jaiye
veena:- good night .
sujal:- good night .
sujal goes and sits on his bed   and thinks :- kashish jitni tough dikhthi hain utni hi sensitive aur emotional hain . thinking about that days events   he goes to sleep .
the next day everything is the same { normal } :-
kashish has already called her father and told her that she is not intrested in gupta's project . she does not tell the reason .
kashish and sujal are going to leave for the office   when   chetan comes and tells:-ajj subah meri sumeet se baat hui usne bataya ki tum { kashish} us project mein intrested nahi ho .
he pauses for a second and says :- kashish , sujal   sumeet aur main ye chahthe hain ki oberoi aur garewal industries merge kare tum dono kya soch the ho .
sujal & kashish say :- great , ye tho bohat achcha hoga .
the scene ends there .
4 days have passed and the same routine continues . sujal & kashish are busy with the merger proceedings .
it is the fifth day . some legal problem arises in the merger.
sujal:- kashish ye problem mera dost hi suljha saktha hain .
kashish:- nahi sujal ye problem    mera dost solve karega .
sujal   and kashish start arguing . they have a very heated argument .
kashish:- achcha tumhare   lawyer   ka naam batao .
sujal:- us ka naam hain . sujal's cell rings and he leaves the place .
kashish and sujal both are very frustrarted both don't want to give a chance for the other to speak . they both have their own ego while dealing in bussiness matters.
some person is standing outside   opposite to the garewal industries building .   he is waiting for somebody to come out of the building. he gets a call from some body .
caller:- hello
some person:- hello boss
the caller :- abey , kya aaj kaam ho jayege
some person :- piyush sir aap fikar mat kijiye ajj sujal garewal ka kaam thamaam ho jayega .
{ the caller is piyush & the person is the shooter }
sujal and kashish r not intrested in talking to each other but they have to go home together as they both are heading towards the same destination .
sujal comes to the car & kashish is a bit   behind as she is walking slowly.
the shooter fires the bullet...................................................... ..................................


so here ends the part 5 . to know what happens to sujal is he hospitalized or not , will his and kashish's argument ever end , who is the   lawyer sujal is talking about,who is   lawyer kashish is talking about . to have answers for these questions read the next part .

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