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Armaan se Jassi tak

alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:16pm | IP Logged

Maybe this 12th poem of mine on Armaan and Jassi would be the last of the series, because if Armaan falls for Jessica, i think my invested emotions would just vapourise. I am crossing my fingers as still there is a chance for them to sublime too.

So here it is, from me, to all the forum friends...

AT TIMES I WANT TO LAUGH AT LOVE

 

 At times I want to laugh at life

When all else seem so small and trife

 

What tripped me wasn't a banana peel

Instead it was love's own heel

 

Over me it hung large and loom

But I was watching channel zoom

 

She pulled me while I'was hunching down

Tickling laughter out of a funny bone

 

And when I felt she was life's own light

She drew away so out of sight

 

I crawled and searched every corner of mine

And love was laughing out in shine

 

My face was smeared in dust and sand

Love was clapping with a musical band

 

Now the heart thuds in my ear

But to listen, you aren't here

Will wait my love, year after year

Come back once, and be my dear.



Edited by alien_visitor - 07 April 2005 at 11:40pm

shiverz Goldie
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:20pm | IP Logged

wow!! another great poem, alien_visitor!!ClapClap 

i'm glad that this show provides so much inspiration to you to write your poems!!Big smile keep up the good work!Thumbs Up 

jprasad IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Wow, Alien Visitor. That was most beautiful and really cute all at the
same time! God has truly blessed you with a beautiful talent! Tongue
alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Thanx shiverz and JP..I doubt if i will continue to be inspired.
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
why??? I love reading your poems, they always strike a cord with me!
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:05pm | IP Logged

Wow!! that a beautiful poem alien.. plz continue writing ...

alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Ofcourse i would also want to go on writing...But as I said if Armaan falls for Jessica's looks, i dont know, i think I will fall down flat too!!!
rose85 Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
wow it waz beautiful.....deep from the heartEmbarrassed..absolutely loved it.. ClapClap

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