lucky.m
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Dakshna in their room...Night...9.00 pm...
Daksh; (on bed)Naina ..main so raha
hoo.
.kal office jaldi jaana hain
Naina; ( on sofa)offo daksh ..bhool
gaye kya kal christmas hain? Sab ki chutti hoti hain aur tum ho
ki..kamse kam iss din tho divorce mat karavo...
Daksh; oh..main tho bhool hi gaya...
Naina; iss liye tho yaad dilaya...pata hain daksh jab bhi christmas ka khayal aata hain bachpan main mera dimmag main pehla kaun aata tha?
Daksh; kaun?
Naina; santa claus.
Daksh ; acha!..
Naina; haan...Bcahpan main...
Now we go into flash back alonh with dakshna...Lil Naina
with her father..
.
Lil Naina; Papa..kya sach main santa aakar gifts deta hain..christmas par..
Diwakar; aise kyu pooch rahi ho?
Naina; who maine dekha TV par aur suna bhi apne friends se ki santa ache bachon ko gifts deta hain..Tho mujhe bhi gift milega papa..
Diawkar; haan haan kyu nahi..meri pari
tho itni good girl hain ki ek kya santa uske liye bahut saare gifts
laayega...
Naina; sach papa.!.kab?
Diwakar; Jab tum sojavoge tab '
Naina; acha! Tho phir kya main sojavu abhi...
Diwakar (laughs); lekin pehle santa se kaho ki tumhe kya kya gifts chahiye...nahi tho usse kaise pata chalega?
Naina; closes her eyes looks at sky and says; dear santa ..mujhe na ek bada sa teddy chahiye pink waala phie ek barbie doll..phir dher saare choclates..kal main apne friends ko dungi..bas...
She opens her eyes...diwakar smiles and says...; ab sojavo.. meri pari.. wishes her good night.. Naina sleeps back on bed...diwakar covers up her with blanket,pats her and lil naina slowly slips into sleep...
Nexy day morning..
Lil Naina opens her eyes and she finds all her gifts besides her...she jumps with joy...and hugs the teddy...and shares her happiness with her dad
Ab present ... dakshna room..
Daksh; tho phir sach main santa aaya
tumhare liye..
Naina ; haan aaya tha ..yahi lagta tha mujhe ..lekin phir bahut dino ke baad ehsaas hua ki uss din mera santa koi aur nahi
Daksh; tumhare papa hain! Hain na
Naina; bilkul...mere papa... aur uske
baad jab se papa hamse door hogayae uss din mera santa bhi mujhe chod
kar chala gaya.
.( a small tear escapes from her eyes...before it
drops on to floor..daksh rushes holds it with his hand)
Daksh; naina..she looks at him..he sits on sofa besides her...wipes her tears and says; tum jaanti ho ki main tumhare aankhon main asu nahi dekh saktha..ab pls..rona mat..
Naina hugs him; daksh...bachpan ki yaadein kitne ache hote haina..aise choti choti baatein kitne khushi dete hain...
Daksh ;haan !..stroking her hair)...after few min..daksh says; acha ab bahut raat hogayi..so javo...
They come out of hug...Naina sleeps on sofa..daksh covers her with blanket...kisses her on forehead wishes her good night and goes back to his bed...sits on his bed..looks at naina who already slipped into sleep..smiles looking at her ...and sleeps on bed...
Next day morning...
Naina opens up her eyes...stretches out her arms lazily and looks at daksh who is still asleep..she smiles looking at him ..and is about to get down...she finds a big gift pack besides her bed with a note
Duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ke liye ek pyara sa thofa...
From santa.....
Naina surpised and excited...opens gift...finds lots of chocolates.,. a cute teddy.. a greeting card wishing her happy christmas...Naina is like thrilled.she goes near daksh running..
Naina; daksh uto jaldi uto...daksh tumhe kuch dikhana hain
Daksh; lazy tone ; kya naina sone dona..
Naina; baad main sojavo..pls utona pls..
Daksh lazily gets up puts on his specs...; ab batavo kya hua?
Naina; kya hua?...shows him the note..and gifts ...dekho ye teddy kitna cute hain aur choclates...
Daksh wow..santa..matlab..kal raat
santa aaya aur..oh naina..mujhe yakeen nahi hota..
Naina; mujhe bhi nahi..
Daksh; Lekin sirf tumhare liye gifts??
mera kya?
Naina; sirf ache bachon ke liye
hain...khadoos ke liye santa gifts nahi deta.
..daksh ne mooh pulaliya..
Naina laughs looking at his expression..she hugs him and says; oh..daksh main bahut khush hoon..bahut jyada...
Daksh feels happy looking at her happiness...
Naina; ab chalo uto aur tayar hojavo..chalo...
Daksh gets up and goes into washroom.Meanwhile naina takes out dress for him and puts her gifts back...
Daksh comes out...gets ready...
Naina; naasta main kya banavu..??
Daksh kuch bhi chalega..just then who god main bhool gaya..ek document banana hain aur mail karna hain...bhaut zaroori hain...aur laptop bhi nahi laaya..mujhe office jaana hoga...
Naina; office?
Daksh ; haan naina...main nikal raha hoon..nasta baad main..
Naina ; teek hain jaldi aajavo...gives him his watch..wallet..he drops a kiss on her fore head and levaes from there...
After 1 or 2 hours...ON phone
Naina; kya daksh..abhi tak wahi par ho..?
Daksh kya karu naina..atak gaya hoon yaha.. ab kal survayi hain tho ..tum tension mat lo...main yahi kuch khaalonga ...ok
Naina; pls dyan rakho uar kuch khaalo..nasta bhi nahi kiya tumne...
Daksh haan baba..khalunga..ok..ab main kaam karu.?
Naina; ok...
Almost evening hogaya...Daksh calls naina and tells her ki woh nikal raha hain office se...daksh reaches home..enters into their room..and is surprised to see room decorated aur table pain choclate cake..few cookies...
Naina; tum aagye...he turns back and
Daksh; naina ye sab kya hain ..koi aanewaala hain kya?
Naina; haan hey koi imp guest...aanewaala nahi...aagaya hain..
Daksh; question mark face..
Naina; mere santa.
..
Daksh ;santa? Yaha?..
Naina ; haan haan yahi par hain aur mere saamne hain..
Daksh is like lil shocked and surprised..
Naina comes near him and says; tumhe
kya laga ki mujhe pata nahi chalega..ki woh gifts tum laayete mere
liye...
Daksh ; (pakadegaye exp)...woh..naina actually kal tum thodi upset thi tho...
Naina; kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hain...she comes and hugs him and says; thanks daksh..mere santa banae ke liye..I love u
Daksh smiles and says; love u
too...naina tumhare liye aur tumhari muskurahat ke liye main tho
kuch bhi karskata hoon...kuch bhi..
They come out of hug after few min
Daksh; waise tumhe pata kaisa chala ki?
Naina; woh subha jab main tumhare kapade nikaal rahithi tho...bill mila mujhe..
Daksh; oh!...
Naina; aur tum gifts kab laaye??
Daksh; raat ko jab tum sogaye tab bahar jaake leke aaya.. aur tumne ye sab kuch
Naina; tumhare liye !
Eye lock..few min of slilence..
Daksh; ab bahut bhook lagi hain aur
cake tho bahut yummy lag raha hain..tho
Naina; tho?
Daksh; ab aur kiska intezaar hain..chalo!
Naina ; haan chalo...
They both cut the cake. Ek doosre ko
khila ke...lil masti.
.thoda sharata aur dher saare pyae ke saath..
.
celebrate their happiness together
......The END......
PS; Hope U had fun reading this...Merry XMAS to u all
Lucky
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..Thank u thank u for such a cutie FF
..
.
Dakshu dear ko naina ka Santa bana Diya..
.
So so sweet..
..
Loved it loved it till infinity.
... A big big tightwali Jadu ki jhappi dear.
.
.smiles smiles smiles all the way while reading it.
.
.
. thank u thank u so much
loved all the dialogues...
Loved dakshu in ur FF
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..
..Thank u thank u for such a cutie FF
..
.
Dakshu dear ko naina ka Santa bana Diya..
.
So so sweet..
..
Loved it loved it till infinity.
... A big big tightwali Jadu ki jhappi dear.
.
.smiles smiles smiles all the way while reading it.
.
.
. thank u thank u so much
loved all the dialogues...
Loved dakshu in ur FF 
lucky.m
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Posts: 3201


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