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Shilalipi Senior Member
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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
 hi!& MERRY CHRISTMAS.I  really want to salaam all ff writters..& to show my gratitude..i am going to start writting two ffs..MY JUNGLE GIRL & TUM DENA SAATH MERA,,,O HUMNAWAA...I hope u alL will like these two ...i would have started these after new year..bt today is someone's Birthday...that's why i dedicated the opening to her.as birthday gift..Yup today is Abgina di/Crazydevil's birthday...the writter of the awsomre ff CHAHAT..wish her a very happy birthday.& hope she will like the presents..pls like & give comments..whether good or bad ..

                Tum dena saath mera...o Humnawaa...

Character Sketch

   Maan Sing Kurana-30 years.eldest of all khurana sons & daughter..was paralyzed  in an accident 4 years ago..well u can not sat fully..(he can use his hands..& move his head..)likes to keep himself aloof  for this reason..super angry..grumpy..moody bt hv a golden heart.loves his family.only person he shared his feelings..his mom..she is now fully paralyzed..

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Namrata Khurana-maan's mom..was  perfect in all relation..a perfect beti,bahu.wife,ma & most of all an awesome human being.bt no one knows how'2 years ago she fell from stairs..& became paralyzed.

Pyumori Mehta

Pratham khurana-well  most richest business man of india..bt down to earth.Loves his wife a lot.

Mohnish Behl

Dev Sing Kurana- 25 yearsloves his family a lot..he is the only one after his mother who is a bit closer to his bro maan..loves his bro the best.Joined father's company after his bro got paralyzed.

Samir Sharma

Vicky & Meera Sing Kurana- 18 years.. troublemaker twins.. mischievous  by nature..Vicky does not want to join in with his bro & father..has his own dreams..bt good at heart..Meera..spoiled brat..bt if u dig down..u can find a good heart..bt aise dost mile..jinhone accha kya hai..iss ka definition  hi badal diya.But both loves their family.

Fenil Umrigar     Abhishek Sharma   

Daima- MEENA,maan dev Vicky & meera's daima'.lives in km with he son rahul'now takes care of khurana household.

Papiya Dey

Rahul Ahuja-works in kc in a very high post..27 years ..what's good in him??NOTHING..though only his mother & another person knows about it..infront of others'no one can be good like him.

Gagan Malik

Geet handa-orphan 23 years .lives with her uncle aunty & cousin Sameera .An angle in all sense

Sameera- truly vamp like her mother..25 yeas,,bt smething happens which may change her

Pooja Bose

Samiksha- maan's ex-girlfriend...

Mouni Roy



                                                   INDEX

INTRO-page 1

part 1-page 3     part 6-page 16        part 11-page 40    part 16-page 73         Part-21

part 2-page 4       PART 7-page 19     part 12-page 44    Part 17-page 80

part 3-page 6       part 8-page 24        part 13-page 50     part 18-page 90

part 4-page 9       part 9-page 28        part 14-page 58     Part 19-page 97              

PART 5-page 12    PART 10- page 33    part 15-page 67     Part 20-page 106



Edited by Shilalipi - 13 May 2014 at 6:52am

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
nice intro cont. soon

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged

                Tum dena saath mera...o Humnawaa...

Marriage '..

Something which comes with responsibilities & vows..in some religion..vows are only a few..in some..it's many'after many rituals..finally a Man gets married with a Woman.. socially..its a process of expanding ones heredity legally..ritually..it is a way to get a life partner'..

socially  or ritually..doesn't everything..every rituals ..every  vows..irrespective of cast,religion or custom  lead to only one vow..only one promise'which a Man & Woman take from each other..a promise which they make to each other..??  Just ONE VOW'.

Jab koi baat bigad jaye'

Jab koi muskil aa jaye..

Tum dena saath mera..

O Humnawaa'.

 

Wo vada..ek aise insaan se 'jo pehle ajnabee hota to hai..par uske zindegi me aneke baad lagta hai..pehle koi na tha itna apna'

Na koi hai na koi tha'.

Zindegi me tumhare siva'.

Tum dena saath mera..

O Humnawaa'.

Har muskil pe..kisika saath mile na mile..uski saath ki aas me rehte hai.. Ekdusre  pe biswas itna hone lagta hai..ki zindegi ki har saas uske wafa ke naam kar denne ki chahat ho..

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath

Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath

Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

 

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

 

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein

Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

 

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Aur shayad isi tarha milta hai..janmo ka humdum..saccha sathi..jo ekdusre ko jane..samjhe utna..jitna kisi aur ne na samjha ho..

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin

Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin

Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

 

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaa

Maan aur geet.. inke beech koi rishta ho sakta hai..shayed kisi ne nahi socha hoga.wo to us ek ke sapne dekhte the jo unhe lagta tha ki unke naseeb me nahi hai'..par..kismat ne inhe milaya'shayed wo ho jaye un kuch khushkismat me se ek..jinhe  miltta hai saccha sathi..



Edited by Shilalipi - 31 March 2012 at 9:32am

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
wow..nice start.
do continue plz.
thx

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Hey Nice Start... 

Do continue soon

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Nice
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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged

 



NICE START WITH NEW CONCEPT



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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged


res
***edit***
amazing concept chotu...beautiful prologue...
n interesting charactersketch...well done dear...

Edited by crazydevil87 - 25 December 2011 at 6:22am

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