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Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! (Page 5)

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hey guyz soory 4 the delay Smile

PART 4

we see the lady come in but still dont c her face

lady- hey im sorry im late

guy- itz ok so how waz your trip

l-it was goo and yours

then karthick spots the lady and takes angad up to her

k- hey how are you (u still dont c her face..heheLOL )

lady- im fine wut abt u?

k- good, n e wayz meet my younger brother angad

lady- hi nice 2 meet you im mishti bose(now you c mishtiz face)

a- hi nice to meet you

m- so karthick told me you were going to join the buisness after you r done with college

a- yes im not really sure though

m- oh

they chit chat 4 a lil while

USA

s- arey kripa bete, can you do me a favor

k- yea sure papa, u dont need to ask me just tell me

s- smiling- mujhe tumhari yehi ada pasand ati hai(huh?)

k- smiles

s- i was thinking to go to england for this week to give these confidential files to the khannas

k- who are the khannas?

s- well actually dillip khanna, we are friends we met wen we were in college and since then we only meet on buissness ocasions

k-oh

s- well i had to give him this very confidential file personally, but i have lots of work piled up here, so can you please just give the files to him

k- ok papa

s- but thres one more part to this

k- what?Confused

s- yea umm can you plz discuss a couple of biussness talks with him plz, u will noe what to do if u just study the files

k- papa i dont know if i will b able to do so

s- kripa i know u can do it...

some one all of a sudden come behind surbean

kripa sees the person and is happy

the person comes behind surbean

person- hi dad

surbean jerks up and turns around

**********FLASH BACK***************

kripa is makin a call

k- hey bro. wuts up

m- notin much u sis

k- i have good news

m- what u finnaly got a boyfriend

k- shut up manek...n e ways guess wat i got in to oxfard

m- congrats

k- i have a plan... i didnt tell mom and dad this yet so...

m-so?

k- we come to new york SNEAK in to the house and surprise mummy and papa

m- WHY???

k-  b/c we havent seen them for a long time and i thought why not give em a surprise

m- ok sis i'll b there

k- ok b there by tommorrow

m- i dont know how you manage to be such a good girl

k- wut do u mean?

m- u noe well mom wanted u 2 go to harvard and dad wanted u to go to oxfard

k- manek wut r u talking abt i always wanted to go to oxfard...but fate just brang me here to harvard

m- yea rite ...liar...ne ways bye sis see u later

*************END OF FLASH BACK***********

s- u scared me beta...what is all this im getting surprises all day

k- remeber dad i told u u will get many more surprises today

they all laugh then manek goes to another room

m-yells-MOM

gayatri turns around

g- arey beta kaisa hey tu

m- mom im fine wut abt u

both hug

then kripa and surbean come in..both father and son hug then brother and sister

PARY- i noe its a long party

a- ok karthick i think i'll be going now back to the hotel

k- ok

a- bye mishti nice meeting you

m- it was nice meeting you too

both shake hands and then angad takes the car to the hotel,

wen he reaches the hotel he goes to the reception

a- hi can i get the keys 4 room 404

r- yea sure...here you go

a- thanks

anngad goes to his room and changes then lays down on his bed and thinks

a-thinking- i wonder wen the love of my life will come..i dont know why but i feel that something  soon will happen soon

then angad goes to sleep smilingSmile

*******END OF PART**********

hope u liked it Smileif u have any complaints or comments plz just post itSmile



Edited by hawoo - 17 April 2006 at 7:02pm
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u meant end of d part right not end of fan-fic Confused Ouch i hope sooo and awesum part Clap Clap Clap
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thnkz himani i just fixed it..i didnt even notice Smile
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