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Pyar ke pal:Go to pg.45 Fast!!! the end!! (Page 3)

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its great
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Originally posted by hawoo

thnkz..i noe the prt were kripa nd priya were talkin abt oxfard wuz lame but i couldnt think of anything else Smile ..i will cont. soon

tat waz not lame!!!!!!!!!! i loved aalita and angads bro-sis chat...tat waz cho chweet..cont soon!!

himaniBig smile

Edited by Sour Skittles - 14 April 2006 at 12:55pm
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hey just read the whole thing n its fab!! continue soon!!! Wink
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caught up with ur story!....doing an awesum job so far!..keep it up! Smile
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great part! Cont. soonk!
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hey guys sorry for the delay Big smile i'll post the part in 1-2 hours Big smile
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part 3

we are at harvard

kripa is packing up 2 go to england

k- hey priya did you see my dior bag

p- yea itz rite there(points) on the bottom left drewer of the dresser


after packing her bag she gets up

k- k, priya bii my flight is in 1 hour nd by the time i will get to the airport 45min will b passed by

p- ok krips i  ite sound like your moither but, be careful dont stress your self too much since i wont b there to calm you down,eat properly, and dont 4get 2 call me

k- acha meri maa(smiling)

then they both hug nd kripa gets a cab nd goes to the airport


we see angad coming down with a little shoulder bag 4 his one night stay at whales

k- ready angad

a- yea bhai lets go

k&a- bye mom bye dad

n&d- bi beta take care

den both leave for the airport


we see kripa boarding in the plane


we c angad and karthick boarding on a plane


after abt an hor of so kripas flight lands and the captain makes his announcements

c- welcome to new york

kripa got off the plain calmed her luggage nd took a cab told him some directions


after an hour or so later Angad and Karthicks plane lands

c- welcome to whales passengers

then angad and karthick get off, hire a cab nd go to some fancy posh hotel


we see kripa paying the taxi driver and getting off at this beautiful house

she walks towards the back othe house nd looks through the window she see's a man sitting down nd reading, she then went to the other side of the house opened up a window and jumped inside the housethen she pulled her stuff in.

she first goes up to  a room and put her stuff there and takes off her shoes...she them tipi toes downstairs to the room where the man was sitting....he is facing her back so she goes up to him and...


the man jerks up

m- u almost gave me a heart attack

k- hi papa

s- hi beta how r u

he gets up and hugs his daughter

k- mummy kha hai

s- tumhari mom aur khaha ho gi

k- mein to bhool e gayi

then kripa goes to another room where a lady is praying she then yells


g- arey kripa beta kaise ho tum

k- main theek hyun mamma aur app kaise hain

the surbean come from behind

s- arey idar tum dono batey hi karogi yaha pura din

both ladies smile


we see hunky angad coming out of the bathroom he is wearing a blue shirt and black pants

just then karthick come in

k- angad you ready

a- yea bhai just let me make my hair

k- ok i'll be waiting downstairs

angad gets ready and goes downstairs

they both go to the party


kripa subean and gayatri are sitting down at the living room

s- so kripa u here all of a sudden

g- yes it was a big surprise

k- well this is just a little current mom and dad wait till u get more surprises

s&g- what do you mean?

k- i filled out an application for the forigen exchange program and...

s- and what

k- and...i got in to oxfard university

g- omg beta this is great news finnaly your dream will come true

s- this is wonderful news beta wen is your flight to england?

k- tommorow evening

g-sad- that fast

k- well mamma i got the results yesterday so i planed to come here and give you a surpise


k- angad meet mr. kapoor he is the person who gets us most of our contracts

a- hello nice to meet you

mr.k- nice to meet you to mr.angad

the evening goes on like that until the camera zooms up to a lady who just arrived could only see her sari

but u dont c her face

********** end of part*******

promo- whos that lady???

GUESS!Big smile

hope you guys liked it Smile

Edited by hawoo - 16 April 2006 at 12:51pm

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