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PYAAR KII YEH EK KAHAANII (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
nice update ...
abhay is so sweet nd nince brother ... waiting 4 abhiya meetng

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged

Sixth episode

Abhay Vivek and Neha comes out of the car. Abhay gets the call again.

Abhay: Neha tum dono ander jao main abhi ata hu.

Neha: jaldi aana.

Vivek: miss queen apna bag khud uthao.

Neha: thoda sa utha loge to hath tut nahi jayega tumhara.

Abhay: I will take that with me.

Neha: thanks Abhay.

( they lefts)( Abhay piks up the call and angrily says)Angry

Abhay: ab aap ko mujhse kya problem ho gayi. Now what do you want?Angry

Person in the phone: Abhay main to bas tumhe muba.. (abhay interrupts)Ouch

Abhay: aapke wishes ki mujhe koi zarurat nahi. Aapka aur mera rishta hi kya hai. Main aapse nafrat karta hu. Aur aap bhi mujhse door rahe to achcha hai.Angry


Person in the phone: par beta apne..( Abhay disconnects)

Abhay takes a deep breath and says to himself

Abhay: come on Abhay. Ignore it. He is not worth it. Don't spoil ur mood and get inside. There is your family.

( he puts his cell phone off and  goes inside. He forgets something so comes back. Opens the door and piks up Neha's bag and went inside)

Tamanna wears that green dress. Comes to mirror. And blush. She is smiling.

Tamanna: Abhay. You are rite. This dress is super.( she is very happy) and lies in her bed with a smile. Thinking about Abhay. Remembers Abhay's hug in colidor and his words in mall)

Tamanna: Abhay. Na jane mujhe kya ho gaya hai. Main sirf tumhare bare mehi soch rahi hu. Is it love?

Tammy ye kya soch rahi hai tu? Abhay and you are good friends. It's not love.

In UAE

Mr. Aadarsh khandelwal trying to call someone. But from that side no response.  Chandramukhi comes to him.

Mrs. Chandramukhi Khandelwal: success to mere bte ko bhi mili hai. Use kitni baar phone kia tumne.?

Mr. Aadarsh Khandelwal: can u pls stop it here? Aaj atleast same baat ko lekar jhagda mat karo.

Mrs. Chandramukhi Khandelwal: jhagda. Main jhagda kar rahi hu. Aaj itne salo tak tum usi bat ke piche pade ho. Tab tum apne us family ko kyun chorh dia aur mujhe kyun chuna jab tumhe isi tara ka bartaav karna tha mere sath. U destroyed my life.

Mr. Aadarsh Khandelwal: I destroyed your life. No. I spoiled my own life.  And whatever happened is just because of me. 

Mrs. Chandramukhi Khandelwal: Itna hi hai to wapis kyun nahi chale jate apne dusre parivar ke pas. Us bte ke pas jise tumhari kadra hi nahi hai. Usne to tumse bat bhi nahi ki.. par tum jao.. jao unke pass.. Main aur mera beta ji lenge kisi tara.

Mr. Aadarsh Khandelwal: chala jata. Bahut pehle hi chala jata. Par Ye tum bhi janti ho ki main kyun nahi ja paya. Ashwini ke pas.

Aur ek bat. Maine akhshay ko bahut pehle hi wish kar dia aur uske account mein paise bhi bhej diye.

( he lefts the room)

Mrs. Chandramukhi Khandelwal: (with anger and irritation)Ashwini.. itne salo baad bhi ashwini aur Abhay. Kab pichja choroge tum log mera. Aur kabtak bardast karna padega mujhe.

(Abhay was coming inside the house and Neha and Vivek were fighting in near doorframe)

Abhay: wow.. wat a scene. You both are still fighting. Now what is the point?

Vivek: dekho na Abhay. Is bewakuf ne mera bag gira dia.

Neha: tum bewakuf. Maine kya jan bujh kar giraya. Infact tumhari galti se ye bag gira. Thik se ek bag tak utha nahi sakte ho aur mujhe bewakuf bolte ho u .. u monkey.

Abhay: yaar itni si bat ke liye kyu lad rahe ho. Just pick up ur bag and get inside.

They comes inside and moves to stairs.

Hello my babies.

All turns back. And its Mr. Virendra Aggarwal. They comes to him with excitement. And hugs him.

Neha: papa. Itne din laga diye. Don't you miss us?

Mr. Aggarwal: ah.. beta tumhe to pata hai na.. delhi me waqt lag jata hai. Itne sare kaam rehte hain. But maine aaj ka din miss nahi kia. See mere tino bachcho ke khas din ke lie time par aa gaya. Wo bhi kuch sath me lekar. Aur sabse khas cheez hai mere Abhay ke liye. Aah.. don get jealous. Mere bachche ne puri india me top kia hai. Wo bhi apne dam par. M so proud of you.( hugging Abhay and Abhay responses with smile)

Neha: wow...  Abhay par to gifts ki bauchar ho gayi. And papa.. we are never jealous with him. use jo kuch bhi use milta hai he shares with us. (And Neha hugs Abhay)

Vivek: ya dad. Y we will feel jelous with our friend cum brother. (he too hugs him.)

Mr. Aggarwal (with a proud): love you kids. Tum teeno yun hi eksath me rehna.

Abhay: we will mamu.

Mr. Aggarwal lefts with a smile and Mrs Aggarwal too was there and she too had a satisfactory smile on her face.


Ends of sixth episode.

 

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
nice update ...
 so abhay's father misses him nd his ex wife ...

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hemarawat

nice update ...
abhay is so sweet nd nince brother ... waiting 4 abhiya meetng

aBHIYA COMING AFTER A LITTLE WAIT... :)


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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hemarawat

nice update ...
 so abhay's father misses him nd his ex wife ...

ABHAY'S PAST WILL REVEAL VERY SOON... Y HE IS WID HIS MAMA N MAMI.. WHERE IS ASHWINI..

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hey dear .. whn will u update .. update soon ...
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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged

 

Seventh episode

Mrs. Aggarwal and Mr. Aggarwal are sitting in their room. Having cups of tea in their hands.

Mr. Virendra Aggarwal: Supriya, aaj ashu ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. WO yaha hoti to apne bte KO dekh kar uski sari takleefein door ho jati.

Mrs. Aggarwal: tum sahi keh rahe ho. Aaj sach me uski kami khal rahi hai. Aaj abhay ne na sirf apne aapko balki hamare bachcho ko bhi aage badaya hai. WO bilkul apni maa ki tarah hai. Ashu bhi sabse pehle dusro ki fikar karti thi.

Mr. aggarwal: ashu ke sath job hi hua,supriya kahin na kahin main bhi iske liye zimmedar tha.

Mrs. Aggarwal: tum apne aap ko dosh kyun de rahe ho. Jo kuch bhi hua. It was all destiny. Maine bhi kuch kam doshi nahi hu. She s not only your sister but my best friend also. We were so close to each other(weeping)

Virendra comes to her and console her)

Mr. aagarwal: Supriya, come-on don't cry. Chup ho jao. Sham ko party hai. Chalo taiyar ho jao.

(Mrs Aggarwal still weeping)

Mr. Aggarwal: comeon supriya. Bachcho ke liye chup ho jao. Aaj unka din hai.

At Chandraniketan

Mrs. Chandra: aaj sham ko party me jana hai. Yaad hai na..

Malaya Chandra: hmmm… parties me to jana padega. if we want to stay here, we have to be in news. And this party is necessary to live in between them. And this party will be the medium to come in limelight.

Priya Chandra: But piya ne saaf saaf mana kar diya.

Malay Chandra: tell her that she has to come either by will or else. But she.. is coming. Mere pass uske nakhre bardast karne ka waqt bilkul bhi nahi hai.

Malay lefts.

Priya Chandra calls someone.

Mrs. Chandra: Piya. Get yourself ready for the party.

Piya in phone :( face is not shown. Only back view) but mama.. I told you.

Mrs Chandra: I am not asking you. It's your father's wish and you have to follow it.

Piya in phone :( only her pink lips are shown) but…

Mrs. Chandra: you don have other option. Just get ready. And come back. We will go together.

Piya: ohk fine… (With irritation and disconnects. still not face view)

In Aggarwal mansion

Everything is setting to be ready for the party. Servants are moving with stuffs in their hands.  Abhay instructing them.

Abhay: What is this… decorations abhi tak khatam nahi kia. Come on hurry up. Jyada time nahi hai.

And he piks a wash

Abhay: ye yaha nahi use waha rakh do. That will be better.

Mrs aggarwal ( she is completely ready for the party wearing a designer saree thinking) abhay bhi na.. ekdam aashu ki tarah hai. Abhi tak taiyar bhi nahi hua. Aur pure ghar ki fikar kar raha hai. (she smilingly comes to him)

Mrs aggarwal: abhay, beta abhi tak taiyar nah hue?

Abhay: mami wo thoda sa kaamhai use finish karte hi..

Mrs Aggarwal: baki sab main dekh lungi you get ready for the party.

Abhay moves but he saw something and

Abhay: Suresh, ye yahan lights kyun nahi lagaye.

Mrs Aggarwal: abhay ager ab tum nahi hile to pitayi hogi.

Abhay: oh.. mami m.. am just going and he goes upside.

Mrs. Aggarwal: uff.. ye ladka bhi na.. aur ek mere bachche hain.kash ki thodi si akal un dono mein bhihoti.

Ends of seventh episode

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