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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
When r u updating dear?

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Twenty Nine Episode

 

Abhay and Vivek enters in Aggarwal Mansion..


Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay.. itni der.. neha kahan hai?

Abhay: Mami wo apne ek friend ke ghar par gayi hai..

Mrs Aggarwal: What? Maine tum teeno ko sath me aane ko kaha than a..

Vivek: Mom.. we dono bodyguards gaye hain unke sath..

Mrs Aggarwal: Maine tum teeno ko sath me jald se jald aane ke liye kaha tha..

Vivek: par kyun mom..

Mrs Aggarwal: kyun bulaya tha ye baat bad me.. pehle Neha ko call karo aur bulao..

Abhay: ji mami.. (n he calls Neha)(gets a side)

Neha: ya Abhay..

Abhay: neha.. jaldi aao.. mami bula rahi hai..

Neha: kuch problem..

Abhay: dat I donno.. but its urgent..

Neha: okk.. m just coming..

Abhay: jaldi.. okk.. (and he disconnects)

 

In Chandra niketan

 

Piya comes.. and enters in her room..

 

Nancy: Piyali baby.. mad'm ne aapko bulaya he ..

Piya: ok m coming..

 

In her mother's room

 

Mrs Chandra: ah.. Piya.. kal ke evening ke apne sare plans cancel kar do..

Piya: (surprised n confused)  y mama..

Mrs Chandra: kyunki main keh rahi hu.. kal hum eek party me jana hai.. poore parivaar ke sath..

Piya: but aap aur dad chale jao na.. y u r involving me.. I don wanna go anywhere..

Mrs Chandra: suna nahi tumne.. poore parivar k sath.. tumhara bhai yaha hai nahi.. warna hum charo sath chalet.. but.. anyways.. kal apne saare plans cancel karo..


Piya leaves frustrated..


In her room..

Piya calls her bro..


Her bro: hey my angel..

Piya: bro.. aap mom ko samjhaiye na.. apnme kisi sade hue party ke liye mera evening bigad rahi hai..

Her brother: relax princess.. start se batao..

Piya narrates him

Her brother: Princess.. agar zaruri nahi hota to tumhe force kyu karte.. tum jaker ek bar dekho..

Jaise tumhe Aggarwal's ki party me itne achche friends mile hain.. is party me bhi mil jaye..ok baby.. I've l'll work to fo.. will catch u later..

Piya: (with a sad face)okk

 

In Aggarwal mansion


Mrs Aggarwal: jab tum sabko bola gaya hai sath rehne to kya zarurat thi kisi aur ke ghar yu akele jaane ki..

Neha: mamma.. wo hamara 1st day tha na..

Mrs aggarwal: toh.. tmhe pata nahi kya ki kitni badi musibat me hain hum sab..

Mr Aggarwal: Supriya.. ab bas bhi karo.. bachcho.. chalo ready ho jao.. aaj hum aap teeno ko shoping par le jayenge..

Vivek: wow dats cool..

Abhay: mamu.. I m not feeling well.. aap log jao.. me rest karna chahta hu..

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay.. kya hua..

Abhay: kuch nahi Mami.. bas bahut dard ho raha hai sar me..

Mr Aggarwal: sorry bachcho.. abhay ki tabiyat kharab hai to hum bad me chale jayenge..

Vivek: ya dad bad me jayenge.. Mom u continue.. aap kuch bol rhi thi Neha ko..

Mrs aggarwal looks angrily to VivekAngry

Abhay: mamu.. I'll b fine.. aap log jaiye.. me  medicine lekar so jaunga..

Neha: nahi abhay..

Abhay: chill Neha… I'll feel better after a tight sleep.. trust me.. u enjoy..

Mrs Aggarwal: are u sure.. hum kal bhi ja sakte hain..

Abhay: mamu.. thik he me hi chalta hu..

Mrs Aggarwal: aap log jaiye.. warna ye isi halat me jayega aur jyada taqleef hogi ise.. me rukti hu iske sath..

Mr Aggarwal: achcha.. jaisa tum thik samjho..

Neha: bye Abhay..(sad voice)

Abhay: c ya..

They leaves..

Mrs Aggarwal: main tumhare liye chai bana ke lati hu.. u'll feel better..

Abhay nodes in yes and left to his room..

 

In Vardhan house..

 

Geet: ab itni jaldi..

Maan: kyu problem kya hai,,

Geet: ab apki business party hai.. waha ke liye alag dhang se taiyar hona.. fir meri gudiya ka v khyal rakhna.. usko to lekar v nahi ja sakte..

Maan: geet business party me gudiya kaise jayegi..

Geet: wahi toh main bhi keh rahi hu.. aap ek kaam kariye.. aap akele chale jaiye..

Maan: main akela nahi ja sakta.. tumhe aur jayraj ko bhi sath jana hoga..

Geet: jayraj manega? Agar nahi mane toh aap force mat karna.. wo bechara akela us party me kya karega.. aur fir Gudiya ki tension bhi durr ho jayegi..

Maan: geet.. esa b nahi ho sakta.. tum ek babysitter kyu nahi rakh leti..

Geet: mere hote hue meri bachchi ko babysitter dekhegi.. aur fir zamana kharab he..

Jay enters..

Jay: hi bro..

Geet: jay.. kyat um kal sham ke liye Gudiya ko sambhal loge..

Maan: nahi tum bhi humare sath chaloge.. ek party me jana hai..

JayRaj: (thinking) baby sambhalne se party me jana better option hai.. bore hua tonikal bhi jaunga..(to Geet) bhabhi.. ye mujhse kahan sambhlegi aur bro ka kehna bhi to.. \

MAan: thik hai.. kal evening sharp 7pm..

(And he leaves)

Jayraj: bye bhabhi

And jay also leaves

 

End of twenty Nine Episode

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Posted: 14 February 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
nice update...
thks u updated yar waiting 4it
plzzz meake soon abhiya scenes buddy
cont soon now
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Posted: 14 February 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 February 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
AWESOME update dear:-):-)
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 Thirty epiosode

 

Abhay was in his room.. lying on his bed. Mrs Aggarwal comes

 

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay, ye lo tumhare liye green tea. Ab kaisa feel ho raha hai..

Abhay: (waking up) its same.Ouch

Mrs Aggarwal: have it.. u will feel good..

Abhay: okk (takes cup and sips) tastes good..

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay tumse kuch baat karni thi..

Abhay: haan mami.. kahiye na..

Mrs Aggarwal: Abhay.. kal hum ek business Party me jana hai.. aur humsab ka jana important hain..

Abhay: ok mami.. I'll b ready.. kitne baje jana hai..

Mrs Aggarwal: 7pm.. haan par neha aur Vivek lana ab tumhe hai.. kyunki we dono

Abhay: don worry mami.. jab man chal raha hu.. toh we to mana nahi karenge.. aur kiya to me mana lunga.. don worry of dat..

Mrs Aggarwal: thanks beta.. aur haan.. tumhe kale k aur kaam karna hai..

Abhay: kya mami..

Mrs aggarwal: kal humein tumhari mom ke lawyer ke pass jana hai.. aur tumhe uske liye college se chutti leni padegi..

Abhay: thik hai mami.. waise chai bahut achchi bani thi..

Mrs Aggarwal: ab tum rest karo..

 

Mrs aggarwal leaves.. and walks in.. suddenly she notices something..

 

In Mall


MLA's car stops and bodyguards come out wid der guns and opens d door of backseats.. Neha and Vivek come out.. 


they enter in Mall.. as usual khitpit between dem. Suddenly dey surrounds wid media.. clicking piks..


Neha: yaar firse.. uff I h8 dem

Vivek: first tym in lyf.. same pinch.. (neha looks cruicily) abhay ko aana chjahiye tha.. kitne achche se handle karta hai..

Neha: ya.. whatever.. just come out wid dem..

Vivek: how?

Neha: try to karo.. ok lets enter in a shop n bgs will handle..

 

They enter in a shop.. her cell rings.. she looks at the no. n piks a cloth


Neha: Vivek main abhi aati hu..

Vivek: ok


She enters inside TR


Neha: hi Blushing(with a blushing smile)HeartSmile

Boy in cell: hi.. kya hua.. itni jaldi kyu bulaya tha..'

Neha: Dad ko shopping par le jana tha..

Boy in cell: hmm.. so kya kya shopping ho rahi hai..

Neha: abhi to enter kiya hai aur media ne gher lia.. kisi tarah ek shop ke ander aaye aur thodi rahat mili..

Boy in cell: Abhay nahi tha wahan?

Neha: uski tabiyat kharab hai.. aur wo ghar par aaram kar raha hai..

Boy in cell: college me to wo thik tha..

Neha: ya.. but.. agar wo yaha hota to ye media ko sambhal leta kuch kaam nahi hai inhe.

Boy incell: we apna kaam hi to kar rahe hain.. pata nahi inhe kaise pata chal jata hai.. ab tum ho hi itni khubsurat ki koi bhi tumhe follow karega..

Neha: Blushing(with a blush) achcha.. ok abhi main rakh rahi hu.. baad me baat karenge..

Boy in cell: achcha kal college to aa rahi ho na..

Neha: ofcourse aa rahi hu..

Boy in cell: ok.. bye.. I love u..

Neha: I love u 2.. (and she disconnects) (comes out)

Sales girl: madm shall I pack dis..

Neha: no..

Vivek: jab lena nahi tha to uthaya kyu..

Neha: tumhe kya.. aur maine kuch kaha tumse ki tumne ye ladies top ku uthaya..

Vivek: se main tumharen liye lene wla tha.. par ab rehne do..

Neha: thik he thik he.. jyada bhao khane ki zarurat nahi.. ab socho bahar kaise jaoge..

Vivek: shall v call Abhay..

Neha: no way.. bechare ki tabiyat waise bhi kharab hai..

Vivek: toh..

Neha: hmm.. pata nahi..

Vivek: dad v na.. hume yaha chorh kar party meeting me chale gaye.. ok.. lets face dem.. bajki jo hoga.. dekh lenge..

Neha: okk..


They comes outside..

 

Reporters come and started asking questions..

 

In Tammy's room


Mrs Re: tamanna.. tumhari kal ke liye wear taiyar hai..

Tammy: ok mom.. n all r coming na.. else I eill get bore..

Mrs re: haan beta.. yash, abhay, neha vivek Piyali.. sab aa rahe hain.. lekin haan.. wahan tamij se pesh aana.. mere social relationship par asar nahi panda chahiye.. okk..

Tammy: ok mom..

Mrs Re: raat bahut ho chuki hai.. now u sud take rest.. good n8..

Tammy: gud n8 mom..

 

End of Thirtyth Episode

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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
hey ye story abhiya ke upar hai ya kisi aur couple ke upar haiConfused becoz abhi tak abhiya have not falling in love wth each other of unke dil me bhi kuch nahi hua haiConfused
hume abhiya ka romance kab milega ????????????????
gn tc ks hsd Smile
HAPPY KICK DAY Smile

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