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ArHiFF:Winter Storms & Cherry Blossoms [Note-Pg57] (Page 63)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Chapter 1: 
Lovely start. What I loved the most is how Arnav is playful in this one. I mean, its quite refreshing when he is not all cold and ruthless, trying to pin women to the wall/door. Can't believe I missed this one!! 

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Chapter 2:

Just the second chapter and I am already loving it so much!
The way you described how she was thinking was really really awesome!! Also I loved how you described her from Arnav's POV.
Ouch!! He is kinda sorta dating Lavanya and fantasizing about kissing Khushi!! And my crush goes *poof*(just kidding...serously, I can never get over this guy*sigh*)
Anyways, totally loved this update and this particular line is a proud winner of the best line of this chapter:
In simplest words, her ignorance to his charms was a gun shot to his attitude.
  

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
The dream was...THE DREAM. Like seriously, who wouldn't want a dream like THAT?? Oh wait, I know...Khushi!!(I bet anything you like but she SO wanted that dream)

I love Riddhima. She is cute and funny and even if its just the names, Armaan-Riddhima bring back old memories*dreamy eyed*

Ha! Totally loved how Arnav didn't insist on her riding with but ofcourse she had to ride with him in the end. It was inevitable!!LOL

The chapter was very well written but I it would make read much easier if there were paragraphs. It just looks very...cramped up!!(I hope you didn't mindSmile)

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Chapter 4: *fans herself*
Loved loved it!! Absolutely amazing!! I knew he would go for it and he did not disappoint!!Wink
Elevators are really the place to do all the wrong stuff and where there is "wrong" , there is Arnav(no, you cannot murder me for my lameness)
I am totally waiting for the next update whenever there is one and I am hoping there is an update...:D

Take care:)

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Awww dii, for all the comments above, I am suddenly inspired to write despite my crammed schedule. I will do my best to update in a couple of days time

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Book marking to read... But looks like you are not writing any more... Will you write this further??? Please update further...

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Originally posted by preethi.saseeda

Book marking to read... But looks like you are not writing any more... Will you write this further??? Please update further...


Hey Dii. Yes. I haven't written in a long time. Not only this, anything for that matter. But no, I don't intend to leave any of my works incomplete. I will get back to updating regularly in a while. 
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awesome story .read it in a go..
kindly end me a pm for the update,

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