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ArHiFF:Winter Storms & Cherry Blossoms [Note-Pg57] (Page 14)

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Hi!
It's really good!! I love it! I really like your writting style and it's creating a wonderful visual picture Smile 
Please continue and thank you for the pm.
And pm me when you update it Smile 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
i loved the prologue...cant wait to read more...its a totally different take on arhi...please cont soon...

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
sounds nice
fab prologue do continue soon
will be waiting for chap 1Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
i liked how it started
cant wait for more Smile

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
wow! nice

do pm me updates!

thanks for the pm!!

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DTeacher Senior Member
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged

Hi Amal,

Thanks for inviting me to read the prologue - really nice start. Have to admit that I was slightly confused at the start, as you seemed to flit from 'third person' to '1st person' then back to '3rd person' for Khushi's character. Found it very enjoyable though - thank you!

Edited to add: If you want to amend it, it starts where you write ''I had worked with him twice and that was enough for me.''   and  it is ''he hung around''  not  ''he hanged around''



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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
14 pages of prologue comments. I doubt you need a confirmation from me that you write really well. 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DTeacher

Hi Amal,

Thanks for inviting me to read the prologue - really nice start. Have to admit that I was slightly confused at the start, as you seemed to flit from 'third person' to '1st person' then back to '3rd person' for Khushi's character. Found it very enjoyable though - thank you!

Edited to add: If you want to amend it, it starts where you write ''I had worked with him twice and that was enough for me.''   and  it is ''he hung around''  not  ''he hanged around''


Thanks a lot dii. I will amend them now. Din't proof read it before. Sorry.Embarrassed

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