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Manveer FF: |Choomantar| PMlist & Ch.4 (Pg9) Jan 4 (Page 11)

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Uh-oh! Eehhh! J is so evil...but i m gonna love what you have in store...I feel bad for UV...poor thing but Unnati is soo cute!
Awesome updte...i just want more of ur work haha but thnks for the pm

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
omgosh :D

your such a fabulous writer , I've never come across an FF as good as your's. I am all in praises. The way you pin down Uday is just Haaayyye :)  There is always a scene or a line in every updates that leaves me cracking/smiling or thinking of even after m done reading .

Do add me to you Pm list please :) 

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
It was SOWWW cute
loooveed uday's diagloges..
and awesomely written
please do continue soon
Please PM me also..
Thnk youuuBig smile

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
This chapter was really good.got to see a slightly different side of Uday.oh no J ko patha chal gayaOuch
ab kya hoga?lovely update.enjoyed it a lotBig smile

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Its SIMPLY SUPERB Clap n thnanks for d pm Hug

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
how did i not come across your FF before?  i just read the first part & it's so good!  I like how you've set up the story & made Manyata's character a little more smart! LOL Loved how Uday is hating the guards ..& for some reason this line cracked me up " "Jaan-e-man, kaha aa rahi ho?" said one of them getting out of the jeep."  reminds me of Shammi Kapoor going "badan pe sitare, lapate hui.. oh jaan-e-tamana..kahan ja rahe ho?" LOL

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
"Manyata turned around to see HIM. Oh no! not him again. Uday walked towards them with the jeep's headlights shining on him like a spotlight. His hands in his pocket, a smooth walk and a calm smile on his face.(A solid hero waali entry)"

so good!  i love how you have Udayveer's hottness and intellligence in full form while Manyata is persistent as ever.  Off to part 3 Wink

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
omy gosh! totally in love with your FF! i reiterate, how did i not come across it earlier??!??!? 
loving the banter, and suspense near the end of this part, now on to part four!

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