Chap 1:I had an amused smile from the beginning till the end. It was so great! :D
Chap 2:
ROFL. I loved your personal commentaries like "A solid hero waali entry" "full hero ishtyle". They made me start 🤣🤣 every time!
Best line: "Yaa phir aapke haath per nochlegi, sach, experience se bol raha hoon"
Best part: "Altu Jalal tu, Aayi balaa ko taal tu" and everything that followed. 🤣🤣🤣
The whole chapter was bloody entertaining! So filmy and action-romancy and what not :P
On an end note, I LOVED it and please do PM me when you update!!!
TC.
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