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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 86)

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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
-Sorry for the late reply dear-
Wonderful part.. Loved the surprise confession by Geet.
Please cont soon

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nice parts !!!!

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nice parts!!!

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                                                       PART  37

Geet  and Maan walked hand in hand , Geet rested her head on his shoulder.

The cool breeze that was gently touching their hair and body was so soothing ,peaceful.

While walking they reached towards the lawn of  Maan's  old house.

Geet tightened her grip ,she wanted to enjoy this closeness with her love ,she never thought that such beautiful moments would ever have a place in her life .

She was more than happy today ,her happiness could not be expressed in few words ,what Maan has given her is priceless.

All the thoughts made her smile ,his closeness was tickling her sensations.



Tumhe thand nahi lag rahi?

Bilkul nahi.

Geet ,it's a cold night ...andar chalo.

Maan!! Mann nahi kar raha!! ,she made a cute baby face.

The place was very foggy and both of them went in  after some time.

Geet went to the washroom to splash some water on her face . She opened the tap of the wash basin but it wasn't working ,she tried to open the other tap but she opened the shower by mistake ,before she could realise that and off the tap ,her hair was almost wet.

Areh yaar!! She murmured to herself.

Itni raat ko baal gele ho gaye!! Ppch...mujhe sukhaane padenge.

She went out. He hair was almost wet and so was she .

While passing through the room ,Maan looked at her ,she was looking extremely beautiful .

The water droplets on her face, neck and waist  were tempting  him to go near her and kiss her.

He went towards her , Geet could feel his presence ,she looked at him .


Maan inched closer and wrapped his hands around her and pulled her closer.

He smiled and whispered in her ear ,Geet you are looking extremely beautiful ,saying this he gently kissed her wet neck

Maan's touch sent a chill down her spine.

She smiled and threw her hands around his neck.

Accha ji ,toh hamesha khoobsurat nahi lagti??

Hmmm??...she raised her brows demanding an answer for her question.

You always look beautiful for my eyes.

Accha !!!! She blinked her eyes innocently.

Haanji bilkul you wanna know how beautiful you look???  said Maan naughtily while tightening his grip around her bare waist  .

Geet removed his hands and made herself free from his grip and moved backwards.

She smiled at him teasingly.

That smile was enough  for Maan Singh Khurana to drive crazy.

Maan moved towards her and pinned her to the wall.

Tell me Ms. Geet Handa...don't  you wanna know how beautiful you are ??

She smiled from her corner of her lips.

She leaned closer and whispered in his ears.

I would love to...replied Geet while stroking her hands through his hair she leaned forward  , stood on her toes and placed kiss at the corner of his mouth , teasing him and making him ask for more

She again kissed her lower lip.

Aaah...enough my love ...Maan murmured

He pulled her  more closer , and  with his other hand he removed the strands of wet hair from her face and covered her mouth with his  , exploring each other's interiors  , he tender kiss soon turned into a passionate one , It grew more passionate.

Maan rubbed his hands against back sensuously awakening all her desires.

They kissed like there was no tomorrow , completely drowned in desire.

The lips of both the lovers were enjoying the pleasure.


The broke the kiss and breathed heavily .

Bas..itni hi khoobsoorat??Geet asked with naughtiness filled  in her eyes.

Maan smiled , Ahaan...Maan smirked...I told you..not just beautiful...extremely beautiful.

He  unhooked her blouse and removed it , he  rubbed his hands around her bare shoulders.

He planted wet-kisses on her shoulder .

Geet was enjoying the pleasure.

He rubbed his hands across her shoulder sensuously.

He tightened his grip across her waist ,lifted her and make her lie down  on the bed.

His  hands reached her almost bare back  to unhook her b**.

She could feel his cold hands on her bare back .

She opened his shirt buttons..

All the barriers across them were removed  in few moments.

He rubbed her back , His touch sent a chill down her spine ,she gulped her saliva.

Geet lied down and closed her eyes ,submitting herself to him .

All her beauty that she has been preserving  was now ready to submit itself to him .

Maan  kissed her exposed skin , tickling her sensations.

Her fragrance was driving him crazy.

He reached her b****** and  gently kneaded them , igniting the fire in their bodies .

He could feel the softness of her smooth skin ,he explored her with is tender touch. He trailed kisses from her neck to her shoulder and then stomach.

His warmth sent a chill down her spine , Their fingers intertwined as both their bodies were welded together .Both their souls met .

They were drowning in the bottomless ocean of desire , Her fragrance was igniting a strange passion within him making him yearn for more.

Their desire was driving them crazy .

They spent their whole night together making love .


The next morning ,Geet opened her eyes and  found herself resting on his bare chest.

She smiled and looked at him , he was still sleeping.

She gently kissed his forehead and whispered.

I love You Maan.

Those words brought a smile on her lips.

She wrapped the bed-sheet and went inside the washroom.

She looked at herself in the mirror ,she remembered the last night ,she never felt so beautiful ,she smiled .

She came out of the shower .

Maan hugged her from the back .

Good Morning my love.

He kissed her.

Maan kya kar rahe ho??

Accha ..kya kar raha hoon??

Do you wanna know?? ,Maan smiled naughtily.

Maan...please...Jaldi jao, aur fresh hoke aao.

Tumhare liye ek surprise hai.

Ek aur surprise??

Haan bilkul ,just get ready and come soon.


Maan ,JALDI Jaao!!

Yes ma'am...aapki har baat sar-aankhon par!!

As soon as Maan left Geet smiled to herself.

Maan was dressed in a white shirt and black jeans ,looking extremely handsome as usual.

So now I'm ready...mera surprise kaha hai?? Asked Maan who was curious like a small boy.

Geet hid her hands at her back and moved towards him ,it was evident that Geet was hiding something in her hands.

Maan ,aankhen band karo!!

Geet...yeh kya hai??

Maine kaha na...aankhen band karo.

Accha...Maan moved closer , Geet moved backwards ,he passed a sexy smile and Geet stopped there itself .

Maan held her hands , a camera...It was a camera in Geet's hands.

Camera?? Maan smiled.

Yeah she threw her hands around his neck

Happy Birthday Mr. Photographer and placed a peck on his cheek.

Thanks a lot Geet.

Waise Maan ,aaj kal na tum kuch zyaada hi Maan Singh Khurana ke avatar me rehte ho!!

I'm missing my sweet photographer ,so aaj ka din Mere pyaare se ever-poetic photographer Maan ke naam ,sirf Maan.

Maan ,mujhe yeh jagah acche se ghumna hai...and what can be more amazing than exploring this place with you and your camera??

Oohh Geet...I'm so happy today.

I was missing this part of mine so badly.

Thanks a lot again ,he hugged her.

Toh chale??


Maan was so excited for the ride with Geet.

They both came out and Maan handed the camera to Geet and was locking the door.

Maan...waise..tum apne saare doston se mile kya kal raat?? I mean were all of your friends present??

Hmmm...yeah almost..!!


Haan...woh...ek hai jisse main hai mila.

Maan..kahi woh to nahi jo abhi tumhare peeche khadi hai??

Maan quickly turned back and looked behind him just to find out girl neatly dressed in a blue sari and her hair tied into a thick and long braid.

Chavi???Maan uttered in excitement.

It didn't take a minute for Maan to recognize her ,one of her very old friends and his first...ermm...yeah first crush!!

She was still the same .

Maan couldn't explain his feelings in words , he was meeting after a long time.



They both said together.

He hugged her , chavi..!!damn..I missed you!!

Kaise ho Maan??

I'm fine ...I;m very good...tum..tum Maan fumbled ...

tum kaisi ho??

Main bhi bilkul thik hun.

Maan you have changed a lot, she said while looking at him.

Just then , Geet's phone rang and she excused herself and went to answer it.

Maan and Chhavi talked for a while.

Sorry main kal raat ko nahi aa payi thi..woh mere bacche mujhe jaane nahi de rahe the.

Kids?? He thought that she must be married ,but kids?? He was happy to hear about her.

Geet ne mujhe bulaaya tha...Maan are very lucky ,Geet is a gem of a person!!Bahut acchi hai.

Maan smiled , Chavi  turned more shy , may be because she is married now...guessed Maan.

They talked for a while .Chavi soon left from there but not before inviting him to her house.

He promised her to visit her house before leaving this place.


Precap : Maan-Geet's ride Wink

              Geet is jealous of...??Shocked the camera!!LOL


Finally updated this after a long time ,hope you liked this part Embarrassed


Edited by World-of-Dreams - 24 February 2012 at 10:04am

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Posted: 24 February 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged
omg!i was missing ds a lot...
Luvd geet's gift for maan...
Maan met chavi,his first crush..Wink
Precap s pretty interesting...
geet jealos of camera..
I think when maan got the camera he completely forgot geet...LOL

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Posted: 24 February 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
simply amazing

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Posted: 24 February 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

omg!i was missing ds a lot...
Luvd geet's gift for maan...
Maan met chavi,his first crush..Wink
Precap s pretty interesting...
geet jealos of camera..
I think when maan got the camera he completely forgot geet...LOL

Aaaw...even I was missing this , finally I updated TCL after a long time!!! Big smile
I'm glad you liked the update.Big smile
Yeah...Geet's now jealous of her sautan..oops...her camera!! LOL

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