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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the updates
love the way each of them r giving support to each other
their love story is going in a good pace hope they dont have any trouble coming up in lucknow or here in delhi
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago

                                                      PART 41

 She came back to Lucknow after many years ,when she was a teenager she used to visit her relatives with her mom ,dad and bro but now she was alone ,only she knew how badly she wished Maan was with her.

Here in this city lied many memories ...Shravya herself came to the airport to pick up Geet.

They both soon reached the  house ,Geet was hesitating to move forward ,she remembered Maan's words...I believe in Geet ,you are strong enough to face everything ,she stepped forward and lot of eyes were on her as soon as she entered she heard few murmurings around her  ,she felt awkward ,one of those ladies cam towards Geet ...GEET?? Kitne dinon baad?? Where were you all these days??

Geet had no answer for this sudden question .

Shravya interrupted that lady ,Aunty Geet is so tired today ,let her rest for sometime ...chal Geet

Shravya told Geet to rest in her li'l sister's room and closed the door.

While closing the door ,Shravya told to herself ..Geet you came here because of me and I'll not let any-one hurt you.

Geet entered the room and opened her suitcase.

While seeing around ,she saw something which shocked her ,One of the tables was filled with Maan's  photographs and photographs clicked by him .



Geet was utter shocked ,she didn't bring those photographs ,so how come they are in this room.

Suddenly she heard a knock on the door.

She opened it.

Hi Geet didi ,a girl hugged her.

How are you?? I'm Nitya , Shravya di's sister ,we met each other years ago ,then I was in school.I don't expect you to remember me ,so di what are you doing now?? I'm so happy to see you after a long time , Shravya di told a lot of things about you ,now I'm in my second year of graduation.

Nitya kept talking continuously.

Geet smiled ,Geet didi you are comfortable na..in this room ,Nitya's eyes fell on her study table and the scattered photographs.

Oh so sorry di ,she piled up all the scattered photographs

Nitya...yeh

Di...yeh...he is Maan , a very famous photographer...I'm a huge fan of him.

I  always buy all the magazines in which his clicked photographs get  published.

This is his photo , he is so handsome na...He is damn cool..!!!

The way he looks at things...Haaye..I love his perspective ,his photographs are always special and beautiful ,even I purchased a camera recently.

He is my inspiration...Haaye!!

Geet stood with her mouth open ..Nitya speaks a lot and she is one crazy fan of a photographer Maan!

Di...now he even handles Khurana Constructions..It's a quite famous construction company in Delhi!!You are from Delhi na..you should have heard about them.Even hamaare hone wale jiju works there.

WHAT??

Haan Aditya...He is a CA there.

Geet was getting shock after shock. She was unable to believe this.

Accha Geet didi..you take rest ,I'll come back later  ,after that we'll go for shopping ...there's very less time na..so Engagement is tomorrow and shaadi after two days..areh..you know na..why am I repeating things?!! Main bhi na..she hit her head and ran out of the room with rocket speed.

Geet sat on the bed with her mouth open.

What's happening .??she thought!!

Just then Maan called her and even Maan told that Adi gave an invitation for his marriage and that too is in Lucknow and even Maan will be coming there ,Geet told him that they both got an invitation for same marriage but from different persons.

Geet and Maan had a small talk and Geet soon dozed off as she has to get ready for shopping after some time.

After some time they got ready for the shopping.

Shravya ,Geet and Nitya went out .

Shravya's eyes were searching for some-one and in the mall Geet's eyes fell on Adi who was waiting for someone (Shravya ) with his suitcase ,she understood that Adi came directly from the airport to meet Shravya ,she smiled naughtily.

Shravya ...You go to that shop ,I'll come back in a while.

Geet smiled and stood behind Adi.

Ahem..Ahem..She coughed.

Adi turned back.

Geet??!!

Tum yaha kaise???

Kya baat hai Jija ji...aap kisi ka wait kar rhe hai???

Jija ji?

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Precap : Geet teasing Adi

            Dev's haalat in his office??

            Maan at the engagement...as Geet's fiance or Adi's boss.

            Nitya's reaction ?? πŸ˜†

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved the update awesome di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wat a precap...
next would be GEET getting JEALOUS...
i jus love this emotion...it brings out every hidden part of us...
nwz ll be waiting for more updates...
di me first cant believe...
m happie dancing...
bale bale
Edited by mayapari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum part...
Omg!Nitya s a die-hard fan of maan and his photography..!
I I thot maan jaan buchkar geet ko beja tha,so that she can handle the situation alone..
But even he was unaware of this fact..
waiting to c wat happens when nitya c maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee
waant some more updates 2dayyy
it was awesomeee
superbbb
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem love your double blast



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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mayapari

wow loved the update awesome di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wat a precap...
next would be GEET getting JEALOUS...
i jus love this emotion...it brings out every hidden part of us...
nwz ll be waiting for more updates...
di me first cant believe...
m happie dancing...
bale bale

Thanks a lot ...dearie ...I'm glad you liked it .
Wil update soon 
Love ya πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeee

waant some more updates 2dayyy
it was awesomeee
superbbb

Haila...one more update today?? πŸ˜²
Will update this on Sunday dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
nami pls give the next part soon..i cant hold my eager reading the precap..
two parts were too awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
i wud love maan to b there as geet's fiance
omg such a small world and they r there for same wedding