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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 3)

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                                              PART 25

Maan stood there confused

What happened to Geet suddenly??

Maan called her after sometime but she didn't pick up the call.

He called her once again but she still didn't pick up the call.

Maan was getting more confused  and more tensed .

On the other side Geet walked while wiping her tears , she walked in no particular direction.

She went to purana qila and sat there .

She sat there silently with her knees drawn against her chest.

Her phone rang and she picked up the call

Geet ...tum kaha ho??kaisi ho?? Maan said in a worried tone

Maan ,I'm fine main tumse thodi der baad baat karti hoon

Geet...

Maan please.

Ok Geet

She kept her mobile back in her bag .

Maan on the other side was unable to understand anything ,he was worried for her ,he wanted to talk to her very badly.

He was worried about her .

__Khurana Constructions__

The next morning everyone was busy for the meeting and the presentation process.

Maan tried to talk to Geet during all this but Geet paid no attention ,she talked to him only about the designs and whenever Maan used to raise any personal issue she would leave from there.


Maan was geeting worried but at the same time her behaviour was increasing his anger...every time she ignored him the lever of his anger only increased.

Soon the presentation was successfully over.

But Maan wasn't happy at all ,Geet's different behaviour was making him more confused.

Enough is enough Geet...I need to talk to you!! Tumhe mujhse baat karni hi hogi.

He stood to leave his cabin and just then Geet came to his cabin.

Sir ,ye files.

Maan snatched the files from her and kept them on his table.

Geet  mujhe tumse baat karni hai ,What's the matter Geet??

Sir ,Please this is an office.

Geet I said I need to talk to you!!

Sir..we'll talk about it later.

Just stop it Geet, enough is enough!!!

He held her wrist and pulled her towards him.


She looked at him

Maan leave me.!!

Bolo Geet ,mujhe poora haq hai janne  ka!!!

Haq??

Haan Geet ,bolo why are you avoiding me?? What happened suddenly ?? you aren't even talking to me properly!! What's the matter??

Maan please leave me!!

Bolo Geet.

The pitch of both Maan and Geet started to increase

Maan  please...

 Geet bolo!!

She  pushed him .

I don't know Maan,Geet shouted.

Because you are always in my mind , because you have become an important part of my life unknowingly , I feel incomplete if I don't see you ,If I don't talk to you and I don't want this to happen Maan.

Geet lowered her voice ,her eyes were filled with tears.


I simply don't want this happen

But why Geet ?


Maan was unable to understand whether to be happy or to be sad because she doesn't want it to happen ,she was trying to run away from her feelings.

Because you deserve much more happiness  than what I can give you Maan and you can even get it !! Your life is surrounded with so many wonderful and lively people who can always spread smiles in your life Maan ,you are lucky to have them all .

Geet  lekin ...

No Maan ...!! I can never fill such happiness in your life like you fill in mine,you deserve more happiness than what I can give. Everytime, I had to lose everything that I had in my life and nothing more that.

Geet ...

Maan Please

Geet meri baat suno ..Mujhe jaana hai Maan

Geet wasn't ready to listen to Maan.

Maan raised his voics and looked straight into her eyes


Geet  tum yeh kaise bata sakti ho ki what I need in my life or what I deserve??

Tumne kaise decide kar liya ki , meri zindagi mein khushi lane wale tum nahi aur koi hai??

Tell me Geet..how can you decide on my behalf??

Geet let me tell you one thing

Meri  hasi tumhaari hasin se judi hui hai!! Nothing can make me more happy than your smile ,than you yourself!! You are so genuine and an amazing person .

Tumhari himmat ,tumhara honsla they bring a smile on my face !!!

Geet I thought slowly things were changing but suddenly what happened??

Why are you hell-bent on proving yourself that you can not be happy??

No life is a flower bed Geet ,but if everyone thonks the way you are thinking right now no-one in the world can be happy!!

WE have to overcome all these in life and it doesn't mean that you forget to smile while overcoming these hardships!!

Today you have disappointed me Geet ,not because you thought of staying away from me but because you still think your life is colourless!!

Koi  tumhari zindagi nahi badal sakta na main na koi aur ...it's in your hands Geet

If you want to make it miserable  ,no matter how much I try things will not change!!

And If you want to smile and stand up then no-one can have the guts to snatch that smile.

But today you have disappointed me Geet.

Maan left his cabin without letting Geet to speak any more.

Geet just stood still with no more words to speak ,her eyes were filled making all the images around her blurred .


His words echoed in her mind

Meri  hasi tumhaari hasin se judi hui hai!! Nothing can make me more happy than your smile ,than you yourself!!

 Today you have disappointed me Geet ,not because you thought of staying away from me but because you still think your life is colourless!!

Koi  tumhari zindagi nahi badal sakta na main na koi aur ...it's in your hands Geet

If you want to make it miserable  ,no matter how much I try things will not change!!

She knelt down and leaned her head against the table .

He is true but It wasn't even  easier for her to realise his presence in her life and just accept it ,her past was bound to come in front of her before  she accepts  her feelings which she had once buried.


Was it her fault to think about all the previous things before accepting a very new chapter in her life?

Were her doubt wrong?? 

His words again echoed

Meri  hasi tumhaari hasin se judi hui hai!! Nothing can make me more happy than your smile ,than you yourself!!

May be yes ,may be not ...may be it was bound to happen.

How many turns in this small life she thought.

She sat there still.

 



Edited by World-of-Dreams - 29 December 2011 at 1:20am

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Hey friends..hope you liked this partBig smile
I dunno how many of you liked it  but still  I felt that this part was somewhat needed before proceeding further.Embarrassed
So please do tell me your response regarding this partSmile
I'm eagerly waiting for it. Day Dreaming
And pls don't forget to click the like buttonBig smile
And once again thanx a lot for your lovely response which made me open a new threadHug
Love you all
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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged

really nice update

hope she will think what he said
but maan truly conveyed his feelings


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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
awesome update dear...ClapHug
loved it...
soo much pain... they both r correct...
really life is not a flower bed... every one has to face hardships...
loved it to the core...
waiting to read more dear...
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
congrats on new thread...
i actually loved this update...
this was much needed according to me...
maan had to know wat was going in her mind and the same with geet too...
she had to know where she stands in his life...
eagerly waiting for the next

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