The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Both the parts are awesome...๐Ÿ˜›
loved the confession scene, it was  mindblowing...
waiting to know the next...

Thanks a lot dear...I'm glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

some1 has a romantic side too...(n i am not talking abt maaneet..๐Ÿ˜†...rather the writer...๐Ÿ˜›)


loved their confession...

loved the way dev called her bhabhi n she didnt hesitate or looked embarrassed...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


Ohoo..I'm not a dushman of romantic stories after all ๐Ÿ˜†
I'm glad you liked the update.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear
loved it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

awesome updates...

i found it funny how maan discovered their little secret...
hehehe..yeah surprise parties get quite predictable at times..blv me it's my personal experience ๐Ÿ˜†
poor dev...
all his effort went to drain...
๐Ÿ˜†
and finally the surprise...
that was so sweet n nice of geet to bring al of maan's friends together for his birthday after such a long time...
Ahh...meeting all the old friends and living all those moments again is such a wonderful experience ๐Ÿ˜
dev calling geet bhabhi...
and his senti n filmy talks...hehe...
Yeah...I too loved Dev's senti part ๐Ÿ˜ณ

and then the much awaited part...their confession...it was awesome...i loved how geet confessed and maan reciprocated...it was just amazing...i really loved it...
Thanks a lot Zahra...I'm glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...
Thanks a lot for this lovely comment sweety...love ya ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

lovely updates ๐Ÿ˜Š
loved the confession๐Ÿ˜Š

I'm glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: srirad

Amazing updates๐Ÿ‘

Loved maaneet moments๐Ÿ˜ณ
dev-geet conversation niceโญ๏ธ
Maaneet confession mind blowingโญ๏ธ
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment Sriradha..I'm happy that you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipeee

ab full on romance hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome mindblowing updates yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow,,, nam awesome updates yaar...
loved them to the core...
coming to part 35:
maan guessed the surprise.. lol... poor dev...
wow... he met his old friends because of geet... thats really cool.. loved that part very much..
part 36:
wowww their confession...
geet confessed first... thats really nice, awesome... loved that part very very much...
their hug, their kiss... lake scene... awesome nam... great job...
but sad that u r ending soon... miss this ff...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
u reminded me my frnds ..
i miss them..
kash wo muje mile..
yesehi kuch surprise ho..
just loved this part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
awww dey had a surprise bday party for maan
and finally dey confessed sooo cute <3
ur gonna end dis ff :( gonna miss it
cont soon

harneet <3Edited by -harneet.gill- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww they confessed ๐Ÿ˜ณ


cont. soon