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Posted: 13 January 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Fairly good story and pretty good character development. Oddly enough I can actually picture most of this happening. I was also very surprised to find such a story on IF... lol! If you don't mind some constructive criticism,  my only suggestion would be  to proofread a bit more to eliminate some minor word errors and such. Anyways, I added you as a buddy and would love a PM to see where this is headed! 

Edited by luvya4ever - 13 January 2012 at 10:17pm

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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
whoa!!! super hot!!Thumbs Up update soon n plz do pm me!! 
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged
great update!!! cant wait for the nxt one!!!
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Awesome hot update...thanks 4 the PM...
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
awesome update dear.. really loved it.. ohh so next part bua also will know so time for some drama.. waiting for it.. pm me when you update...
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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Gosshhh that was supah -hawwwt !!! Day Dreaming
Continue soon and thanku for this hot update ...
add me to pm list... Big smile

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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
ohh hw sweet ov dem..cnt bliv dey'll actually w8 till marriage..Heart
fab update hun..Hug
hmm quite scared 4 da nxt part since Buaji is gna learn abt all dis..Ermm
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Posted: 15 January 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
hhaawwwttt part 

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