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Love Beyond Limits !! THREAD 3 pt 91 pg 128 (Page 23)

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recap :
dadi - mujhe kabab me haddi nahi banana...
dev rolled her eyes - koi yakin nahi karega ke aap maan singh khurana ki dadi hai..
dadi - kya matlab...
dev - u two r opposite poles...
dadi giggled thinking..d two poles seems to cuming in 1 side now a days...

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            Part 80


maan jumped in from d window...n looked around..
but geet was no where to be seen...
he sighed n kept d packet on bed...loking around...
he checked d door..it was locked from in...
confused maan thought..." if d room is locked from in..den geet has to be in room..but where is she..."
he checked in balcony but geet was not dere...
he moved towrds bathroom n knocked on d door 
maan gently - geet...
geet from inside - maan bas 2 min...aa rahi hun...
maan - ohhk..take ur time...
saying so maan went near dressing table n checked himself if he is looking good...
just den his eyes fell on d photoframe which was in 1 corner of dressing tabel...
he picked it up..to hav a closer look...
his lips curved inot a sweet smile..watching d snap of a small and cutest child he could ever think...
and for sum reason..he knew...its geet's childhood pic...
he couldn't believe she was such a cute child...
dose small small curly strands here n dere...
dat small reddish white nose...
dose cute pink cheeks...
dose petal like beautifull pink rosy lips...
dose small small hands holding a cute teddy bear tight...
dat beautifull white dress..reaching till her small small knees
and dose fancy shoes on her milky white feet...
she looked like a real fairy doll from d world of disney...
wish..he would hav found her far b4...
wish he would hav been part of her life from sum old time...
 he wished to be grown watching her...
but he found her now..at d age of 25...
but he is happy..atlast he found his princess...
d one made for him...
he was drinking every beautifull sight of her cute snap..staring at it motionless...
...
d sound of door crack open bringing him back to his senses and he immediately kept d frame down...turning to meet...
...
...turning to meet...
...turning to meet...

d words got caught in his throat...
his tongue betrayed him to say anything...
his eyes betrayed him to blink...
his heart betrayed him to beat...
...
n dere she was...
...wrapped in a pure white bathrobe...reaching till her knees...exposing her white milky legs..wid a knot tied at d back of neck...
geet looked like a real goddes of beauty...
dose wet curly strands dancing here n dere..all around her neck...n teasing her cheeks...
dat white milky skin of her face..shining wid d water drops resting here n dere...
his eyes caught a water drop..which ran down from her hairs..reaching her neck..further collar bone..n finally disolving in her bathrobe...
his throat went dry wid seductive sight in front of his eyes...
innocence in eyes...and seduction in body...deadly combination..
and unknown to himself..he walked towrds her..lost in his own world...

...
taking bath in a hurry...she instantly wore d bathrobe n came out...
only to find maan turning to face her in...
wattt
omggg
wat an idiot u r geet...
u were not alone in d room like everyday...
u knew maan is in d room and still u came our in bathrobe...
her stupid thoughts came to end wen she saw maan's eyes staring at her motionless...
dere was sumthing..sumthing starnge in his eyes which her held her captive in his gaze...
she fellt him drinking every feature of her face...
like he was making a sketch of her in his heart..carving her dere...forever...
n den...
she saw him walking towrds her...
her breaths quickened...her heart beats fastened...
...
maan stood right in front of her...
its been long..he might hav blinked...his eyes gave up..but his heart couldn't...
geet watched d flow of emotions playing behind dose dark passionate eyes...
she knew..how much control he was keeping on himself...
...
she closed her eyes gently at his mercy...
she was his...every beat of her was his...every cell of her was his...everything abt her was his...
den y to torture him by not letting him break his control...
maan saw his geet closing her eyes for him...
how on d earth she manages to love him up to such extent...
lost in d track..his fingers gently raised to touch her cheek...
as d back of his fingers touched d delicate skin of her cheek...she let out a heavy breath...
maan's fingers traced a line from her cheek..till it reached her ear...
he tucked d wet starnd gently behind her ear...
his breath gave up...his throat swallowed d breath..making slight moaning sound...
geet gently whispsred - maan...
maan instantly put his index finger on her delicate lips...
maan - shhh...
geet gently opened her eyes...
as deir eyes once again got lost in each other gaze..
maan moved a step more closer to her...
" u dnt know...how long i hav waited for U..." , uttered maan in his most husky and possessive voice (total edward cullen style )
geet was to lost in his world to reply...
geet barely could whisper - maan...
" u dnt know...how much control i need to hold myself..." , uttered maan as his palm gently moved down snaking her neck...while his thumb carrased her throat...making geet go creazy wid his passion...
geet let mout another breath...
geet tried again - maan...
" u dnt know...wat ur mere presense do to me..." , uttered maan...as his another palm care to snake her neck from another side...it was like his neck was cupped by his palms..while his other thumb carrased seductively just below her ear...
his passion...his possession...his touch was driving geet to insanity...as d situation was not helping at all...
geet breathed hard - maan...
" u dnt know...how much desire i hav for u..." , uttered maan..letting out a deep breath..trying hard to control himself...his eyes were becuming dark in passion...
geet was loosing herself - maan...
" u dnt know...ur single breath..makes me feel sumthing beyond heaven..." , uttered maan..gently pulling her closer to him...
geet was lost in d flow of emotions - maan...
" u dnt know...how alone i was...wen u were not dere for me..." - uttered maan as his facila expressions changed..poessessiveness taking all d control..she is his...she is his...
geet took 1 step closer..if dere was any space left - maan...
" u dnt know...u r most beautifull thing ever happened in my life..." , uttered maan..gently resting his forehead wid hers...closing his eyes...
geet to gave in willingly - maan...
" u dnt know...i vil land up destroying d whole world if anybody tries to enter in our dreamworld..." , uttered maan gently carrasing his nose wid hers...
geet put her both hands around his waist..holding him to her - maan...
"u dnt know...how much LOVE i do to U..." , uttered maan..in d most romantic tone he never knew he had...
geet was on 9th cloud hearing dat...
an emotions..an excitement...sumthing different ran through her body..giving her goosebumps of happiness...and a beautifull smile twinkled her cheeks...
maan was so so so much satisfied to see dose expressions...
geet gently kissed his forehead whispering over his skin - KISS ME MAAN...
...
maan's eyes instantly opened..hearing it...
he looked straight through her eyes...
her eyes were filled wid unlimited emotions...
maan smiled and gently kissed her forehead whispering over her skin - i want to make it special jaan...
...
geet smiled hearing dat..so did maan...
maan gently and lovingly - tum change kar lo..i vil wait in balcony...
saying so he kissed her nose sweetly and left to balcony...

...

" kitni der yaar..hum kab se wait kar rahe the..." , complained nupur in her funny style..while mayank rolled his eyes...
annie - sorry yaar...stupid traffic..achha...tum dono tayyar ho na..lets leave..geet vil be waiting...
mayank - ranbir aur nisha kahan hai..ranbir ka cell bhi out of reach aa raha hai...
nupur - meri nishu se baat ho gayi..wo dono directly pohoch jayenge...
mayank annoyed - to me kab se pagalon ki tarah ranbir ka no. try kar raha hu..tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi...
nupur made face - tumne mujhse puchha...??
mayank annoyed - nupur...
annie rolled her eyes - stop fighting and lets leave..geet vil be waiting...
wid dat all d 3 left hurriedly...

...

mohinder in hurry - rano..me aur brij..bahar ja rahe hai...shadi ki tayyariyan me dekh lunga..aur brij stage par chala jayega...
rano - thik hai ji...me rajji ko lekar jaldi a ajaungi..bahar...
mohinder - aur geet..kahan hai...
rano - uske dost aa rahe hai..fir wo ek sath hi bahar aa jayenge...
wid dat brij n mohinder left...
while rajji helped rano wid work...

...

karan - wid r done wid everything i guess...
shweta took a long breath in relief - i guess too...
karan - ladki wale aate hi honge...function kabhi bhi shuru ho sakta...
shweta - mehmaan bhi kafi aa gaye hai...
karan - let me hav a look on d waitor.if dey r doing deir job properly or not...
shweta - just hav a chat wid shef as well/..i hav added 2-3 dishes...
karan - alright...n u hav see handa family is dere yet or not..
wid dat jarabn left...

shweta saw mohinder and brij cuming to wedding area ad went to dem...
shweta - uncle..i hope..we did a good job...
mohinder - good..its excelent beta...u n karan really did a geat work...
brij smiled - true yaa..i didn't expect my wedding vil be dis beautifull...
shweta smiled...
mohinder - u both hav a talk..let me check wid guests...
shweta - where is rano aunty...is anything dere remained...to bring...
brij - i guess..everything is on d place...mumma is worried without any reason..
shweta - i can understand...same was d case wid my mom in my sagai..
both laughed...

...

wrapped in d beautifull ghagra choli given by maan...geet stood in front of d mirror...wearing choli n ghagra of white n blue deadlu shade (dupatta still laying on bed)...wid her hairs resting in 1 corner of her neck...
while maan stood right behind her..gazing at her through d mirror..wid his hands circled around her bare waist and chin resting on shoulder...
geet blushed looking down..as maan nuzzled his nose on her ear-lobe..
geet - mujhe shadi attend karni hai...
maan smiled - mujhe bhi...
geet - toh...agar aap aise hi mujhe ghoorte rahenge to me tayyar kaise hongi...
maan amused at her words - me tumhe ghoor raha hun...??
geet made innocent face - aur nahi toh kya...aap ki ankhen dekhi hai...heyy babaji...
maan rolled her eyes...
maan - meri ankhen etni darawani nahi hai...
geet giggled...
maan made annoyed baby face..checking his eyes in d mirror...
geet giggled more n turned around to face him...
she pulled his cheeks cutely - aap aise gussa wala face banate hai na..to man karta hai..aap ko kha jau...
maan smiled naughtily..encircling her more tightly into his embrace...
maan wid his charming expressions - y dnt u...
geet snaked her handa round his neck wid same naughtyness - kha jati..par abhi mujeh shadi me jana hai...umm..fir kabhi...
maan nuzzled his nose wid hers - achha...
geet giggled - koi shak...
maan smiled - tum bahot badmash ho gayi ho...
geet giggled and den naughtily - kyu na hun..mr.maan singh khurana jo mujhe train kar rahe hai...
maan made o-shaped mouth - mene kya kiya...
geet rolled her eyes - aye lo..puchh rahe hai mene kya kiya...abhi kya kar rahe hi...mujhe late karne ke ek so ek bahane...
maan smiled n shook his head - achha baba..ruko...
saying so he again tunred her to face d mirror...
geet stared at him as he take out d beautifull necklace...actually incredibly beautifull n delicate diamond necklace from d bag...
geet looked at maan through d mirror...
maan gently placed d necklace around her neck..staring at her through d mirror wid his charming smile..
maan removed d hairs from her back n hooked d necklace..followed by a sweet peck on her neck...
...
next came earings...
geet kept admiring him lovingly as he made her wear earing 1 by 1..followed by sweet pecks...
 ...
he made her turn now to face him...
next came mang-tikka...
geet closed her eyes as he placed mang-tikka on her forehead lovingly..followed by a peck...
...
he pulled her wrist further and takes out diamond bangles...putting dem in her wrist..wid gentle pecks on her hands...
geet so much loved his every gesture...
he treats her like she a princess or sumthing...
but all she knew abt herself was she is geet..maan ki geet..
...
next came waist band...
maan bend on his knees...
geet was already blushing remembering deir waist band scene...
maan smiled naughtily at her n whispered - u actually taste sweet mishty...
geet blushed looking away..
maan shook his head smiling and placed d band oh her waist wid gentle peck on her waist curve...
...
next came payal...
maan took her 1 foot..resting it on his knees...
geet was madly in love wid dis guy named maan singh khuaran for being such a gentle man of her...
he put beautifull payal on her foot n pecked it gently...
same was repeated wid other foot...
...
maan stood up...
geet smiled - im ready...
maan shook his head in NO...
geet looked at him confused n checked herself...
maan smiled n take out a beautifull...extremely beautifull n delicate blue diamnond rings fron his pocket...

geet's eyes widened in happiness...
she looked at him excited...
maan was so much in love wid dose expressions...
geet excitedly - maan...ye humari engagement ring hai...
maan's heart skipped a beat wid dose words...
he smiled n bent on his knees...
geet looked at him surprised...
maan raised his hand asking for hers...
maan wid gentle voice - may i...
geet nodded her head..wid tears in eyes...smile on lips...
n gave her hand willingly into his...
maan gently placed a sweet kiss on d back of her fingers...
n den placed d ring in d forth finger...
tear of happiness rolled out fo her eyes...
maan gently stood up n rubed d tear wid his thumb...
he shook his head in no at her..signalling her not to shed tears...
geet smiled cutely wid tears and rested her head on his chest...closing her eyes in complete submission...
maan smiled n took her into his embrcae..holding her nevet to apart...
both closed deir eyes..hearing each other heart beat beating in same tone..
maan gently whispered - jaan...
geet lost in his arms - hmm...
maan - u vil never remove it...
geet hugged him more tightly - never ever...
maan smiled n pulled her into more embrace...

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 3:25am | IP Logged
amazing update 
i just love this ff
continue soon
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its lovely update
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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 3:57am | IP Logged
awesome...superb...mind blowing...great part
thank you MISHTY
very very very nice update...maaneet's dialogue were superb...you are amazing writer
Clap...your words create magic...truly magical update
waiting for next...
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god mish
awesome update
loved maaneet part
i just loved them so much
hey did i ever told u i love u..
nahi na.?? chalo koi baat nahi abhi bol deti hu..i just love ur story n i really love u...
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