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Love Beyond Limits !! THREAD 3 pt 91 pg 128 (Page 13)

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Awesm update! After GHSP..dez FF r keepin me alive until Gurti returns back.. U r jst a fantastic writer.. Plz do PM me wen u update nxt tym.. Thnx! W8in eagrly..

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thnq so much...
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             Part 79

 
boys - sapne mein milti hai, o kudi meri sapne mein milti hai
sara din gungte me band kudiya si akhiyon mein khulti hai

gals - sara din sadko pein khali rikshi sa peechhe peeche chalta hai
sapne mein milta hai, o munda mera sapne mein milta hai

boys - sapne mein milti hai, o kudi meri sapne mein milti hai hoi hoi hoi..

n wid dat...
dancing..giggling...enjoying d function finally ended...

...

aftr d function (aprox 12:30am)

rano was checking if anything remained for wedding...
geet rolled her eyes - mumma..aap kya kar rahe ho...
rano - bachha abhi tak soyi nahi..chal jake soja...kal din bhar bahot thakan hone wali hai...
geet hugged rano from back - aur aap kya kar rahe ho..thodi der aaram karne ki bajay yahan kaam kar rahe ho..mumma aap ko subah jaldi uthana hai..to aap jake so jao...
rano smiled n kissed geet'f forehead - bachha bas ho gaya...me check kar rahi..kahin kuchh reh na gaya ho...
geet - mene sab dekh liya hai...karan n shweta hav arranged everything...so just relax n sleep...
rano - nind kaise aayegi beta...ghar me pehli shadi hai..dar lagta hai..sab thik hoga ya nahi...etne sare mehmaan..kuchh gadbad na ho jaye..warna jitne log utni bate banate hai...
geet - kuchh galat nahi hoga mumma..hum sab hai...aap jakar thodi der aaram kar lijiye...
rano cupped geet's cheek lovingly - mera bachha...
geet relucantly - mumma...
rano - hmm...
geet - wo...kal mehendi function me..wo gana...
rano knew wat she wantin to say...
she wants to talk about her wedding..dat does she also hav to leave her mumma papaji aftr wedding...
rano - kya huva geet...
geet hugged rano - aap log meri vidayi nahi karoge na..mujhe aap dono ko chhodke kahin nahi jaana...
rano patted her hairs - aise nahi bolte bachha...ye toh sabko karna padta hai...aur waise bhi teri shadi me abhi waqt hai...
geet's eyes filled in tears - par mujhe aap logon ki yaad aayegi toh...
rano smiled - pehle pehle to yaad aayegi..par baad me to tu hum sabko bhul jayegi...
geet pouted her nose - mumma...
rano giggled - sachhi...tujhe koyi aisa mila hai jo tujhe humse bhi jyada pyar karega...
geet smiled - mumma..aap ne to unhe dekha tak nahi...
rano - haan toh...pata nahi..par mujhe ek ajeeb sa ehsaas ho raha hai..ke wohi tere liye bana hai...
geet blushed a bit - wo aaj aaye the...
rano's eyes popped in happiness - kyaaa...geet tune mujhe milwaya kyu nahi..milwana to dur..tune abhi tak mujhe naam tak nahi bataya...
rano made angry face...
geet giggled - mumma aap ko unka naam bhi pata hai..aur aap inse mile bhi ho...
rano was surprised now - geet tu sach keh rahi hai..naam to bata..shayad mujhe yaad aa jaye...
geet - maa...
brij  - mumma...mumma...
both geet n rano looked at brij who made his entry in hall...
rano - brij..tu abhi tak soya nahi..kal pura din bahot thakawat hogi...jake soja...
brij - aur aap dono yahan kya kar rahe ho...papaji aapko bula rahe hai...
rano - thik hai..me dekhti hun..tum dono jakar so jao...
saying so rano left immediately..
geet - heyy hai...
brij wid evil smile - geet...jo tu 2-3 din se kar rahi hai...to dar mat...teri shadi me uska poora poora badla me lene wala hun...
geet made innocent face - mene kya kiya bhai..bas thodi si haldi lagayi...haan thodi jyada lag gayi...par chalta hai nahi...aap ko bhabhi ki tarah sundar jo banana hai...
saying so geet showed her tongue to him n ran for her life...
brij made shocking face at her n ran aftr her to kill her...
geet managed to ran to her room n banged shut d door on brij's face...
brij shouted from outside - i vil see u tomrrow...
geet giggled from inside - i wish bhai..par kal to apki nazare bhabhi se hatengi hi nahi...
brij rolled his eyes n shouted - very funny...sleep now..
saying so he left...

...
geet layed on bed..rolling from 1 side to another...she checked d time...1am
geet to herself - geet..shadi bhai ki hai..aur dimag tera kharab ho gaya hai..1 baja hai aur tujhe nind nahi..soja geet soja...warna gabbar aa jayega..( geet giggled to herself for d dialog)...maan se baat karu..nahi nahi..aur bichare so rahe honge.unki nind kharab ho jayegi...par me jate waqt unse baat tak nahi kar payi..(geet made baby face)...maan i miss u...
...
dat was it...
her cell stared rining..
geet saw d number n jumped in excitement...
it was maan...
geet immediately received d call...
geet - hello maan...aap ko kaise pata ke..me apko miss kar rahi thi..pata hai mujhe kitna bore ho raha tha..mujhe aap se baat karni thi..par mene socha aap so rahe honge...arre haan...aap bhi tak soye nahi...dnt mind par aap kuchh bol kyu nahi rahe...
maan - sans le lo geet...
geet rolled her eyes - batayiye na...
maan - batata hun baba...actually simla wale project ka kuch kaam baki tha..wohi complete kar raha tha..tumse baat karne ka man kiya..to call kar liya..
geet smiled cutely- aap mujhe miss kar rahe the...
maan smiled at her childish question and voice...
maan - tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi...
geet surprised - aap ko kaise pata...
maan rolled his eyes - abhi tumne hi to kaha...
geet smiled - arre haan..wo me bhul gayi...par maan aap simla kyu gaye the...
maan made baby face - tum abhi tak naraz ho..??
geet shook her head - nahi baba...me kyu naraz hone lagi..mujhe pata tha..koi bahot jaruri kaam hoga..warna aap etni jaldbazi me nahi jate...
maan smiled...how she understands him without words...how can he not fall for her...
maan - to fir function me gussa wala face kyu banaya tha...
geet giggled cutely - wo...wo to me apko awehi chidhha rahi thi..aapke cute se expressions dekhne ke liye...
maan made cute angry face - very bad...
geet giggled - ha ha...ab batayiye kya kaam tha...
maan - woh actually..simla ka ek project hai..uska construction process chalu hai...wahin thodi prob aa gayi thi manager aur workers ke bich...agar me nahi jata..to construction ka kaam chalu nahi hota...
geet  - achha...par aap bahot thak gaye honge na...pehle etna kaam fir function..aur ab fir se kaam...
maan - nahi jaan..me thik hun..tum bhi toh abhi tak soyi nahi...
geet - maan me aapki baat kar rahi hun..har waqt kaam kaam...ab chup chap wo sari stupid files band kar dijiye..aur jakar so jayiye...
maan - just 20 min more..thoda hi baki hai...
geet angrily - aapne suna nahi mene kya kaha..now...
maan made baby face and put all d files down and went to bed...
maan - done..khush...
geet smiled - dats like my maan singh khurana...
maan's eyes twinkled wid dat line..it sounded so good..her maan singh khurana..just hers...
dat authority..dat possession..how much he loved being possessed by his angelic mishty...
like she owns him...
maan - say it again...
geet smiled - u r my maan singh khurana...just mine..
maan - yes boss...
geet giggled - achha..ab bahot bate ho gayi..abhi chup chap so jayiye...me bhi sone ja rahi hun...
maan - achha suno...
geet - ji...
maan wid serious tone - mujhe kuchh baat karni thi...
geet - ji kahiyena..aise puchh kyu rahe hai...
maan - wo aaj function me..dat guy..wats his name..sumthing hameer...
geet - aap esliye pareshan hai na..bcoz he touched my hand...
maan surprised - tumhe kaise pata...
geet - kyuki aap ki jagah me hoti..aur kisine aapko hath pakada hota..to me usse jaan se maar deti...
geet was serious...
dere was some kind of extra-ordinary strength in her voice..dat made him dye for her words...
how she possessed him..like its just her who had d right to touch him...
dat was not just a childish statement..it was feeling...a possession..
maan was mesmerized wid her possessiveness towrds him..
he loved dat..
he loved dat like anything...and everything.
maan wid possessiveness - mujse bardasht naho ho pa raha tha...jab usne tumhe chhune ki jurrat ki...
geet - na hi mujhse...
maan - woh tumhe pareshan to nahi karta na...colge me..or...
geet - nahi baba...me thik hun...aap ho na..
maan smiled - achha..ab so jao...aur haan...wo tum kal dress...
geet smiled - haan wo dress me shadi ke waqt pehenane wali hun...
maan - uske liye me jewellary set banavaya hai.tum wohi pehnogi...
geet was once again surprised...
but she couldn't say anything..knowing maan vil be angry if she vil say anything...
...
geet litle blushingly - ME APKA INTEZAR KARUNGI...
...
saying so geet cut d call n hide herself in d duvet feling shy...
maan smiled at her naughtyness...
and layed on bed..closing his eyes...
but...
his eyes snapped open..
in happiness..excitement..surprise...shock..n wat not..
wat did she mean by *me apka intezar karungi*...ans she blushed..
dat means.
omggg
dat means she want men to wear her dat jewellary wid my own hands like i did wid waist band...
she loves it wen i touch her...
she loves to feer me closer...
maan's heart skipped several beat wid her sweet gesture
JAAN...u vil make me creazy one day...
how do u manage to stole my sleep every night wid ur single word...
oughhh
wen d morning vil cummm

...

" get up d lazy bone " , exclaimed rajji annoyed...pulling his duvet away
brij pulling back his duvet - shut up n get lost...
rajji rolled her eyes - bhai..its ur wedding day..
brij - thnx for reminding me now..get lost...
rajji pulled d duvet away...
brij opened his eyes annoyed and checked time...6:30
brij - rajji subah subah kyu pareshan kar rahi hai...
brij shocked - bhai its 6:30..kitni sari tayyariyan karni hai...aap ki shadi aaj hai..yaad hai ya bhul gaye...
brij rolled his eyes - mumma uth gayi kya...
rajji - mumma to 5 baje hi uth gayi thi...
brij - aur geet...
rajji - apki behen aap hi i tarah alsi hai..aapke baad usika number hai...
brij rolled his eyes...
rajji - now get freshen up fast up..mumma calling u...
saying so rajji left for geet'r room...

...

" did u check everything in food..." , asked shweta for d 10th time...
karan - stop worrying shweta...everything is perfect...
shweta - u r telling not to worry..par kaise..abhi kitna sara kaam baki hai...sare gifhts packed ho gaye na...
karan rolled eyes - yes mam...
shweta - everything has to be sufficient..we cnt afford any prob on moment...
karan - let me check wid d pandit again...
shweta - ohh ya...and wat about d decoration of mandap..it has to look great...
karan - its done...xyz just called me sum time b4 n confirmed...
shweta - let me hav a discussion wid rano aunty..if anything remained...
saying so she went away to call rano...
while karan got busy wid arranging everything again n again..

...

nisha annoyed on phone - kya hai ranbir...
ranbir - kyu gussa ho rahi hai...
nisha - to kya karu...mujhe sab thik se pack karna hai...kuchh rehna jaye...
ranbir rolled his eyes - tum ladkiyan..make up ke alawa bhi kuchh karti ho..i doubt...
nisha - tune bakwas karne ke liye phone kiya hai...
ranbir dramatically 0 hadd ho gayi yaar...bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha...
nisha rolled her eyes - right..ab bata kya huva...
ranbir - kuchh nahi...mene ye batane ke liye cal kiya hai..ki shadi ka muharat 12:32 ka hai..so hume shadi set up pe 11:30 tak pohochana hoga...
nisha made baby face - vil u pick me...
ranbir mocked - dere u go...esi liye to call kiya hai mene..me jate waqt tujhe pic kar lunga...
nisha smiled - thnxx ranbir..u r a darling...
ranbir proudly - dekha..mere alawa kisi ka kaam pura nahi hota...
nisha rolled her eyes...
ranbir dramatically - agar me mar gaya to tum sab ka kya hoga...i wonder...
nisha too dramatically - me to loot jaungi..barbaad ho jaungi..aur...
ranbir making faces - aur...
nisha burst into laughter - aur party manaungi...
ranbir rolled his eyes - now shut up..n get ready fast..i vil cum soon..
nisha hanged up...

...

hameer angrily - y do u think i vil listen to u ...
gal - u dnt hav option basically..otherwise i hav to talk to mr.rizvi...
hameer - shut ur nonsense up dr.uttara...
uttara - ur anger vil take u nowhere...
hameer - par tum kyu nahi chahti ke me wedding attend karu...
uttara - kyunki tumhari treatment abhi tak puri nahi huyi hai..n ur ystrday's behaviour at d function left me confused...
hameer - why dnt u just give up...
uttara - bcoz..dis is d challenge..i hav accepted by rizvi uncle...
hameer - im coming for d wedding...
uttara - tum kuchh chhupa rahe ho na mujhse...
hameer - not ur concern...
uttara - its my sister's wedding..and noway i vil tolerate any stupidity of urs...get dat clear..
hameer angrily hanged up...
uttara sighed in worry...
y am i able to see dat same desire in ur eyes once again...
it took me so long to bring u bang to normal life...
n once again u hav started to show dose tantrums.,..like u want sumthing desprately...
i m d 1 who is stupid...
how can i fall for such a person...
i hav fallen foe a patient who hates me...
i shouldn't hav mixed my personal n professional life...
but its too late...
plz hameer..dnt do sumthing..dat vil force me to take sum big action...
i won't be able to handle it...
she sighed... 

...

mayank - nupur..me kal se tumse baat karna chahta hu..aur tumhare paas waqt nahi hai...
nupur - mayank mujhe shadi attend karni hai..samajho na...
mayank - oyye hello..me bhi shadi attend karne wala hun...
nupur - really i didn't know...nupur mocked...
mayank pulled her closer - plz nupur..its important...
nupur felt d nervousness in his voice - kya baat hai mayank..tum pareshan kyu ho...
mayank - nupur..mujhe lagta hai..uncle...
d word uncle made nupur angry instantly...
nupur pulling herself away - mujhe dad ke bare me koi baat nahi karni...
mayank pulled her back into hug - plz meri puri baat to suno...
nupur rested her head on his chest - wat is it..
mayank - mujhe nahi lagta..uncle hum dono ki relationship se khush hai..i mean...
nupur looked at him - i dnt care mayank..i dnt care wat he thinks n wat he wants...
mayank - he is ur dad jaan...
nupur wid tears - he is not my dad..he is killer..killer of my sister my mom...
mayank - anger wil not change d fact nupur...he is important...
nupur - wat important..he doesn't hold any place in my life...
mayank - but...
nupur hugged him - i dnt want to talk abt it..i love u n dats all i know...
mayank hugged her tightly..carrasing her hairs..calming her..
mayank - i love u too...

...

" dadi im leaving..." , shouted annie from hall..picking an apple in hurry..
dadi came out - no way..eat d breakfast 1st...
annie made baby face - dadi geet ke ghar kha lungi na..plz..im really late...
dadi rolled her eyes...
annie - waise bhi us zalli ne abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi khaya hoga..mere bahane wo bhi kha legi...
dadi - thik hai..thik hai..par dono kha jarur lena...
annie hugged dadi - i love u dadi..byeee
wid dat annie left...
dev came out - dadi i vil be cuming wid nanintara..she seems to be understanding dese days...
dadi smiled - hmm.seems like lovestory cuming back to track...
dev looked at dadi in amusement n den giggled... - dadi aap bhi na..
dadi too giggled...
dev - where is bro..
dadi - wo abhi abhi bahar gaye hai..keh rahe the..kuchh important kaam hai...wohi se wedding ke liye aayenge...
dev - ohh...den..we vil do 1 thing..we both vil pick naintara n go for wedding...
dadi - mujhe kabab me haddi nahi banana...
dev rolled her eyes - koi yakin nahi karega ke aap maan singh khurana ki dadi hai..
dadi - kya matlab...
dev - u two r opposite poles...
dadi giggled thinking..d two poles seems to cuming in 1 side now a days...

...

n here cums our maan singh khurana once again entering geet handa's room...
wat...
aage ka next update me...
keep imagining deir romance.which is gonna be soon...
Wink Wink 
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