Joined: 21 January 2005
Hehehe... Lata, you're simply exagerating, I know! Anyhow, here's another one from DK's side. I can't quite relate to Disha......
frustration brews, just now near a simmer
it threatens to boil over
I can't seem to douse the fire
I am on fire
I can't reach the water, if it won't look my way
it must be off somewhere
swimming in itself
oblivious to what its absence means to me
I am the sun reborn
sometimes too hot for my own good
without my swimming pool
I'm heading for a supernova!
how to reach what I cannot touch?
how to call one who cannot hear?
the tide is out, and driving me wild
oh, when will those sweet waves return?
I can see in the distance how the water plays
in wave after wave, too busy with its own pattern
unaware of my need for it to wash over me once again
calming, soothing, cooling my fiery self
every yin needs its yang
and if you've lit a fire, I think its only fair
that you bring the water
its time you balance me out, babe!
-DKaddict, who's really getting annoyed with the available colors....
Joined: 08 February 2005
eh offcourse not I am not exhagerating. Eh but seriously you should think of writing these creative poems quite often and then you will see new avenues opening for you. .
Now this poem is from a modern day William wordsworth , what with a swimming pool and all that stuff
and this red colour suits our hottie and his moods perfectly .
to dkaddict .
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