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yet another poem for the Ds (Page 2)

dkaddict Senior Member
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Joined: 21 January 2005
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Posted: 04 April 2005 at 12:58am | IP Logged

Hehehe... Lata, you're simply exagerating, I know! Anyhow, here's another one from DK's side. I can't quite relate to Disha......

NEGLECT

frustration brews, just now near a simmer

it threatens to boil over

I can't seem to douse the fire

I am on fire

 

I can't reach the water, if it won't look my way

it must be off somewhere

swimming in itself

oblivious to what its absence means to me

 

I am the sun reborn

sometimes too hot for my own good

without my swimming pool

I'm heading for a supernova!

 

how to reach what I cannot touch?

how to call one who cannot hear?

the tide is out, and driving me wild

oh, when will those sweet waves return?

 

I can see in the distance how the water plays

in wave after wave, too busy with its own pattern

unaware of my need for it to wash over me once again

calming, soothing, cooling my fiery self

 

every yin needs its yang

and if you've lit a fire, I think its only fair

that you bring the water

its time you balance me out, babe!

 

-DKaddict, who's really getting annoyed with the available colors.... Angry

.....Lata..... IF-Dazzler
.....Lata.....
.....Lata.....

Joined: 08 February 2005
Posts: 4149

Posted: 04 April 2005 at 1:21am | IP Logged

eh offcourse not I am not exhagerating. Eh but seriously you should think of writing these creative poems quite often and then you will see new avenues opening for you. Tongue.

Now this poem is from a modern day William wordsworth , what with a swimming pool and all that stuff Big smile

and this red colour suits our hottie and his moods perfectly .

Once again.....

Clap to dkaddict LOL.

Love Lata

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