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yet another poem for the Ds

dkaddict Senior Member
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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 4:29pm | IP Logged

DK to Disha...

FLYING

your beautiful eyes are etched in my heart

a vision constantly before me

and in the remembrance of them

I see a reflection of myself

 

this idea of you, which pervades my being

is it the source of a new-found warmth?

or have I simply learned to finally love myself

having fallen for something so beautiful?

 

the green hills, with their luscious growth

have never looked so enticing, and so close to my hand

I yearn to run bare foot, feeling their dirt beneath my feet

and my arms yearn to embrace our commom Mother, Earth

 

every moment has a new peace

every problem seems so small

every happiness has a new depth

and in every direction I am not alone

 

when did the world loose its luster?

and how did my heart, unbeknownst to me, turn so cold?

when did life become a series of factory operations

to be perfected and performed without any real thought?

 

you have lit a fire in my heart

and I have run out from the confines of the factory

to throw myself from the top of the mountain and fly

into the arms of life

 

-DKaddict, who seems to have found her muse....... LOL 

........color adjusted, as per Lata's request.......



Edited by dkaddict - 03 April 2005 at 11:36pm

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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 4:33pm | IP Logged

Hey

Wowwwwwww cool love it.

SamyBig smile

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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Big smileThe poem is realli sweet!!
dkaddict Senior Member
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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 9:30pm | IP Logged

Honestly, is anyone interested in reading this stuff, or am I just wasting space, here? Really, truly, honesty is appreciated....... Should I bother with any more? Or does anybody have any suggestions? Looking for some quality feedback.......

-DKaddict

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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 11:09pm | IP Logged

Hi my dear Dkaddict offcourse we love your poems. ClapClap great job indeed. But pleeeeeease make the fonts a bit darker na, I am really straining my eyes to read them....please if you don't mind will you. I like the Blue colour which is my favourite and suits this mood too.Smile.

Now that you have found your muse , hope to read more of this fabulous stufffThumbs Up.

LOL Lata

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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

dk addict your poems are really very sweeeeeeeet Smile

just waitng for u to write moreTongue

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Posted: 03 April 2005 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
hey lovely poe m dkaddict,,and blue is my fav color tooLOL
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Posted: 04 April 2005 at 12:29am | IP Logged

Thanks my dear. Its perfect now. I did not want to strain my eyes , else how could I feast my eyes on our Hottie  WinkEmbarrassed.

Oh you are William Wordsworth in the making. ClapClapThumbs Up

Love Lata

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