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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 98)

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
wow...u combined both d chronicles !!! awesome...

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
This was an AMAZING update and definitely worth the wait!!
I just really loved Manyata in ur ff. Her initial reaction with the shoes made me laugh out loud and then the whole apology thing..im so happy u kept it realistic and she did what was best - make sure UV apologized instead of breaking all relations with him
ManVeer moments were EPIC as usual..and also really like the details about his friends as well as Mina and Manyata's bonding! didn't see that one coming and really the first half of the update made me smile. The second half however, was just too amazing. I loved the way you brought out Mina's emotions, her heartbreak, almost made me hate UV for it, but then love UV back again by showing that he did sincerely regret it.. i think thats the best part of this ff - the development of UV as a person. IDK if you always meant this UV to exist and Manyata brought it out, or Manyata changed him into this, or if its both - whatever it is - its amazing and its really what makes this ff so special, that its the story of the Prince Big smile Clap

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

On that note, since you guys are reading it right now I'll ask this question:
What do you think about Mina? What are your feelings and thoughts about her? Do you like her? Hate her? Empathize with her or sympathize with her? Do you get where she's coming from? Or not? Is she likable/ hatable/ understandable?

I created her with a purpose and she will be back; villainous or something else, what do you guys think? What do you see when you think of her?

I like Mina. I really do understand where she's coming from and even if you do decide to turn her into a vamp, I may hate what she does but I doubt I can ever hate her. In fact I empathize with her to the extent that I may even be okay with UV getting some of the hurt back, as evil as it sounds. Only a little, though, just enough to understand even a fraction of what Mina had to go through.

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
I am loving it! I am up at 1:00 am at a school night reading this! This is how much I love ur story!! I don't read JN chronicles but I am glad to see that you brought those two stories together :D please update faster this time! Loved it!

Simran :D...

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Is tht jai nandani behind yash?

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
yaayyy.Rheea you updated..me totally khush..i'am rushing to read the update..will post my comments soon..Smile

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Reeha wonderful update...loved the detailing, i loved how Manyata wanted UV to be sorry for what he did and i loved it when she came to his defense. However i would like to see Manyata not being affected by Mina..i want Manyata to be strong and to handle Mina by herself. She is soon to be Yuvrani so she needs to know how to handle people and situations.

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
SmileSmileawesomee they r sooo good... Ur the best writer in this forumSmile

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