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Nooo... Reeha you did just not... 😲Yes, yes I did😉
im literally speechless right now! seriously there was so much I wanted to say about the first two chapters but really everything has fled from my head after reading the third one!! All i can say is that thats just GENIUS Reeha. Like OMG, UDay and Mina's son - Andy - no Aditay!
seriously i have read a lot of well-written stuff but this beats all! So frikken amazing really ur FF is!
No i wont tell you to udpate soon...update wen you have the time 😊 but also dont ever forget this FF or your fans 😃 Trust me, no one lets me forget (*Cough Mais* Cough Wendy Cough*) Plus the stuff is in my head, so until I type it out, it's there harassing me!.. this update was so amazing that I dont even know where to start .. well okay the first chapter - this was the BEST ever..literally had me laughing! :
Great, she hasn't even agreed to married me and she wants kids.
Can't I do something in order for once in my life?
Please?
🤣 EPIC!
Then the second chap at the pizza place was awww so cute! loved the interaction between UV and that little girl-forgot wat her name was- Maria? But that whole fairytale thing adn then her response to Manyata whens she like OBVIOUSLY all Princes are like that! That was just amazing..
Obviously the third chap beats all...the proposal, Manyata crying, them having their moment, UV okay with leaving his kingdom for her..Oh my god it was just too beautiful for words to describe and you know I totally understood how UV had been feeling for so long..he's the devotee this time and honestly I think it makes the most sense this way that his love is at a whole new level! 😳 Even more than Manyata's! The feminist side in me feels happy LOL, especially since hes always had the upperhand in all his relations until now, its a good thing that this time tehre is someone there to punish him! 😉 Exactly- I think we need to see a playboy be the one madly inlove- or at least the one who doesn't have the upper hand for once.
Going to that end revelation...im extremely curios to read how you're going to go about this..The fatherly side in Uday awakened so fast I wouldn't call it fatherly- Uday doesn't like kids too much- It's more about "Right" And you'll see it within the next few parts- Uday feels he has a RIGHT to know is son- he doesn't care WHO his son is. ..right now im thinking a couple future scenarios: For some reason I feel like Manyata is going to want to back down and leave Uday for Mina You're pretty close. Manyata will be the one who feels Uday wants to get to know his son; Mina won't give up her son. Manyata will try to play traditional Indian Martyr. Key word: Try., she won't feel right depriving a son from his father. But if that was to end like that than ManVeer wouldn't end up together! so although thaht might be the plan initially obviously by the end something has to end up happening to keep ManVer together! Manveer is never out of the picture- I should just spoil it for you and let you know that This is about Manveer- and Manveer shall happen! Promise ; ) They just need a few bumps, first.
Or Uday may try to take his son away from Mina..but then that wouldnt be fair to her would it? 🤔 Oh no. Not fair at all. And we shouldn't - or Uday shouldn't forget- Mina isn't helpless, she comes from a wealthy family.
So in the end I'm going to come up with the conclusion that eventually Mina is going to die and M and UV will bring up the son together. Nope. I know that seems like the easy way out, but I can't kill off Mina- I like her too much. Her - Yash, and Andy are my brain children- I can't kill my brain children! LOL! 😳 I don't know any other way that things are going to resolve! Or you could always bring in a different dude for her instead 😃 But then she wont give up her son still!
^Okay feel free to ignore all that but seriously ur FF sure maeks me THINK...ill definitely give you the credit that whatver happened was the most unexpected twist for me and seriously greaattt jobbb!!! I think Maisy had it the closest when she thought Mina was pregnant or something, I was surprised no one saw it coming. It happens all the time in western romance novels! LOL! But there the couple usually re-unites: I don't want that.
When did you figure out where I was leading the Dhamaka to? Was the phone call in the washroom, a big giveaway?
ALright I think you've had enough of my rant 😊 Now go back on working on that essay and you better ace it! 😃
Yeah...about that. Just 2,500 words to go -_-
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