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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 77)

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged

Manyata's Outfit of the Day

(Corrolation to Part 15)
 
I could really use some help with her clothing guys!LOL
 



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ClapClapthanks you so much for the update love it...grreat job...amazing...ClapClap

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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
just one word: PERFECT!!!!!!
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Awesome update, really nice flow of Manveer relationship, loved it Clap
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OMG love u reeha! Thanks for the post waiting for the next one !! Smile
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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
FOR LAMIA <3
Time for my favourite part: REVIEWING! YAY!
hehehee Time for My FAVOURITE PART! Reply to your ReviewCool...which is very late due to my schedOuch, me sorry.

UGH! Roses! Worse, red roses! Dead I do this every single time I see it - whether in TV, in movies, in real life, in books... 'YUCK! YUCK! YUCK!' Sorry, Ree, but I won't spare this scene either with the same reaction. Disapprove It is very cliched. -___-
It is. It really really is. But there is a reason for this. I do things for a reason. you'll find outWink

But at least you made it up with Brijraj teasing her! HeartApprove I love family bonding! Big smile I am totally the type of person who can watch Hum Apke Hai Kaun, Hum Saath Saath Hain without getting bored. Ever. Plus being a pampered daughter and sister myself, these type of scenes are so relatable... to an extent. LOLLOL
ME TOO!!! GOD ! I can watch those movies OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN! GAAAH!. Yes, the scenes are very relatableLOL
"Vera Wang" Indian Princess! ROFLROFLROFL GREAT shout out to your Royal Chronicles! Wink 
Actually, I was inspired by the show. Do you remember the scene where JN asked Uday to smell the perfume she's wearing? That's where it came fromLOL The three are related (UVCs, RCs and JNCs..so you'll see allusionsWink)

 
Oof! Fathers, I tell you! My Dad never leaves a party without sharing all of my (embarrassing) childhood stories to anyone and everyone. *facepalm slap* I can so relate to Manyata's flushed face situation. 
Aww and she calls him "Papa" - I hope that's what she calls Brijraj in the show! I don't want this Dad or Daddy business.  Approve
Same hereOuch My father loves to tell stories, and more so about me rather than my brother and sisterD'oh. I don't know what she'll call him I'd put my money on Papa, and baba a close second.

She smiles at our timeless tradition: It's a Cadbury Milk Chocolate Bar. 
ROFL! Good marketing tactic Tongue
*DISCLAIMER* I just use brands  I like, don't work for any of these companies ROFL

Ahh... The ship dinner... Typical Manyata. Cranky because she's hungry, indeed. LOL I don't blame her man, I get fussy when I'm hungry too Stern Smile
I grin and reach out to push away a strand of hair, only to notice, she's already tucked it back. Oh well, next time Udayveer. LOLLOL He really loves doing that, doesn't he? LOLLOL Oh yes! Every couple needs a move! This is his/theres...in this FF atleast. Do they have one in the show?Ermm
P.S. CONGRATULATIONS on being Rajkumari of the week! Too lazy to write in that thread LOL Thank you! And that just shows you how late I am with this reply...since that was two weeks agoLOL


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loved outfit choice and update was hilarous!Big smile
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Posted: 06 March 2012 at 3:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fauzmalik

Hi, I  am a silent member on India forums, I love reading all the ff and ss and os of all of my fav shows, 3 of them DEK, EHMMBH, and IPKKND, coming back to the point, I love this ff/ss of Udayveer, I have to admit, i look forward to your updates more than I look forward to the actual show :-) I love the way you describe everything, the setting, the atmosphere, the emotions esp, its incredible, you are an incredible, brilliant writer MashAllah!
I love the way the whole FF has progressed, its the right speed, the right amount of wonder at falling in love, in feeling attracted to ur better half, i especially love the way UV's feelings/emotions, whateevr is going on his head is conveyed in ur writing, infact I think no I know I love this UV more than the one in the serial Tongue, i know they are equally ficticious, but i cant help it Smile 
May you always continue writing the way you do, truly and really appreciate the ff and the effort that goes into writing it, RESPECT and HATS OFF ClapThumbs UpClap
 
do you have any other work? other than the other chronicles you have started on the other characters, other than this show, have u written for any other show?? would love to read that as well!
 

Oh wow. Thank you so much. Fauz? Is that what I should call you. Honestly, this may sound dumb but I consider it my own personal victory when I can write well enough to get a silent member to say something (stupid, yes, but I enjoy it). To be honest, I have written for another Show, that was KZK and that was almost 5 years ago. I wouldn't give you those even if you offered me money simply because they are terrible (literally...terrible) the story was good, but the writing is no where near what you're reading here. LOL

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, it's good to know that the pace, speed and reflections are decent, simply because I make everyone wait quite a while and sometimes the duration of events isnt as fast as some would like it to be. Let me know what you think about part 15 and I'm so sorry about the late replyOuch

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