Dekha Ek Khwaab
Dekha Ek Khwaab

India-Forums

   

The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 6)

--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler
--ANGEL--
--ANGEL--

Joined: 01 January 2011
Posts: 4356

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
nice part...loved udays concern 4 manyata...update soon
reeha...k IF-Rockerz
reeha...k
reeha...k

Joined: 05 September 2006
Posts: 7569

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by queenyuks

Oh I almost started to cry. Poor Uday

This part was beautifully written

Yuks
 
Thank you very much Yuks! I'm out of practice in my writing (well fiction anyways, I can write a research essay in my sleep LOLEmbarrassed
xxdevilishxx Senior Member
xxdevilishxx
xxdevilishxx

Joined: 14 June 2010
Posts: 465

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
OMG! That was so AWESOME! You MUST update soon or else... :P
-scarlett- IF-Dazzler
-scarlett-
-scarlett-

Joined: 03 January 2010
Posts: 3598

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

reeha...k

reeha...k IF-Rockerz
reeha...k
reeha...k

Joined: 05 September 2006
Posts: 7569

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-scarlett-

-scarlett- IF-Dazzler
-scarlett-
-scarlett-

Joined: 03 January 2010
Posts: 3598

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink



Oh yea thats my name and ofcourse! Feel free to ask ANY timeEmbarrassed
n thnks...I dont wanna be too late for the updates! They're KILLERS!!LOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

reeha...k

reeha...k IF-Rockerz
reeha...k
reeha...k

Joined: 05 September 2006
Posts: 7569

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink



Oh yea thats my name and ofcourse! Feel free to ask ANY timeEmbarrassed
n thnks...I dont wanna be too late for the updates! They're KILLERS!!LOL

No worries! I'm going to make every attempt to post one update per day- at least! (this does not include weekendsLOL) I love reading FF's so I understand the want of the reader to get more, and not be left hanging for periods on end Wink

Hubze Senior Member
Hubze
Hubze

Joined: 03 November 2011
Posts: 540

Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
That was amazing dude Thumbs Up...Do PM me for the next part...

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
The Jainandini Chronicles| NEW UPDATE| PART 9| PG. 45

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 46 47

Author: reeha...k   Replies: 371   Views: 30620

reeha...k 371 30620 30 October 2014 at 7:46am by sakshi1rani2
UDAYVEER 'S LAST BOW

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Author: _Annesha_   Replies: 173   Views: 7062

_Annesha_ 173 7062 14 July 2013 at 5:18am by _Annesha_
~Yuvraj Udayveer learns a lesson~SS note pg 9

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: muskan99   Replies: 76   Views: 5011

muskan99 76 5011 16 April 2013 at 1:19pm by fireroad99
Define Udayveer

2 3

Author: .HookandHybrid.   Replies: 16   Views: 568

.HookandHybrid. 16 568 20 February 2013 at 2:46am by catty2000
SS: Fate|LAST PART part 8, Page 30

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: -Niha-   Replies: 308   Views: 18386

-Niha- 308 18386 01 January 2013 at 10:37pm by catty2000

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Dekha Ek Khwaab Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index