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nice part...loved udays concern 4 manyata...update soon

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by queenyuks

Oh I almost started to cry. Poor Uday

This part was beautifully written

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Thank you very much Yuks! I'm out of practice in my writing (well fiction anyways, I can write a research essay in my sleep LOLEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
OMG! That was so AWESOME! You MUST update soon or else... :P

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink



Oh yea thats my name and ofcourse! Feel free to ask ANY timeEmbarrassed
n thnks...I dont wanna be too late for the updates! They're KILLERS!!LOL

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by -Vishwa-

Did I forget to mention I NEED A PM??? LOL
OMG! Hug This was really well written and the hindi
dialogues were in place too...so touchy!! Day Dreaming

Thank you Vishwa!Hug (I'm assuming that's your name dear, correct me if I am wrong) If the Hindi isn't up to par ever (and trust me it will happen) would you be able to help me by pointing out the errors? You made a great point that to a degree the Hindi is necessary, especially for Manyata's Charecter. Tongue Oh! And I'll add you onto the PM list Wink



Oh yea thats my name and ofcourse! Feel free to ask ANY timeEmbarrassed
n thnks...I dont wanna be too late for the updates! They're KILLERS!!LOL

No worries! I'm going to make every attempt to post one update per day- at least! (this does not include weekendsLOL) I love reading FF's so I understand the want of the reader to get more, and not be left hanging for periods on end Wink

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
That was amazing dude Thumbs Up...Do PM me for the next part...

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