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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 40)

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by navyan07

Your stories r so great and by the way reeha...k I was wondering when Uday is going to give her the book he took in part 4.I can hardly wait for part 11!!

Hey Navyan! You can just call me Reeha. K is my last name's initial (I know, not very origional!LOL)

To be honest, I havent thought about that yet... Stern Smile
It will definatly be down the line: Udayveer has plenty of things to give to Manyata- she just has to be willing to accept themWink

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri01

Hi ReehaHug first of all am sorry for coming late as I was busy with my little boy yesterday.

Wow Reeha kya baat hain... kya update hain...to be honest I read it twice... the first I did it in a fast forward motion as my son was jumping around and just now I read it at my leisure.  Sweetheart you did a great job and love the way you have merged all the emotions within one update...ehsaas of the unknown feeling that one always fight within himself and Manyata is just fighting with this unknown feeling to open her gift and joy of the family to see their lost child finally accept her real identity always the joy didn't last long.  The childhood friendship which is still alive somewhere deep inside ManVeer despite the separation of 16 long years.  The wonderful motherhood moments that Komal and M spent after the long wait of 16 years which are priceless for Komal.  Also the envy of J and VB and finally the despair of majnu and co as Manyata is accepting her royal blood.  Hey how can I forget about Avani part it's too funny.

Am happy that slowly majnu is going out of the picture.
 
Thxs Reeha for another awesome update and the pm. 
 
GAAHHH! thank you sooo much Priya! Hug
No worries! As long as you read it and tell me what you think, it doesnt matter when you come!Wink I hope you enjoyed your day with your son!
 
I'm glad you liked Avani! I think she could be a charecter I bring in down the line: For instance the hair stylist in the Princess diaries that Does Mia's transformation comes in for her wedding Wink And yes, Majnu WILL be out of the picture- I KNOW it's damned slow, but I feel there needs to be a progression, not just a sudden disapearanceConfused

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dimpzz

REEHAAA!!!!! Hug
i just came through your FF and absolutely loved it!!
to be precise i sat and watched all the episodes from the beginning yesterday and today read this!
i had watched just some random episode once and thought aakash and moniya had to be together but was in love with UV from the first sight but after watching it from the beginning realized that it HAD to be manyata and udayveer only!
and i totally love the idea of story from udayveer's POV
girl! you've done justice to his feelings and emotions and his thinking!
i really loved the way you've written everything...the flashbacks, the present, everything!!
and thank god that moniya finally got a new wardrobe LOL was so bored of her ragged clothes!
just the love the way everything is going on. Both of them coming closer!
i really really loved the time they spent in the hotel...like i've got no words to tell you how much i loved it
if this explains it...i've got my chemistry pre board exam tomorrow and i'm sitting and reading this here LOL i guess this tells how much i loved your work!
and OMG the siggy that you have made is like so amazing!!!Embarrassed i kept staring at it for like 10 minutes!LOL udayveer is just so hot!! he just so charming! Day Dreaming

will be eagerly waiting for the  next update! and please do pm me the next time you update

love
Hug
Navpreet

Oh my goodness! Thank you so Much Navpreet! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment and telling me what works! I'll definatley try to uphold this standard for you guys!LOL I'm such a big UV fan that I couldnt help myself but write the UvC's. Thanks for liking the artwork. I'm not particularly good with graphics, so It's all done on paintEmbarrassed! Writing is more my thingLOL

NOW, I hope you ROCKED your exam! Thank you so much for reading, and I'll keep you posted: I generally update once a week- twice if I have nothing better to do Big smile

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by missdek

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Ah! Thank you Miss. Dek. Really appreciate it! But one comment is more than enough per update dear!LOL

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SweetDreams-

I dont think I need 2 say this... but that update was fantastic!  Big smile

Honestly, your writing is superb! Star 

The way it just flows, u convey the emotions of the characters so well!! Also, the sequences of events occur so logically and not just randomly. For example, like how Manyata had to change her clothes when she fell in the pool which led to her makeover, rather than just waking up one morning and accepting her title as a princess. U can tell that great effort and thought has been put into it!! Clap

The selection of clothes for Maanyatas wardrobe is beautiful! Utterly gorgeous! Also love how Manyata is starting to like Udays company, and is confused between the evil and annoying UV she knows and her sweet, childhood friend UV. Hope the latter wins! Smile 

Thanks for the PM, and can i just say, I loved how u gave a longer update this time! Such a treat! Dancing
Thank you Sweetdreams! (Sorry, I don't know your name dear!)
Please let me know if you have any request for the UvC's Wink
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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nirjhor105

thanks a lot for the long update... it was very beautiful

wasn't manyata's dress purple? it looks deep blue more than purple, i am a little confused...and yes i would also love to see uday's dress. and as for suggestion i am looking forward to looking mayata in pink/light blue, less embroidery but has some extra ordinary cut... lol it seems i demand a lot...never mind choose anything you wish i'm sure i'll love it :D

usually i don't reply much because i don't have much to say, but for this ff my hand just goes towards keyboard after finishing reading

You're right Nirjhor! It is more of a deep blue! LOL I've edited that, thank you so much for pointing it out! I am obviously colour blind Embarrassed.

 
I was actually trying to find an Uday dress, but to be honest couldnt find the right colour: I will definatley do it next time though! Thank you for the suggestion Smile
 
As for another Manyata Outfit, if you have a picture in mind, please send me it! I'd love to take a look and hopefully use that Big smile
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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
hey reeha... U asked us that if we had any kind of pic for what manyata should wear right??
Well i have one, but i dont know how to update pictures!!! Show it to me plzz
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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerakhan45

hey reeha... U asked us that if we had any kind of pic for what manyata should wear right??
Well i have one, but i dont know how to update pictures!!! Show it to me plzz

If you go to an Image Hosting sight like http://imageshack.us/

You simply choose the picture from your drive, and copy and paste the "FORUM" URL to the post. BUT don't post it here: PM me the picture please Smile

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