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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 131)

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged


Hey reeha!


I d0nt kn0w what to say about this purely beautiful update it was intense,pure, em0ti0nal,touching, awes0me, beautifuly written in short PERFECT! I swear i had tears in my while reading this update and i know m late but i always prefer reading ur work slowly rather than in a rush i imagine every singer word of ur update wil reading it for me it bec0mex lyk epis0de of my all tym fav show...


I will admit i usd to hate mina i felt lyk slapping her hard on her face because she was herself resp0nsible for her own c0nditi0n but but but this update of ur changed my th0ughts about her it c0nverted all my hatered into al0t al0t of love for her though she d0ne many things wr0ng bt whos perfect. She was in l0ve with uday and just because of it she forgot her values...


This update opend my eyes and mind and it provd dat u shud never judge a bo0k from its cover here is the same case she l0oked evil to us fr0m outside but fr0m inside she is a heartbroken vulnerable girl who still craves for love. She have sufferd alot and that is what made her this cruel and seriously fr0m n0w onwards i wil never hate her charcter n0 mater what she do n0 mater how much she tries to gve pain to uday because sum whr v kn0w uday is da culprit t0o he should kn0w da pain thr0ugh wich many have g0ne coz of him i kn0w he always was clear abt hs fiance thing bt stil he was wr0ng in c0mpltly ign0ring mina in n0t even pickin up her calx. . . .


Reeha i kn0w maybe m wr0ng bt ths is my pov i want uday to feel da same pain thr0ugh wich a 21 old gal g0ne when he wil feel da way then he will ask mina to forgve hm fr0m all his will and heart and i wud love to see dat i kn0w i might be s0unding kind of dramatic to u bt seriously ur update t0uchd da heart i felt lyk i cn see mina g0in thru ths pain, l0nliness!


Please d0nt let uday snatch away minas 0nly h0pe and love of her life aditya she will be n0thing with0ut him i d0nt want emptines in her lyf again! 0mg u kn0w ths is the l0ngest c0ment i have ever ever wrote:p


reeha for me it was ur bestest update i knw i might be s0unding realy weird to u bt ths update t0uchd my heart and i wud thanku for writing such an 0utstanding chapter thankx:)


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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by xxDaydreameRxx

This was a beautiful update. And tragic too. 
In fact I kinda love it and hate it. Love it because it was written so amazingly well but kidna hate it caz its making me hate on Uday right now! LOL! Thank you Rajnana! That was sort of the idea. We're all such big UV fans that we often overlook his flaws or down play his actions. I never hated on Mina even in the beginning. Simply because even if she was to cause pain to ManVeer, really that pain could be barely equivalent to what she had to go through. Her story really is sad. Sad would be an understatement. Stern Smile Yupp, tragic. But sort of inspiring, no? I could write an FF on her alone, but the story is of UV, not of her- so she's just a small part of it: and ofcourse the mother of his first child.
Can she please fall in love again Reeha?? Pretty please! And with the right person this time! I really want a happy ending for her and I want someone/something to erase all that pain, even though she can never forget it, I want it to no longer hurt her even to remember it. Done and Done. I've already paired her off before you'd made the request. Now, its up to you to think WHO that someone is LOL.
Some ManVeer fans may kill me but like at this point, as much as I LOVE Uday, a part of me even wants him to suffer a little bit. I think he deserves it. Stern Smile I don't think you'd be alone tbh.
But in the end I want happy ending for everyone! Hope I'm not asking for too much! 
Oh and question -
Sleep comes easy, and the dreams are as always, only of him. That's my error actually: It doesn't seem clear but the dream is of "Aditya" actually. From the begining to the end, because Mina still feels guilty that she didn't want her son. She loves him so much but she always remembers back when she hated her unborn child and what it represented (a part of Uday)- she remembers feeling depresed and resentful. Feeling suicidal. then she feels the guilt of almost ending their lives. She feels this and remembers this because Aditya is her world- she has other nightmares as well- that he'll hate her for keeping his father from him, that he'll be ridiculed for being a bas***d, Aditya is always on her mind.

So, I hope that explains it! I didn't want to freak you guys out LOL!

I should make it abundantly clear: Mina is NOT pining away for Uday. She doesn't feel Anything of the sort for him. She hates his GUTS and would love to cause him some pain, but she doesn't want to be the significant other in his life: she hates him too much for that.
Is him Uday? Does Mina still dream about UV every night? Ouch

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IndigoBlues

speechless...
i am liking amardeep...and i can see how he's the villain here...mina is a mother...she cares too much for aditya to think of any personal rivalry with uday anymore...but Amardeep is somebody who's filled with hatred, and I can see the makings of a powerful villain in him...too bad he's so old. If he was her brother, I'd have shipped him LOL LOLOL! I should have considered that, but I think father has a better essance of support- most individual's parents wouldn't have stood by their child's side had they been in the same spot- siblings usually are more solid, parents vary. BUT had their been a brother, I would have considered Unnati pairing up with him...now...I'm second guessing my self LOL! Oh well, too late for that now :D
I like the fact that you're giving importance to side characters...if you don't know your supporting cast, you find your leads in a messLOL the more i read about mina and amardeep the more i can guess what is gonna happen with maanveerWink I'm sure you can- Aman's villianous side isn't too unique, it's pretty obvious. I love Manveer, but I don't want my FF to be a bunch of cheesy moments of " I love you" and dancing in the rain ( I love those moments too though) because I feel it detracts from an actual story. Their needs to be DRAMA, and thats why side charecters are so important- they bring out the Drama. This FF has taken a really different direction from the show: 1- Manveer happened FIRST, and Drama AFTER; in the Show, there was Drama, Drama, Drama (most of it just stupid) which would DELAY Manveer.  Bleh, I wasn't a fan of that. Infact it sort of pissed me off. Second- I don't want Manveer to be the primary couple. I always said that JN would have been better used as a supporting charecter rather than a villian between Manveer:buuuttt, those pesky CVs didn't care -___-; LOL...ok, that was an impressive rant tehehehe.
 
thanks so much for updating! *faints* now it's my YASH's turnLOL YAAYY! You're a Jayash fan? Or a Yash fan? LOL! I was supposed to update the JNCs first, but the UVCs has a larger fanbase (YAAAYY! We passed the 100,000 views mark!) so I had to appease them before I got death threats LOL! JNCs is next. Should be up tommorow :D
p.s. Mina is one yummy mummy.LOLWink BAHAHAH! Why not! Uday is one Dreamy Daddy LOL!

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
so r u updating today?

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by xxDaydreameRxx

This was a beautiful update. And tragic too. 
In fact I kinda love it and hate it. Love it because it was written so amazingly well but kidna hate it caz its making me hate on Uday right now! LOL! Thank you Rajnana! That was sort of the idea. We're all such big UV fans that we often overlook his flaws or down play his actions. I never hated on Mina even in the beginning. Simply because even if she was to cause pain to ManVeer, really that pain could be barely equivalent to what she had to go through. Her story really is sad. Sad would be an understatement. Stern Smile Yupp, tragic. But sort of inspiring, no? I could write an FF on her alone, but the story is of UV, not of her- so she's just a small part of it: and ofcourse the mother of his first child.
Can she please fall in love again Reeha?? Pretty please! And with the right person this time! I really want a happy ending for her and I want someone/something to erase all that pain, even though she can never forget it, I want it to no longer hurt her even to remember it. Done and Done. I've already paired her off before you'd made the request. Now, its up to you to think WHO that someone is LOL.
Some ManVeer fans may kill me but like at this point, as much as I LOVE Uday, a part of me even wants him to suffer a little bit. I think he deserves it. Stern Smile I don't think you'd be alone tbh.
But in the end I want happy ending for everyone! Hope I'm not asking for too much! 
Oh and question -
Sleep comes easy, and the dreams are as always, only of him. That's my error actually: It doesn't seem clear but the dream is of "Aditya" actually. From the begining to the end, because Mina still feels guilty that she didn't want her son. She loves him so much but she always remembers back when she hated her unborn child and what it represented (a part of Uday)- she remembers feeling depresed and resentful. Feeling suicidal. then she feels the guilt of almost ending their lives. She feels this and remembers this because Aditya is her world- she has other nightmares as well- that he'll hate her for keeping his father from him, that he'll be ridiculed for being a bas***d, Aditya is always on her mind.

So, I hope that explains it! I didn't want to freak you guys out LOL!

I should make it abundantly clear: Mina is NOT pining away for Uday. She doesn't feel Anything of the sort for him. She hates his GUTS and would love to cause him some pain, but she doesn't want to be the significant other in his life: she hates him too much for that.
Is him Uday? Does Mina still dream about UV every night? Ouch

You know your comment really gave me so much relief. At first when I read your FF it was always obvious to me that you are greatly inspired or are a very big UV fan like the rest of us obviously, but like when I read so much about him sleeping around and then eventually breaking Mina's heart I kinda wondered whether you were still trying to justify and still show him in the hero's light. But I'm happy we're kinda on the same page because I also want him to learn a lesson or two and for once feel actual guilt. Manyata made him apologize but that doesnt mean he felt bad. 
Secondly, Thank God you have someone planned for Mina...wait I should guess? Does that mean we already know the person!? Shocked Okay don't say Vijay bhai now. Stern Smile LOL caz he's the only dude I can think of right now. LOL
Okay thirdly, I am sooo happy that Mina doesnt feel any love for UV still. That is such a relief to hear. Smile
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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Hey who is DC??? loving Mina's character & also Andy...he's really vry sweeet. Hope evry thngs gd betwn manyata & uday. Plz update soon
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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Malvaika

Hey who is DC??? loving Mina's character & also Andy...he's really vry sweeet. Hope evry thngs gd betwn manyata & uday. Plz update soon
 
DC is one of Uday's best friends, I think he's in update 18, or something like that.

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Reeha i jus started readin UVC's... Nd they are amazingg!! all parts... But y hav u stopd writing?? Plz update nxt episodes soonn... :)

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