Dekha Ek Khwaab


Dekha Ek Khwaab
Dekha Ek Khwaab

The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 121)

wendy25 Goldie

Joined: 06 January 2012
Posts: 2381

Posted: 20 July 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged

you are really really evil reeha. Now i am craving for next part even more and you are saying to not demand next part soonOuch
really felt so bad for manyata and mina. both deserves a good life!
will come back with my long comment, don't have much time right now

Edited by wendy25 - 20 July 2012 at 2:15am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


Herman_4u IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 September 2006
Posts: 2828

Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Hey Reeha, I have read all the parts, and wanna let u know that ur fab writer and fantastic story teller, once ur done writing ur essays maybe u should think about writing a book lol and u can't blame us for asking u write the next part soon when u leave us hanging like this at such a crucial moment, now I always keep thinking about how will manyata react and how will their relationship develop, so yes update soon lol :)

btw i usually am good at guessing the storyline, but this was sooo unexpected for me, i didn't guess until they saw the kid lol then i'm like "oh he's his son"lol don't know if i should be happy or sad about it, but the way storyline developed after this bomb is sooo veryyy interesting and it has gotten very deeper and raises many questions, like M was ready to move on with UV after knowing about his affairs but can u move on with him now when there's living symbol of his past? your fairytale has gotten very real, let's see what happens, and again when r u updating lol good luck on ur essay, definitely more important :)

Edited by Herman_4u - 20 July 2012 at 6:46pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


-SilverAngel- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 15 March 2007
Posts: 29853

Posted: 21 July 2012 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Hey Reeha, please continue with The Udayveer Chronicles. Haven't tried the TJC yet but will do too later on... and the forum will be opened as long as we keep it active. So plzz keep on updating.

Hope your essays go well and you update soon.
sparikh IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 June 2005
Posts: 2664

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Uday is gonna pay for all his past distractions...all came back to haunt him when he's @ place with Manya...

Aditya is so cute...should have guess earlier; he's too much like Uday...


suha16 Groupbie

Joined: 28 July 2011
Posts: 186

Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
hey a very shocking updateShocked...keep updating !
Roses_ZaYa Senior Member

Joined: 20 May 2012
Posts: 495

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
reeha...k IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 September 2006
Posts: 7556

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged

Re: Special Update on Page 114


I don't know if you all saw or read it, and if you haven't please give it a look and read over!

-Mais- was kind enough to give you guys a special treat- or teaser- while I was busy with my school work (One Essay down, One Presentation down: And one essay Left -_- )
So, our resident Hacker- Here is my take:


I loved it. Even when I knew that this Udayveer was not the Udayveer I had created with my words: They are still two sides of the same coin.


At the same time, I can see this transition you made: It's true. Udayveer has fallen for Manyata and didn't heed Aura's advice (not a fan of the name: Makes me think of ghosts! LOL!)

One thing that did surprise me was your articulate description of Sex: or post Sex. I didn't expect that from you- it was done gracefully and with extreme taste. I LOVED it!
You're a fantastic writer, and I've never understood why you haven't ever pursued to COMPLETE and FF.

Another thing I love about your writing is the Use of these : " "
I can't use quotation marks, I never get the flow right or the transitions. Hence why I have a script text:
[b] Name [/ b]: Dialogue

I personally, prefer your method- it's much more clean and succinct.


Overall: I rate it a 10/10. You've captured Uday at the perfect age and in the perfect mood.




PS: Sorry about the late response L

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Piggies Senior Member

Joined: 10 January 2012
Posts: 751

Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
What a great update Reeha! You write so magnificently. 
I LOVE to read UVC's. This is the first time I'm posting in your thread. I had been a silent reader ever since you started UVC's.
They have been getting better every single time.
Do update your JNC's.Smile
Love those as well. You portray the emotions of every character whether it'd be a minor or a major so well. I'm left amazed at how well you write in every update. You should really consider writing a book or something!Big smile
Can't wait to read the next part and see what happens between Mina,UV,& Manyata.
P.S. : Thank you Mais for writing the Special Update. You both are VERY talented.
P.S.S.: I realized that Andy was Uday's son when they first met at the airport especially when you said something about his smile.


Edited by Piggies - 23 July 2012 at 1:20pm

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
The Jainandini Chronicles| NEW UPDATE| PART 9| PG. 45

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 47 48

Author: reeha...k   Replies: 379   Views: 56929

reeha...k 379 56929 28 June 2015 at 5:49am by humairaa1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Author: _Annesha_   Replies: 173   Views: 14197

_Annesha_ 173 14197 14 July 2013 at 5:18am by _Annesha_
~Yuvraj Udayveer learns a lesson~SS note pg 9

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: muskan99   Replies: 76   Views: 10217

muskan99 76 10217 16 April 2013 at 1:19pm by fireroad99
Define Udayveer

2 3

Author: .HookandHybrid.   Replies: 16   Views: 1459

.HookandHybrid. 16 1459 20 February 2013 at 2:46am by MrsSSO
SS: Fate|LAST PART part 8, Page 30

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: -Niha-   Replies: 307   Views: 31485

-Niha- 307 31485 01 January 2013 at 10:37pm by MrsSSO

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Dekha Ek Khwaab Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index