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Maan and Geet FF-Hameshaa **NOTE** (Page 14)

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Loved this part...
Thank god maan proposed geet or else that vikram would have done something for sure

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
beautiful update
continue soon

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
great update!!! thanks fr d p.m Clap

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
awsem love it

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
awesome...hope maneet stay together hamesha...

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
part 5
nice part...
Maan has confessed and proposed Geet...
cont soon...

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Part 6

Maan returns home smiling.He was so happy.He felt so alive.He saw Dadima sitting on the living room sofa watching her serials.Maan went slowly and took the remote and closed the TV.
Dadima:''Maan...I was watching that''
Maan:''I have something to tell you...Dadi''
Dadima:''I know what you want to tell me''
Maan:''You know what?''
Dadima:''Geet accepted your proposal''
Maan:''You really do know everything'' and went and put his head on her lap.Dadima put her hands on his head
Dadima:''Maan...I even know your heartbeats...tml I will go to meet Dr Mohinder Handa and finalized the date for your marriage''
Maan:''Really Dadima''
Dadima:''Yes...and now can I have back the remote''
Maan:''God and your serials'' He switched on the TV and sat with Dadima watching serials.
Geet was restlessly to tell her father about Maan.She was worried that her father would be angry with her.Maan sms her telling that he and his Dadima are coming tml to meet her father.She was walking in front of her father's table while he was clearing for the day as the clinic was now closed.
Mohinder Handa:''Geet...if you keep on doing that...I will feel like vomiting''
Geet:''What!!!! Sorry Papa''
Mohinder Handa:''Come here'' she walked slowly towards her father and sat down beside him '' mother passed away when you were only 5 years old.I have tired very hard to bring up as a father and a mother but today I feel like I only brought you up as father and not as a mother''
Geet:''Pls Papa...don't say that''
Mohinder Handa:''Then tell your Papa...what is wrong? I have been noticing you since you came back from college''
Geet:''Papa...I...I...I never went to college today...I went to Sunset Point''
Mohinder Handa:''Why did you go to Sunset Point?''
Geet:''To meet someone''
Mohinder Handa:''Who?''
Geet:''I met a guy at college and his name is Maan...Maan Singh Khurana...he is a very good man and I love him'' She then shows her father the ring that Maan gave her wear ''Papa...he owns Khurana's empire and he lives with his Dadima...Savitri Devi Khurana at the Khurana Mansion...Papa...he wants to marry me''
Mohinder Handa:''Is his family coming to see you?''
Geet:''Yes...he said that his Dadima will come and meet you''
Mohinder Handa:''Then...I am okay with it''
Geet:''really...Papa? Are you happy?''
Mohinder Handa:''Of cos...I am happy...Geet he loves you and you love him...that is the main point but Geet...he is very rich and we''
Geet:''Papa...He and his Dadima don't mind...they are very good people''
Mohinder Handa:''Okay beta...pls tell Maan and his Dadima to come tml''
Geet:''They are coming tml''

Mohinder Handa:''Haaye rabba...there is so much to do'' and he became restlessly and was walking around
Vikram was alone in his room...thinking of Geet when his room door opened and in came Pammi...his loyal servant
Pammi:'' need to go for a meeting in Paris tml...Have you packed you luggage?''
Vikram:''No...I didn't find the time''
Pammi:''You didn't find the time? You were alone in your room''
Vikram:''After seeing her...I can only think of her''
Pammi:''After seeing who?''
Vikram:''I want her Pammi ma...I want her''

The next day...Dadima and Maan arrived at Geet's house.
Mohinder Handa was very pleased to see Maan and he was confident that Maan will take care of his Geet forever.
Mohinder Handa:''
Savitriji......whatever I could do for this wedding...I will do it...I will not disgrace you in front of your relatives and friends''
Dadima:''Dr Handa...pls don't ever think that you will disgrace us...we are now one family...pls don't say such words...Geet come here'' Geet went near to Dadima and sat besides her ''I am so glad that Maan choose you...Geet...welcome to the Khurana's family'' and gifted her a necklace.
Geet:''Thank you so much Dadima'' she said and accepted the gift ''Dadima...Papa...if I have both of your permission can I bring Maan to the temple near the house''
Mohinder Handa:''Of cos''
Dadima:''Sure dear and besides you don't need our permission now...maan is all yours '' Geet blushed and Maan stood up and followed Geet to the temple near the house.
Mohinder Handa:''Geet...goes to that temple everyday...she has a strong faith in God''
Dadima:''I am so happy to have a grand-daughter in law like all my prayers have been answered''
Maan was at the temple with Geet while she was trying a yellow cloth around a tree and walked towards her.
Maan:''Geet...we came here to tie a thread around this tree?''
Geet:''Shut up Maan!!! Don't you know what this means?''
Maan:''What does it mean?''
Geet:''Maan...Its believe that when a couple tie a yellow cloth around this tree...they will be united forever...even after many births''
Maan:'' our love so weak that to strength it you have to tie a cloth? Dont you have faith in my love?''
Geet:''I have faith in our love Maan but I want to be with you Hameshaa''
Maan:''Do you know the meaning of
Geet:''Hameshaa means that even death cannot transcend...where our love is free...Hameshaa is something that never ends and lives forever''
Maan:''and our loves lives for
Hameshaa'' They hugged

Precap:Vikram sees Geet with her Father
              Geet and Maan meets Adi and Pinky

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Edited by KTPROCKS - 29 December 2011 at 10:32am

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Posted: 29 December 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
yayy thank god geet's dad accepted maan
uff this vikram what is he gonna do
aww love the maaneet scene in temple
so beautiful
ur writing is amazing
continue soon plz
thank you so much..

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