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hey guys im soooo sorry that havent continued for the longest time!! And thanx for all those awsome comments!!!
Y would he help me?? oh my god im such a loser im still thinking about the fact that ANGAD KHANNA HELPED ME!! but his sweet innocent smile had won me over!! I couldnt believe it myself that I thought Angad was sweet and innocent but then I thought that people could change!!
Ouchhhh, uff not again i broke the beaker once again, everyone was staring at me, but the eyes that were searching through just threw a lil smile and turned away, It was unusual for angad no to make fun of me, my only question was y is he not annoying me like brat he is??
It was weird how I just stood there and kripa so lost in her world broke the beaker, but as she did the only person she was looking at was me, trying to find the angad who hurts her feelings.....I think, or maybe she was trying to find out if I thought that was funny, indeed it was funny, but i just smiled and turned away.
kripa ur such a loser, u break a beaker almost everyday, do u think its funny, my rep is on the line......
was that prithve yelling at kripa, nah it couldnt be, i walked toward the inner park of the chamber, and before me I found kripa run to the fountin and sit, i turned around thinking that i cant face her, but the sweet voice of crying made me stop, she was crying, my body as if froze, he did yell at her, I gathered all my courage and touched her shoulder. she looked up and her eyes full oh sadness struck up in confussion...
hey i no its not my best part, its not full of emotion but i really dont have time, I tried my best, if anythink u feel is abliss please feel free to tell me to change it!!!
hey guys most of you guys thougt this was confusing so im going to write it in a summary form so u guys can understand it better!!
In the first paragraph, kripa is thinking to herself as to y angad was being so nice to her and how she thinks that his smile is winning her over, and then she breaks a beaker and looks at angad to see if he makes fun of her.
the next paragraph is when angad is thinking, he is thinking that kripa lost in her thoughts broke the beaker, but when she did she looked up to only angad, but all angad did was smile.
the last paragraph is also angads point of view, he thinks that he hears prithvi screaming at kripa but then he thinks that it cant be, as he makes his way out he sees kripa crying so he sums up all his courage and walks to her, and puts his hands on her shoulder.
and so basically the next part will be when angad and kripa talk for the first time in the fanfic, well they have talked before tahts were all the hate and love came from but this will be the fist mentioned conversation.
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oh im sorry!!
first it was kripa thinking about how nice angad was to her and then she was thinking why he was being nice to her.
next it was angad thinking how kripa broke the beaker and how he thought it was cute
then angad overheard sumone yellin, he thought it was prithvi yelling at kripa then he was like it cant be. He started going out but he found kripa out htere crying. and he went over by her. so basically the next part will be the first part where kripa and angad actually talk.
Im so sorry if this was confusing, Next time i will try to make it more easier to understand!!1
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