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Love or Life??Pg. 16(6/5)HURRY!! (Page 2)

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it was fab! amazing! superb! interesting! man, i love it!!!i love it!!! u have to have to have to continue now!!!!
just a request, use a bigger font, as this font was a little hard to read! newayz do continue soon! i am dying to read more!
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Sounds Great!
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Thanx for the comments guys they are really helpfull!!

 

 

 

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The walk through the unusually chilly coridors have always been hard for me. The quitness of the halls and the snow tip, tapping on the walls made me realize I was alone since childhood, just lonely. And the thought of being alone brought Kripa into my mind, and the fact that she wasn't mine. I always shook my head in attempt to get those thoughts out of my head but today, today I was determined not to shake my head and not think about kripa, because face it I was born alone and will live life alone and I will have to forget kripa, but this was a failure. for the first time in my life I stopped and closed my eyes standing in the middle of the corridor, as the picture of kripa soothed me. I opened my eyes to find the same brown eyes that I stared in my mind every nite, but the difference was that this time those brown eyes were trying to read me more like understand me. It was her she stared deep and hard, I just blankly moved out her way, and all she did was give my a look and she left.


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so sorry again guys so hard for me to post but I'm trying my best!! is it eaiser to read??
hope u like it!!1


~~~Mahak~~~






Edited by Mini786 - 04 April 2006 at 4:43pm
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heyyy...ur fanfic sounds really interesting and depressing too...plzz continue cant wait to read the next part!!!....
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hey it sounds fantastic continue soon...interested in reading more!! Wink
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plz cont soon!i am dieing to read and kno more!

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