Posted: 05 June 2006 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
hey guys im back with another part for this fanfic!!
thanx for the great comments they really help
Kripa, come on where are u, need to talk to you, then it hit me, she must be outside by the lake, where she always was. I ran out, in hope to see her there. I ran around the pond, but she wasn't there, I looked across the field and there she was, her hair flying behind her, her feelings reflecting off her face. she was sitting under the tree, reading.
"ummm, so wat did u want to tell me in hte morning."
"Oh yea, ummm, well I just --- wanted --- well u no --- umm"
"Come on nah kripa it cant be that hard"
The color in her face changed, if I thought rite it was turning slightly pink, maybe even red. only giving her the innocence that was in her eyes
"come on Kripa, ok if its that hard, y dont u rite it to me. Or if u dont want ot rite it then close ur eyes, and imagine ur infront of noone and just blurt out wat u want to say."
"ok, yea i can do this, ok well can i just turn around, i mean i cant stand if ur looking at me."
"Ok here goes, u no the fifth annuval skewl celebration, held for the winning team for this skewl dance."
"yea wat about it"
My eyes brightened maybe she wanted to ask me to go with her, or mayb, just mayb she wanted to me to make prithvi jealous, my heart sulked if she did want that then I was going to go with her, happily.
My heart froze as I stared at her childish face hidihng her eyes behind her hands, she was peeking through one eye to see my response, but I pretended that i didnt see her. I just couldnt believe it, she wanted to go with me. NOT PRITHVI BUT ME. I felt like singing and dancing, yelling, running around the skewl. this hd to be hte greatest moment of my flife. Happiness ran through my body, feelings rushed to my heart, a sense of coldness struck me. she wanted to go with me. SCORE!!!!
Kripa took her hands of her face.
"I guess thats a no, catch ya later"
"but i didnt say anything" My heart began pounding, no please god dont let me screw this up, please god, please
"Exactly my point, you dint say yes and u didnt say no, so-"
"Well i was in utter shock, but my answer is YES, ill go wiht u"
Hey guys i no angads reaction wasnt as great as I wanted but i had hte best for kripa, unfortuantly my mom is calling so i will put up hers later so bye guys, hope u like it!!
Edited by Mini786 - 05 June 2006 at 7:14pm