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Love or Life??Pg. 16(6/5)HURRY!! (Page 13)

Mini786 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 May 2006 at 7:52pm | IP Logged

hey guys thanx for the awsome comments........



I shivered as my body touched the cold grass, and the wind blew my hair. THIS JUST COULDNT BE HAPPENIG!!!

"Don't worry Kripa nothing will happen to you, unless........"

"Who's there, and wat are you talking about" My voice came out shakily as I stared off in all directions to find the owner of the harsh voice.

"Kripa do you no where you are?"

"WHO ARE YOU?"

"Tis Tis Tis Kripa I think you didn't hear me I ASKED YOU DO YOU KNOW WHERE YOU ARE?"

"Yes, yes I do, this is where it all hapened, everything"

"Hmmmm good, that means I won't have to explian anything to you"

"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?"

"Ahhh I like that, you want to get to the point, well lets, Kripa you have something, something I want"

"Wat?"

"Angad's life!"

"A-a-a-angad"

"Yes, thats wat I said"

"What do you want from him" my head started pounding again as everything went dark.But in the midst i could hear it, the cold laughter with the sudden bursts of "kill - him".

*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*

I woke up to find my self in a white room, filled with all types of flowers.

"Are you OK"

The sweet voice gave me a start as i looked up, but the suns rays hit my eye blinding me, i tried to sit up, but the figure slightly pushed me down...

"You need rest"

"Where am I"

"Your in the schools hospital"

"Wow I've never been in this part of the school as I looked around, my eyes adjusting to the light.

My heart stopped as I looked at the figure infront of me "A-a-angad?"

"Hey, feeling better?"

"Yea" But thats it, thats all I can say to the guy who was sitting there infront of me who saved me from-------------OH NO, Oh my god I had to tell angad that his life was in danger, but how could I, I mean will he believe me.

"Hey, I have to go to class, catch ya later."

"OK bye"

The flashing pain I had felt during that moment, rushed back into my body.

*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*

Yea thats it Angad beta, thats all you can say, stupid idiot, I have to get to class, stuped like you even do anything there, man she was rite there infront of me but all i can say is I have to go to class, chatch ya later, Ufffff

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Hey guys wats up, did yall like the part??
And yea I was meaning to ask yall, do you guys think that I shud stop writing this ff, and if you do then please tell me, cuz I dont think you guys really like it, I mean to say im not really getting a good response and all!!

but till then I hope you guys like this part
Big smile

~~~Mahak~~~



Edited by Mini786 - 13 May 2006 at 7:53pm

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Posted: 13 May 2006 at 7:59pm | IP Logged

Buddy...I loved that part! You have to continue writing it! At least, for me? Embarrassed Tongue

Awesum job! I love the fact that your story is full of suspence LOL

 

LOL...I forgot to mention that I've been reading your story, silentlyEmbarrassed



Edited by shahidlover24 - 13 May 2006 at 8:03pm
munizaaa Goldie
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Posted: 13 May 2006 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
oh my god i just read all of ur FF its so damn good plzz continue again. I love it how u had it first person and it does not confuse me at all. But for ppl that confused by this why dont u write whose perspective ur writting from. It will make it easier for them to understand. Clap Clap great episode plzz continue soon i will be searching for ur episode. Tongue
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Posted: 13 May 2006 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
No dont end this fan fic!!! We love it!!! It's really good! I'm sure you'll get loads of comments! lol. Well awesome part, cont soon, I'm addicted to this fan fic!
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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
heyy.. dont u dare say dat....Angry..lolzLOL..kidding..Wink..now seriousely u r a grrt writterClapTongue..as shahidlover says m also ur ff's scilent readerSmile..its jus dat we r bit lazzy 2 comment.. Embarrassed..so dont say we dont like it...again..plzz dont stop writting Cry...con sooon & keep up d good workTongueSmile..btw plzz make d parts bigger..Tongue
Mini786 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shahidlover24

Buddy...I loved that part! You have to continue writing it! At least, for me? Embarrassed Tongue

Awesum job! I love the fact that your story is full of suspence LOL

 

LOL...I forgot to mention that I've been reading your story, silentlyEmbarrassed

hey

thanx,

Big smileLOL

~~~Mahak~~~

 

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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 4:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by munizaaa

oh my god i just read all of ur FF its so damn good plzz continue again. I love it how u had it first person and it does not confuse me at all. But for ppl that confused by this why dont u write whose perspective ur writting from. It will make it easier for them to understand. Clap Clap great episode plzz continue soon i will be searching for ur episode. Tongue

hey

thanx for the advice, im going to do that from now on

thanx for the awsome comments they really help

TongueBig smile

~~~Mahak~~~

 

Mini786 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2006 at 4:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

No dont end this fan fic!!! We love it!!! It's really good! I'm sure you'll get loads of comments! lol. Well awesome part, cont soon, I'm addicted to this fan fic!

awww....

thanx

Big smileSmile

~~~Mahak~~~

 

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