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my version to Tumhari Disha Fast Forward (Page 5)

rang Senior Member
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

thanks samy,

your encouragement made me write this but i want more people to read it and where has simran vanished?

rang

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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 2:44pm | IP Logged

Hi guys,Tongue

I will post my next part of the story early next week............Smile

This week I am busy with my job work.............Embarrassed

keep watching this space...............LOL

SimsssssssssssssssSmile

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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 4:35pm | IP Logged

Heya rang Big smile

please do continuuee..i was loving you storyyy...........Big smile please it soo sweet with dk and lady d and not forgeting baby Digen awwww soo sweet

Can't wait til the next part

Love Asian Princess/Dk ki deewani Wink

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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Rang....I loev your story...why arent u teh director of TD??

Simran...ONE word ...FANTABULOUS..I just LOVED YOUR SCENE>>SERIOUSLY NO KIDDING....IT WAS AWSOME!

-bomby!
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 11:37pm | IP Logged

Agree with you..... Bombgirl4eva.......LOL

Both stories are awesome.........Clap

can't wait for the next part.......Cry

rang and simran.............pls update soooooooooooooon......Wink

rang Senior Member
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Posted: 09 April 2005 at 3:16am | IP Logged
 

Hi all,

 

I have thought of a romantic scene between the D's hope you'll like it.

 

As we have all seen that every time Dk gets close to Disha, he puts her in an embarrassing situation since someone or the other catches them. Disha is really getting tensed about this because she cannot face anybody now. Where ever she goes people of her family look at her and start giggling and troubling her by taking Dk's name. Our simple and sweet Dish feels too disturbed about her love being made a mockery by everyone and all because of Dk's irresponsible behavior. So, one fine Sunday, Disha is in her room, dressed in a light green sari, wakes up Dk, who's lying lazily in the bed.

 

Disha : Dk get up its 9 in the morning.

Dk : Oh Dishu its Sunday, please let me sleep.

Disha : What is it with you? Don't you remember mummyji will not eat her breakfast without you? (Says this as she is making her side of the bed)

 

Suddenly she is pulled on the bed by Dk. He hold her tightly in her arms and smelling her hair asks:

 

Dk : And you? Will you have your breakfast without me?

Disha : Well of course. If you don't leave me and get up now. (Trying t break free)

Dk : ok! You want me to get up so that ma can have breakfast with me, right.

Disha : Yes.

Dk : then lets call her here itself because I am going to have you for breakfast today.

 

Holds her really tight and starts kissing her randomly,

 

Disha :Dk! Dk! What…. what are you…. Doing ….. leave me… you'll spoil my cloths Dk!

 

As he is about to kiss her lips she pushes him hard gets out of his grip and runs away rom him. While fixing her cloths and her hair quickly she says

 

Disha : Dk stop behaving like this and get up, get ready and come down in half and hour I am making breakfast.

 

Dk is mesmerized to see her and as she leaves he takes her pillow and kisses it and smells it for the fragrance of her hair and whispers to him self "Oh Disha why do I love you so much?"

 

Trembling and all nervous with Dk's behavior she steps out f her room and sees Vedant standing ready to knock.

 

Vedant : Good morning Dish!

Disha : (already spaces out gets another shock to see him and thinks how long has he been here?) good morning Vedant you startled me.

Vedant : Dish is everything alright?

Disha : Ya! Why?

Vedant : No I heared some noise from your room so I was about to knock.

Disha  : no everything is fine. You come down after a while we'll have breakfast together.

Vedant  : Ok! I am going for a quick walk.

 

Disha goes into the kitchen a servant is helping her to prepare the meal. After few minutes she realizes there is not butter, so she sends the servant to fetch it. Now she is all alone in the kitchen. Dk some how always smells it that Disha is alone. He comes from behind and slides his hand on her bare waist and feels her arms on his face.

 

Dk : Hmmm! Disha you are so tasty. Can I have a bite?

Disha : Uffff Dk please! Leave me someone might come.

Dk : how many times I've told you I don't care! I just want to romance my wife, which is very much legal.

Disha : (still being troubled by hubby dear) Yes and this little legality of yours lands us in to an embarrassing situation every time.

Dk : that's ok by me. Hmmmm I love you so much.

Disha : Dk stop it or else……

 

Sumitra enters

 

Sumitra : Sunny ! Disha! What's going on here?

Dk : (immediately leaves her and move towards the pan on the stove) Oh!  A a a a nothing ma. I was just smelling this ….a a a….. bhaji….. that Disha made. I wonder how it tastes? Right Disha.

Disha looks at him furiously and begins serving the food.

 

Everybody eat the breakfast, Sumitra and Vedant leave for their rooms, while Dk stays on with Disha trying to flirt with her. Now she really gets angry and throws her apron on his face and goes to her room. She is sitting on her bed with her face down in anger. Dk enters and realizes there is something wrong.

 

Dk : (put his hand on her shoulder ) Disha what happened why are you so upset?

Disha : because you trouble me a lot.

Dk : what did I do?

Disha : Dk there is a time to everything….. you never listen to me.

Dk : what have I done? Infact you are the one who keeps shrugging me off whenever I try to come close to you. I am your husband I have a few rights on you don't I?

Disha : yes you have full right to come close to me and I don't deny that and which wife doesn't want her husband to come close to her. (Blushes)

Dk : then what's the problem?

Disha : you always do this in a wrong place and wrong time. Because of which I have to face so much embarrassment. (Lowers her eyes and softens her tone) everybody keeps troubling me by taking your name. Nobody says anything to you but I am made the center of everybody's laugh.

 

Dk looks at her for a while and then bursts out laughing. Disha looks at him confused for a second and then she too starts laughing.

 

Dk : ok! Ok! I promise I won't do that ever again and if anybody troubles you tell me, I'll take care of it.

Disha : that's a promise now!

Dk : is there anything else that makes you uncomfortable when I come close to you?

Disha : (jokingly) yes, your beard.

 

Both of them start laughing.

 

Dk : now can I hug you?

Disha : no.

Dk :why?

Disha : because door is open.

 

Dk goes and shuts the door and the scene ends

 

Tell me hw do you like this till now for more is coming up. SOON.

Rang

 

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Posted: 09 April 2005 at 3:55am | IP Logged

WOWWWWWWWWW too good rang too good !!!!

Iman

 

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Posted: 09 April 2005 at 4:21am | IP Logged
 

Here is the next part hope you guys will enjoy.

 

Sometime in the afternoon, Dk comes Disha and say that he is leaving for few hours and will be back by 7 pm. She should get ready by then as he is going to take her out for a Gazal night of Jagjit Singh. Disha gets all excited and asks him which sari she should wear. He goes through her wardrobe and chooses one.

 

In the evening Disha gets ready in the fucia colored sari with mukesha work on it. She looks so pretty with her sari shinning from places and even more gorgeous twinkling yes waiting for Dk. She goes and stands in the balcony waiting for the hunk. When suddenly a pair of hands come from behind her and hold her hands and she feels a face touching her back and then kissing her shoulders, arms and occasionally smelling her hair. She stands there motionless thinking its Dk and she should not stop him now since its been too much today. But then she notices something missing….. Oh! Yes she could not feel the beared of Dk then she opens her eyes to see the pair of hands, which are coming out of sleeves of kurta. She realizes it cannot be Dk because he never wears a kurta. She gets scared pushes the figure away from her body and turns around.

 

Disha is shocked to see what she sees. She stands there dumb struck. And then says

 

Disha : You…….you…..what have you done? What …….what is all this?

Other person : why don't you like it?

Disha  : Ya…..it's a nice change….but ……but…..why?

Other person : you only said this morning that my beard hurts.

 

And we see our hero Dk all clean-shaven, looking so much younger and cute (oh god I feel like kissing him) and clad in a white transparent chikan (Lucknow's embroidery) kurta and a choridar pajama and leather sandals. OMG he is looking so hot with all his muscles, biceps, triceps etc. partially visible and a shawl on his shoulders. (I can imagine had I been there I would have fainted with excitement).

 

Dk : was it ok now?

 

Disha : oh dushyant you value my words so much! I love you!

 

Immediately sinks in to his arms.

 

Disha : you look very different but very handsome.

 

Vedant sees Disha standing in balcony with a person who does not look like Dk, since its too dark to see his face clearly. He immediately runs inside the house and starts screaming for Disha. Sumitra comes out

 

Sumitra : what happened beta, why are you calling Disha like that?

Vedant : you wait here badi mom, there could be an intruder here. Disha!

 

Disha comes down alone.

 

Disha : what happened Vedant?

Vedant : who were you standing with at the balcony Dish?

Disha : Dk!

Vedant : don't lie Dish. That man was not brother.

Disha : why would I lie he was Dk…..

Vedant : Can't be because Brother has a beard and he never wears Kurta .

 

Dk enters from behind Sumitra  ad Vednt and holds them like not allowing them to look at him.

 

Dk : yes Disha answer Vedant who were you with?

Disha : Vedant just look at him first.

Dk : why should they? First you tell us the truth. Since when all this is going on?

Disha : shut up Dk! Mummyji look at him please.

 

Both of them turn around to see Dk totally different. They all start laughing. Vedant apologizes to Disha. D's leave for the Ghazal night.

 

At the venue the show is in the open it gets cold and our D's share the Shawl (so sweet). Dk hold Disha's hand inside the shawl. Disha makes him leave her hand and puts her arms around his arm and rests her head on his strong shoulder.

 

Dk : Disha what are you doing?

Disha : I am holding my husband what else?

Dk : but everybody is watching!

Disha : let them watch!

Dk : Won't you be embaressed?

Disha : No, jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya?

Dk : oh my Disha has become very open about her love!

Disha : yes when my husband is why can't I ?

 

Both of them smile and listen to the song ' Hosh walon ko khabar kya bekhudi kya chiz hai, ishq kejay phir samajhiye zindagi kya chiz hai?" they look at each other lovingly and the scene ends.

 

How do you like this attempt, do tell me. I know a lot of girls don't like Dk without his beard. But I like him clean-shaven, so those of you who want his beard back, write your own story.

Thanks for all your support so far.

 

Rang 

 

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