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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part-7...payal's daughter Damini dates with Gautham
                                                      always.mihir sees it.he tests
                          whether their luv is
                                                      sincere.he understands that
                          their luv is he
                                                      supports them.
                          payal fixes damini's wedding with another
                                             in the last moment
                          damini-gautham decide 2
                                                      suicide.mihir finds it.he
                          advises them.since there was
                                                      no option,he helps them 2 get
                          married in the register
                          he comes back as if he does'nt no anything.payal
                                                      becomes angry seeing damini as
                          a bride.she scolds &
                                                      neglects them.
                          mihir reveals 2 Arjun that he is the 1
                                                      behind this wedding.
                          Arjun loses his control:u saw
                                                      payal aunty's sorrow?how cud u
                          giv them pain like this?u
                                                      r so cruel.1st day onwards
                          u've been creating problems.u
                                                      r becoming a burden. mihir
                          becomes upset.
                          tulsi cud'nt
                                                      tolerate this.she gets heart
                          attack.she gets admitted in
                                                      the hospital.tulsi becomes ok.
                          Arjun:sorry mamma.i lost
                                                      my control.i shud'nt hav
                          behaved like this. tulsi:its ok
                                                      beta...u plz don't giv papa
                          pain.u no the problems weve
                          Tulsi starts telling their story.they had only
                                                      1 son-yuvraj.he was spoilt.he
                          drinks a lot.he marries a
                                                      rich spoilt girl shefali
                          without their knowledge.when
                                                      they came 2 no,they accepted
                          her.shefali gives b'th 2
                                                      2kids.Vinayak & Bhumi.they
                          were very close 2 their
                          mihir find out that shefali has got an
                                                      extra marital relationship
                          with yuvraj's friend Vinod.he
                                                      tells this 2 yuvraj.but shefali
                          turns yuvraj against mihir.
                                                      yuvraj:how cud u talk like this
                          about my innocent
                                                      wife?what kind of a dad u r?
                          he insults him b4 Vinod &
shefali.both of them enjoy
                          it.unexpectedly hearing
                                                      shefali's words,Y dumps them
                          in the old age home.they
                                                      left india 4 america.they
                          did'nt even enquire whether
                                                      they r alive there.
                          Arjun-bhumika shed tears hearing the
                                                      story.mihir enters the
                          room:get ready tulsi.we'll go
                                                      back 2 the old age home.why
                          shud we giv burden 2 them?
                                                      tulsi cries.
                          bhumika:plz papa,don't go.plz don't leave
                                                      us alone.
                          Arjun:papa,its my fault.i 'm really sorry.plz
                                                      4give me....i beg u.plz don't
                          he holds mihir's
                          mihir hugs A.every1 becomes happy.they start
                                                      a new enjoyable life. Paayal
                          unexpectedly manasvi's uncle calls up
                                                      mihir:yuvraj had called up.
                          mihir was shocked.

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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tunna Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 9:52am | IP Logged
nice Clap Clap Clap ... good u continued after so long Smile Smile Smile
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Part-8....mihir tells:i'm willing 2 giv all my wealth 2
                                                      yuvraj.i guess thats what he
                          wants now.
                          he disconnects the
                          tulsi:why can't he giv us peace atleast now?
                                                      overhearing this,arjun-bhoomi
                          get inside the room. they
                                                      had tears on their eyes.
                          Bhoomi:if ur son comes,will u
                                                      go back?we'll become orphans
                          tulsi cries:no we
                                                      won't go..
                          A-B become happy.
                                                      decide 2 conduct the wedding
                          anniversary party of
                                                      mihir-tulsi.but they did'nt
                          want it.
                          B:we've 2.once we
                                                      were not invited 4 a party.
                          A:in our party,both
                                                      orphans & the ppl who did luv
                          marriage can cum. they
                                                      agree. the party day...all the
                          colony ppl were
                          mihir sang.tulsi danced.suddenly a car was
                                                      shocking that yuvraj gets out of
                          the car.he was seen
                                                      dull.did've a leg.had a
                          walking stick.vinayak-bhumi also
                                                      were there.they cum running 2
                          mihir-tulsi:dadaji...dadima....ppl were shocked.
                                                      paayal:who r they?
                          mihir-tulsi kept silent.
                                                      their only son.but only these
                          orphans gave them luv. all
                                                      were shocked.
                          mihir loses his control:why did u cum
                                                      here?now u insulted our poor
                          children by revealing that
                                                      they r not our children.u r a
                          truble maker.
                                                      weeps:curse me i'm
                          suffering 4 what i did 2wrds
                                                      my parents.i lost my leg in an
                 wife left me
                                                      & went with my own friend.i'm
                          physically weak.i had 2 do
                                                      sum operations.but it did'nt
                          bring any gud result.again
                                                      i've 2 do an operation.i might
                          lose my children
                                                      will become orphans.i want my
                          parents 2 cum with me 2
                                                      luk after them.
                          mihir:so we shud leave arjun & bhoomi 4
                                                      that?they only gave us luv
                          when we were alone.
                                                      vinayak-bhumi:plz cum with
                 papa has becum very
                                                      nice..he does'nt scold
                          us,does'nt beat us. tulsi cries
                                                      in this confused state.
                          Y:arjun…bhoomika…...i beg u 2
                                                      return my parents 4 my
                          innocent kids.
                          she runs 2 her house.A follows her.both of
                                                      them return with mihir-tulsi's
                          B:u both hav 2 go
                          mihir was shocked:what? B:now these kids need
                                                      u both more than us.
                          tulsi:how can u tolerate this?
                                                      A:we'll take it as a sweet
                          dream we had. tulsi
                                                      -mihir hug them with tears.
                          Y thanks them:i dunno how
                                                      2 thank u ppl.u'll go 2
                          heaven. their car
                          cry.suddenly B faints. she was
                                                      taken 2 the hospital. A
                          was feeling difficult 2 face
                                                      others.but others did'nt feel
                          paayal:u r sitting as
                                                      if u ppl hav dun sumthing
                          wrong.we've heart.we don't
                                                      blame u...Manasvi &the DR &
Bhoomi cum out of the room.
                                                      Manasvi:there is a sweet
                          news.arjun..u r going 2 be a dad.
                                                      A was so happy....B
                          was shy.
                          Suraj:now don't
                                                      think that u ppl r orphans.u r
                          going 2 get a child 2 luv
                                                      u. A hugs B.

                          Bhoomika gives b'th 2 a baby.that
                                                      day unexpectedly mihir-tulsi
                          cum there .they were
                          mihir:why?u never expected us? A:we
                                                      dreamt of this beautiful
                          scene.but did'nt hav any hope.
                                                      tulsi pampers the baby.
                          A:where is yuvraj? they become
                          mihir:he left 2 another world.
                          B:and bhumi & vinayak...?
                                                      went 2 school.
                          B:papa...mamma...plz stay with
                                                      us.our child needs
                          grandparents.also a luvly brother &
                                                      a cute sister.
                          A:yes.don't say 'no'.plzzzzz. tulsi &
                                                      mihir smiles with tears on
                          their eyes as a sign of
                                                      willingness. they all hav a
                          happy life again.
                          THE END..

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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tunna Goldie

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very very nice n sweet story......   Clap
i'm waiting for another 1 like this from u....

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