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Part-5......Arjun-bhumika were not invited 4 their
                                                      neighbour Paayal's b'day party
                          bcoz they got married
                                                      neglecting their parents.Bhumi
                          becomes upset. Arjun
                                                      comforts her:when our parents
                          come,all the problems will
                                                      be solved. B:we'll hope 4
                          the best. he:ya. colony
                                                      func comes.the cuple did'nt
                          reach.A-B get
                                                      tensed ,they go out.then comes
                          a car.a middle aged cuple
                                                      come out of the car. A:r u
                          ? the lady:arjun-bhumika?
                                                      B:yes. that lady goes 2
                          B with lots of
                                                      affection. A-B become
                          really happy. the
                                                      man:i'm Mihir.this is my wife
                          tulsi.whose parents we r
                                                      supposed 2 be? B:mine.
                          a:no,mine. an argument
                                                      takes place. the president
                          comes:hi,arjun's parents
                                                      came?angad's dad looks like
                          him only. B:they r my
                                                      parents. the president got
                          embarassed:ya,even they look
                                                      like bhumi. mihir-tulsi become
                          the attraction of the
                                                      func.mihir scolds the
                          president 4 taking licker too
                                                      much. A-B get
                          embarassed. a whispers 2
                                                      B:1st day itself dad is
                          like this.oh god! after
                                                      the func they all go 2 the
                          house. mihir was tuff:where
                                                      is our room? A shows the
                          room. the next day A-B make tea in the kitchen.
                          a:i doubt
                                                      whether papa is a diabetic
                          patient.bcoz i've read that
                                                      diabetic patients become angry
                          fast like our dad.
                                                      b:but,we put sugar in the
                          tea no. he:no
                                                      problem,we'll giv them both
                          the kinds of tea 4 our
                                                      parents. she:thats a gud idea.
                          they make tea without
                                                      sugar.they go 2 their room.but
                          they were not seen.
                                                      A:did they go back?
                          B:no way..they go search
                                                      of them. mihir was doing
                          exercise in the verandah.
                                                      A:we had gone 2 ur room.
                          he:ok,we get up early,not
                                                      like u ppl who sleep till
                          noon..u shud get up early &
                                                      make tea 4 us.in the old age
                          home,we get tea early
                                                      morning. B:2morrow onwards
                          we'll giv u tea early.
                                                      tulsi also comes. mihir tastes
                          the tea & spitts it :u
                                                      thot i've sugar problem?
                          B:sorry,the tea ith sugar
                                                      is also there. mihir tastes it
                          & spits it. :who made
                                                      this horrible tea?
                          A:bhumi
                                                      B:no..mihir:then? B:we
                          both made it 2gether.
                                                      mihir:very bad tea.can't even
                          make a proper tea.then lso
                                                      u were in a hurry 2 get
                          married. B starts crying.
                                                      tulsi scolds mihir:why did u
                          make her cry? mihir becomes
                                                      upset:i'm sorry,beti don't
                          cry.i was simply joking.
                                                      tulsi comforts her:u plz go
                          bhumi.i'll manage him.
                                                      A- B go inside. A:u
                          shud not hav cried. B laughs:i was pretending 2 be
                          sad .it was written
                                                      in the book how 2 please ur
                          parents. A laughs. mihir
                                                      tells tulsi:u no,i'm sure that
                          bhumi was pretending 2
                                                      be crying.she was looking so
                          naughty & cute. tulsi
                                                      smiles:ya...A-B were
                          surprised 2 no that tulsi
                                                      had prepared break fast early
                          morning. A was
                                                      searching 4 his
                          shirt:bhumi,where did u throw my
                                                      shirt? she:i did'nt do
                          anything.u careless fellow,u
                                                      might've thrown it out. tulsi
                          comes.they were embarrased
                                                      that tulsi saw their fight.
                          tulsi had his shirt in her
                                                      hand:i'm sorry,seeing the
                          shirt lying down,i ironed it.
                                                      A:thanku mamma,but u plz
                          don't take effort 2 do
                                                      it.i'll be a burden. tulsi:in
                          the morning u ppl r busy.
                                                      so i'll do everything 4
                          u.arjun,its not a burden 4
                                                      parents 2 do things 4 their
                          children. A becomes
                                                      emotional:mamma,u r g8t. tulsi
                          calls them to the pooja
                                                      room :married women shud put
                          sindoor.thats a blessing.
                                                      Bhumi:i did'nt no that
                          mamma.nobody was there 2 tell
                                                      this 2 me. tulsi:its ok.now we
                          r there no.arjun,put
                                                      sindoor on her 4head. Arjun
                          does that. they had a very
                                                      gud pleasure doing that.
                                                     

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part-6.....Arjun-bhumika come back home very late.tulsi
                                                         was praying in the pooja
                          room. mihir shouts:where were
                                                         u?
                          B:papa,we went 4 a movie.
                          mihir:ok,but u cud've
                                                         called up & informed us.we
                          got scared when u did'nt
                                                         reach home at the usual
                          time. A:sorry papa.we won't
                                                         repeat this again.
                          mihir:don't giv urself a chance 2
                                                         tell sorry again.
                          nan:yes papa.
                          the next day,bhumi &
                                                         arjun were busy cooking in
                          the kitchen 4 their parents.
                                                         B:if it was an special
                          curry we cud've bought it
                                                         from the hotel telling them
                          that we'v made it home.
                                                         A :so yesterday's curry
                          was from the hotel?
                                                         B:ya...u thot i made
                          it?very funny....their
                                                         cooking was very funny &
                          awkward.so tulsi comes & helps
                                                       them.they were embarassed.   
                          tulsi :2day's prepration is
                                                         by our children.
                          mihir:ya..i understood.not at all
                                                         tasty.
                          A-B got embarrased. B:papa,i only made this
                                                         veg curry.
                          he:very bad.
                          A laughs.bhumi gets
                                                         angery.
                          A:papa,chappathi is made by me.
                          he:seems 2
                                                         be stale & the taste is
                          better not 2 tell.
                          B
                                                         laughs.
                          mihir tells them 2 make certain curries 4 them.
                                                       B:we'll make anything..
                          mihir teases:don't make
                                                         anything...make only food.
                          the next day ,mihir goes 2
                                                         A 's company.he sees the
                          manager scolding sum models
                                                         4 not doing their job
                          properly.they start crying.mihir
                                                         felt sympathy .he fights 4
                          the girls. the manager feels
                                                         bad.A sees it & pulls
                          his dad back.
                          he:i'm sorry
                                                         sir.this is my dad.
                          manager :u plz take ur dad out.
                          A
                                                         :whats this papa?
                          mihir:i felt sad 4 he girls.thats
                                                         why.sorry...
A pretends 2 be angry:papa,don't giv
                                                         urself a chance 2 tell sorry
                          again.
Arjun laughs.mihir also laughs
                                                          

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