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LOVE A SACRIFICE--FANFIC TIA RANVEER (Page 3)

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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 11:09am | IP Logged
THANX GUYS FOR SUCH COL EDBACK

R:- TIA KYA AAPKO YE PLACE YAAD HE YAHAN HUM AUR AAP..................LEKIN AB TO SAB CHANGE HO GAYA HE NA

T:- LEKIN AB AB KYA R TIA KO SAMJAH NAHI AAYA ..........ABHI KUCH CHANGE NAHI HUA R TUM AISA KYU KEH REH HO

R:- YE AAP KEH RAHI HO.........AAP NE HUMPE DOUBT KIYA...........AAAPSE TO ACHI SHY HE UNHONE TO HUME HOSLA DENA CHAHA...........

T FEELS JEALOUS.SHE STARTS CRYING ...............:- KYA HAMRA US ISLAND PE DIYA GAYA VADA ITNa JALDI TUT JAYEGA KYA HAMARA PYAR ITNA WEAK HAIN

Cry Cry Cry
PLZ R TUM T KO EK BAAR MAAF KARDO PHULEEZ.......
T IS IN VERY BAD POSITION R FEELS VERY SORRY AND STARTS TO GO TOWARDS TIA BUT STOPS HIMSELFS..........

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awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont
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its awesome Clap but just one suggestion.
please dont write in capitals,its kinda difficult to read Ouch
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 1:23am | IP Logged
sorry pepole for late fanfic
but my exams going on so i hope u can understand

ranveer reaches maurya leaving tia in park
shy sees this and is very happy
tia comes after sometime and directly goes to her room ranveer sees this and he moves towards her room but shy comes and starts talking for the elections

tia was crying in her room and she was on opp side of the door
she listened r saying to shy :-
hame tia se kaam he aap jaieye hum aate hain

t:- r ek baar tia se milne aa jao ......tia ko ek chance to do...............crying

r then goes with shy

all r their in crowd for election.......and r sees for t
and t was not in that crowd......



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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 1:49am | IP Logged
awesome plz continue
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 1:55am | IP Logged
TIA IS WITH HER ANGELS AND R IS WITH ASHI,SHY AND VARUN IN THE CANTEEN.
t and r sees each other .t was not looking well r started to move towards t but t starts going r feels very hurted

AFTER 1-2 DAYS T BECOMES ILL AND R IS YERY UPSET
HE COMES TO MEET HER SHE IS SLEEPING
HE SITS BESIDES HER AND TEARS STARTS FALLING FROM HIS EYES.HE KISSES HER ON HER FOREHEAD AND TIA WAKES UP

SEEING THIS RANVEER FEELS GUILTY

T:- R KYA TUMSE BAAT KARNE KE LIYE TIA KO ITNA BIMAR HONA PADEGA TO TIAS GOD TIA KO NAHI JINA HAI

R:- TIAAAAA YE AAP KYA KEH RAHI HE AGAR AAP KO KUCH HO GAYA TO HUM APNE AAP KO MAAF NAHI KAR PAYENGE AND JI BHI NAHI PAYENGE



Edited by hiral - 05 April 2006 at 1:57am
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