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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 73)

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omg I love you guys! lol. Thank you !!! I dont have time to update today, but definately by sometime Thursday night. So hang in there, bye!

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great!!! thursday!!!...awww but i dont hav interent!!!! Cry ...im gonna b going to uni!!! Cry Cry Cry ...ohh well plz do post a longgggg part on thurs will read n post comments on fri!!!! Tongue ....cant wait!!! hehehe Embarrassed
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please continue soon Cry Cry i luv this story line Clap Clap Clap
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Originally posted by amneetkaur_24

omg I love you guys! lol. Thank you !!! I dont have time to update today, but definately by sometime Thursday night. So hang in there, bye!

dats great news Big smile Big smile Big smile continue soon Embarrassed
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~The Incomplete Love Story~
Kripa was setting breakfast. Zaib came hoping to talk to Kripa alone.
K- Hey
Z - hey Kripa, I'm sorry about last night, I had no idea Aryan was listening---
K- It's not your fault Zaib, I mean, one day or another the truth would have got out, better now then later
Z- Still, that's not the way he should have found out
K- Your right, but that's the way he did find out, he's going to have to deal with it, and I'll help him
Z------
K- So anyways, wheres your dad?
Z- He was on the phone with some business people
K- oh okay
Z- wheres Aryan and Esha?
K- They're both sleeping, I didn't want to wake them up
Zaib nodded.
Yash came into the kitchen.
Y- I called the airline tickets people, our flight is in the evening
Zaib didn't want to go, his heart ached at the thought of just staying away from "his" family.

Kripa set breakfast and the three set to eat.
Y- So Kripa, I bet it was hard raising your kids as a single parent.
K- Yeah, I mean its hard without a father
A rush of guilt spread across Yash's face.
Z- Dad, Dad, DAD!
Yash- huh?
Z- Are you okay?
Y-Yes, I'm, I'm absolutely fine
K- Would you like more juice?
Y- No thanks

After breakfast Yash was on his laptop, but he was more lost in his thoughts then actually working. Kripa went to her room and checked on Esha, she was awake now. Kripa picked her up. She was about to take her to the bathroom, but instead sat on the bed. Kripa looked at Esha's innocent face.
K- So you said "daddy" the other day?
Esha- da-ddy chu ma ka
K- That's one thing I never thought of you saying at such a young age
Esha- mama
K- I love you Esha, I'm sure if Angad was here he would be saying the same
Zaib was at the door he welcomed himself in and sat next to Kripa.
Z- Kripa
K- yes?
Z- I think.....
K- What?
Z- I think I have feelings for you
Kripa was shocked. She didn't know how to react other than that.

K- Come again?
Z- I have feelings for you Kripa
K- ohhhhh no you don't
Z- I do, I know I do.
Kripa got up and stood up. Her heart rate was increasing.
K- What are you talking about! Where the **** did these so called "feelings" come from?
Kripa put Esha in her crib again and faced Zaib.

Zaib went close to Kripa, Kripa backed away until she hit the wall. Zaib came so close to her that he could feel her warm breathe hit his face.
K- Zai-----

Before she could finish he locked lips with her. His tongue touched hers and they exchanged spit. Kripa knew it was wrong, but she couldn't resist. Her legs got weak and she held him for support. Zaib's arms were around her waist. He was now fully aware he was indeed in love with her.

~~~PROMO~~~
Kripa got up and brought the first aid kit, she had to bandage his leg, he probably cut it against the sharp part of the chair. Kripa pulled up his jeans. She was shocked to see a large scar on Zaib's leg next to his scar..... in the same place Angad had gotten his surgery.


Okay so I got time to update a short part today. Hopefully you enjoyed it. I hope you also liked the promo. Keep reading!!!


Edited by amneetkaur_24 - 27 September 2006 at 5:10pm
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Posted: 27 September 2006 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
great part and promo
Zaib is Angad
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Posted: 27 September 2006 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG YAY!! hes ANGAD im soooooooooooooooooo happy!!! thanks soooo much!!! i was soo sad thinkin that angad really died!!! im soo excited! continue soon!

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