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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 61)

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~The Incomplete Love Story~

Kripa put Esha, her daughter to sleep. Esha was one year and three months old. She was gorgeous, she looked just like Kripa, but Kripa had to admit she had Angad's eyes. Kripa laid her down in her carriage and moved towards downstairs. She searched for Aryan, she knew he must be hungry. Kripa saw him sitting by the tv.

K- Aryan honey, I'll be right back with a sandwich for you? What kind do you want?
K- Okay, well your choices are ham and cheese or turkey?
K- Okay ham and cheese it is.

Kripa went to the kitchen and made him his sandwich and poured some orange juice for him.

K- Here Aryan
Kripa laid the plate down in front of him. He didn't pick it up.
K- Come on Aryan, eat it.
Aryan didn't budge.
Finally Kripa picked it up and fed him.
K- How long will this go on for? Your not Esha, I can't do everything for you now can I Aryan?
K- I don't even know why I try making you talk to me.....If you love me talk to me Aryan, please.
K- I'm sick of this! It's been two years, he's not coming back! He left us, why can't you understand that!
Kripa had tears in her eyes as she watched Aryan sit in his wheelchair in the same position, silent. She sighed.
K- Sorry Aryan, but I'm your mom, even I wish to see my son playing like other kids, talking, laughing, smiling....but all you do is sit in your wheel chair all day, you don't talk to anyone, you don't smile, laugh, play,......why beta? Am I not enough for you? You only love Angad, not me?
Kripa turned around she didn't want to break up like this. She turned around Aryan was in the same position, silent.

K- Doctor Suman, whats going on? My son hasn't talked, walked, or moved for two years.
Doc- Kripa, I won't lie to you, he's lost the will for doing anything, it's probably from shock of hearing that his father left him, we can't do anything until he has motivation to do anything himself.
----------FLASHBACK ENDS----------

Kripa wiped her tears away. She picked the sandwich back up and fed Aryan.
K- You know Aryan, tomorrow we'll go see a movie. I'm not sure what new movies are out, but I'll find a good one.
Kripa wiped Aryan's mouth and put the plate down after she finished feeding him.

Kripa rolled Aryan's wheel chair to his room.
K- She brushed his teeth and changed his clothes into his pajamas and put him in bed.
K- Your birthday is in a few days Aryan, we're going to have a great time. We'll invite your friends, we'll have a great party, it'll be really fun. I'm still looking for the perfect present to give you, I haven't found it yet, but I'm sure I will. Good night darling, sweet dreams.

She switched off the lights and checked on Esha, who was still sleeping. Kripa slowly left the room and went downstairs and sat down on the couch. She instantly got back up when she heard a doorbell.

K- Hey how are you guys?
- Good
K - Where's Diya?
   - She's at one of her friends' sleepovers.
K - Oh okay, well come in
The two sat on the couch and Kripa went and made coffee for them and herself.

- Kripa wheres Aryan?
K- Priya, he's sleeping.
Priya- Oh okay
Prithvi- I hope he gets better soon, you went to the doctor the other day, what did they say?
K- The same thing, he can't get better until he has the will to.
Priya- I'm sure one day he'll get better
K- Thanks
Prithvi- Esha's sleeping?
K- Yeah
Prithvi's phone rang so he had to leave.

Priya- Kripa I'm your friend right?
K- Of coarse Priya, what kind of question is that
Priya- Then I want to give you honest advice. Kripa, I think Aryan and Esha are both young, they need a father Kripa, you should start dating again or remarry.
K- Priya, I can't forget him. I can't move on
Priya- Kripa, life doesn't stop when someone leaves, maybe with a love of a father Aryan will get out of his misery
K- He doesn't need just a father, he needs Angad, who won't come back.
Priya- Do yourself a favor and at least just think about what I said okay?
Kripa nodded her head.
Priya- I'll see you later, bye
K- Bye
Kripa smiled as Priya left.

Yes Priya was back in Prithvi's life. Kripa was the one who got them back together after Angad left. On top of everything, it turned out Priya never got an abortion, she had a daughter names Diya, Prithvi's daughter. This added to Prithvi's happiness. Prithvi started to love Priya and was happy with his new life. He changed Aryan Enterprise to Aryan and Diya Enterprise on Kripa's request. Diya was a couple of months younger than Aryan. She knew what happened and was smart enough to understand Aryan's state.

Kripa went to bed remembering everything that happened two years ago, the day he went to go pick up Aryan from school.( This is picking up from my last part when Angad went to go pick up Aryan.)

Kripa got a call on her phone so she picked it up.
K- Hello
Ary- Mom
K- hey, whats up?
Ary- Mom, dad hasn't came to pick me up yet.
K- He hasn't? He should have been there half an hour ago, but don't worry I'll call him and if he doesn't pick up then I'll come, okay?
Aryan- Okay bye
K- Bye

Kripa called Angad but he didn't pick up, so Kripa went and picked up Aryan.
K- Sorry you had to wait, I don't know where Angad went
Aryan- That's okay, but dad is going to have to make it up to me.
Kripa smiled.
She sped up when the highway approached.
K- So what did you do today?
Aryan- Nothing much, the first day the kids just meet each other and stuff.
K- True....Great traffic!
Ary- I think theres an accident up there
K- Yeah it's probably bad, look at all the police
As they passed the accident slowly they got a closer view. It seemed as if the car hit the side of the bridge, the front window of the car was shattered.
Ary- Mom......
K- Yeah honey
Aryan- Doesn't that look like dad's car?
Kripa froze when she read the license plate number. She put the car in park in the side of the road. She waited for Aryan and went over to the car.

Police Officer- Yes Ma'am?
K- umm who was driving this?
PO- Well we found a cell phone in the car, Angad Khanna

Those words rung in Kripa's ears haunting her. She had tears in her eyes.
K- Where is he?
PO- Who are you?
K- I'm his wife...where is he?
PO- I'm sorry but the body flew into the river.
K- The body?
PO- Well there was no way he could have survived the accident is too bad....and even if he does he's probably unconcious right now, this river leads to the ocean, he would probably drown or get eaten by a shark---
K- Shut up! At least try to find him!
PO- We've been trying...we still are

Three days had past and the police had no report of where Angad was, they shut the case saying he was dead. When Aryan heard the confirmation of Angad's death he froze. He never walked nor talked again. Kripa would cry herself to sleep. Though after Esha's birth she promised herself to be strong for her kids. Kripa had hope everyday he would come, but he didn't, she started to believe maybe he was dead. Prithvi and Priya told her if he was alive he would have came back, so its evident he's not.
---------FLASHBACK ENDS--------------

Kripa went to the window and looked at the stars and moon.
K- God, how could you be so cruel to us? What did we ever do to you? We all believed in you, we trusted you, but you broke it. You took Angad away from us.
Kripa saw a shooting star. She closed her eyes and made a wish.
     "Bring back our happiness, bring back Angad, Aryan will get better, Esha will get to meet her father, I will get my love back and my children's happiness. Please bring back Angad."

Kripa woke up next morning hearing Esha crying. She went to her and held her.
K- What's the matter sweetheart, are you hungry?
Esha- Ga
K- I'll take that as a yes. Kripa went to the kitchen holding Esha in one hand and making her milk in the other.
After feeding Esha Kripa bathed her and changed her clothes.
K- Now we have to go wake up your brother
Esha- Gu ge
K- Yes I love him too

K- Aryan sweetheart time to wake up.
Aryan opened his eyes, with no facial expression. This saddened Kripa. But she put a smile on.
K- Look Aryan, Esha got up before you.
Aryan's gaze shifted toward's his sister.
Kripa laid Esha in the middle of the bed and put blankets around her to make sure she wouldn't fall off.
K- Okay Aryan sweetheart time to get ready.
Kripa got Aryan ready and headed to the living room with both. Esha was in her play pin. Kripa made Aryan breakfast and was feeding him and watching the news.

- Good morning New York and I am Tracy Lenn here to bring you your daily updates. Most of New York is going crazy today to meet the man on whom woman die on, the man who has stolen every girl's heart, yes I am talking about the one and only famous singer Zaib!

Kripa instantly froze when she heard that name. Zaib was Angad's newspaper name. She instantly thought, "no it's just a coincidence, don't get your hopes up."

Yes you can meet him today because he will be coming to New York today and will be here in Manhattan, signing autographs in half an hour at La Rochelle.. Next we move on to our daily traffic scope....

Kripa tried to act normal. She didn't want this news to get to her. She constantly told herself "It's not him."

I hope you liked it. Yes this story took a leap because it was either that or end it, and I don't want to end this fan fic. lol. Thanks for the awesome comments last time, they rocked! Tell me if you liked this part and be sure to comment!
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omg i cant believe wats happened u no how to give sum1 a shock and i bet zaib is our angad anyways great part
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