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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 6)

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Damn gud

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plz next part jaldi update karna juz cant wait LOL
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Originally posted by taniya_22

I just read your story...itz fabulous...I love the whole storyline and everythingSmile...actually I'm inspired by itWink....I also want to know did you tell us yet why they are divorced or not yet???Confused I'm lovin this story....plz cont. soon...ur doin an awesum job...Clap
Taniya

Thanks so much everyone for the compliments! & oh yeah, i havnt told why they're divorced yet, but believe me I will. I'll try to continue today also. Thanks for reading my fan fic!

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Clap i love it
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hey plz plz plz continue soon...that was really good...and sad
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MINDBLOWING, AWESOME JUST TOO GOOD PLZ CONTINUE Embarrassed

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 07 April 2006 at 7:27pm
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K- Yeah I know, but I bet its harder on Aryan then its us.
A- Yeah...well We're finally here.
Angad stopped in front of a school. The bell had just rung. All the kids came out.
KRipa and Angad got out of the car. They both waited for Aryan to come out. Finally Aryan came out.
Kripa ran to hug him. He gave her the biggest hug ever. Aryan loved his mom and missed her during the school year. Though, his dad would make his full effort to give Aryan everything, this one thing Angad couldn't.
Finally they both seperated.
K- How are you Aryan?
Ary-I'm fine mom, you look pretty.
K- Well you look very handsome too.
Angad was watching them.
Aryan then gave his dad a hug.
A- Whats up champ?
Ary- I'm good! Wow this feels great!
Angad and Kripa- What feels great?
Ary- Well, everyday all my friend's mom and dad both come to pick them up, today both my parents are here, so it feels great!
Angad and Kripa gave Aryan a little smile.
Aryans teacher, Miss Voilet came over to them.
Miss. Voilet-MV
MV-Hello Mr. Khaana
A- Hi Miss. Voilet.
MV- & who is this young lady?
A- That's Kripa Khaa...
Angad realised what he was about to say. She was no longer Kripa Khaana, She was Kripa Sharma again. Those words ate him up inside.
Angad finished-..Sharma, Kripa Sharma, Aryan's mom.
MV- Well nice meeting you Miss. Sharma. Well I just wanted to tell you guys something. Aryans having a basketball game in a week for his class. It was supposed to happen a couple of months ago, but it got postponed if you remember Mr. Khaana
A- Oh yeah, shoot I forgot!
Kripa- But Angad Aryans going to India with me tomorrow.
Aryan- Oh please mom, cant I stay a week longer! I've been waiting for this game for a long time! Please!
Kripa-But try to understand Aryan, I have a lot of work to finish when I get back to India
Angad- Come on Kripa, its a week, you cant even give a week up for Aryan? He's been practicing for this for a long time!
Kripa looked over at Aryan. Aryan seemed sad. She saw the disappointment in his eyes.
K-Fine, I guess you can stay another week Aryan
Ary- Thanks so much mom! I love you!
MV- Then that settles it, I hope to see both of you there to support him.
Angad- Yeah sure! Bye
MV- Bye

All three of them got back into the car.
K- Angad can you drop me at a hotel. I'll stay there until I go back next week.
Aryan- What mom! Why aren't you going to stay with us?
K- Try to understand Aryan...
Aryan- Please mom for me! Dad tell mom to stay with us!
Angad- Kripa stay with us, its only a week. And I think my house is better than some hotel.
K- Okay fine.

Will this next one week bring Angad and Kripa closer. Why did they have a divorce? Stay tuned to find out.


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wow this is great the story is turing out obviously spectacular plz do continue soon Embarrassed

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